draft#27
Thanks for your design. We like the departure from the theme which is predominating, it could lead to something. As it stands, the concept is a bit too thin.
draft#22
Thanks for your design. We like this very much, our joint favourite, it works well. Nice concept and well balanced. What do you think about experimenting a little to see whether the design can be boosted with some refinements;
- is there any scope to give it some depth (eg light, shadow, tone)?
- font alternative(s) - eg modern but sophistacted and not too fussy?
- size/proportion of the three words, would it work better if “the” was smaller than “centre” and “OT” was bigger than the others?
- Colours - green seems to work well but it certainly doesnt have to be that colour - any other thoughts, bearing in mind our brief?
I’ve posed these as questions, I’d appreciate your creative judgement.
draft#23
Thanks for your design. The proportionate sizing of the words is interesting, and the balance between the symbol and the words, which has become a theme, seems to work well. But the symbol doesn’t evoke anything for us.
draft#25
Thanks for your design. It’s almost there, but not quite somehow. It could almost be a logo for an Islamic centre, the surround is evocative of a half-moon. We’re keen to avoid any religious connotations.
draft#26
Thanks for your design. We love the concept on paper (your words) but somehow it doesn’t quite translate in the logo. It’s a bit too straightforward as it stands.
draft#15
Hi thanks for your design, best so far. It works well, we like the overall concept and the image concept particularly. It should work well on a website and stationary. Our only reservation might be that the colour on the text may not stand out enough. Oh, and we should spell "Center" as "Centre" (Uk). One more thing, you'll see from our website that the place the logo will go has a graduated grey background. Will the 'background' on your logo object be transparent?
Thanks again
draft#10
Hi, thanks for your design. We like the design concept. The graphic and the text aren't at odds with one another, something which most of the designs we've seen have struggled with; perhaps it's the length of our business name and the relative lengths of the words...
We're not sure about the colours or the font. The primary colours perhaps undermine the whole and the font is a little too flat and blocky. It doesnt quite strike the sophistication we we're hoping to see.
draft#11
thanks for your design. The overall design works and blends well with our site and the font is pleasing to the eye. Thanks also for setting it in this context; am I correct in thinking that the logo object will sit over the top of the graduated grey background of our site without us having to blend it in in some way?
Our immediate impression from the logo is 'fun' though, which doesn't fit with what we're aiming to convey.
draft#2
thanks for your design. There seems to be a religious connotation which I'm afraid won't work for healthcare. The design also needs to look rather more 'polished' - professional and sophisticated
Best wishes
draft#1
Thanks for posting a design for us. It's a nice concept. Our immediate thoughts on seeing it is that it suggests an holistic therapy, which Occupational Therapy isn't.
We'd prefer not to have a background as this could make branding of other materials awkward. This also made me wonder whether the grey background on our website, where the logo will sit, will make life difficult for a logo designer?
Thanks
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Porteur du Projet
Thanks for your design. We like the departure from the theme which is predominating, it could lead to something. As it stands, the concept is a bit too thin.
Porteur du Projet
Thanks for your design. We like this too. It works well, perhaps not quite up there with your other design (#22) :-)
Porteur du Projet
Thanks for your design. We like this very much, our joint favourite, it works well. Nice concept and well balanced. What do you think about experimenting a little to see whether the design can be boosted with some refinements;
- is there any scope to give it some depth (eg light, shadow, tone)?
- font alternative(s) - eg modern but sophistacted and not too fussy?
- size/proportion of the three words, would it work better if “the” was smaller than “centre” and “OT” was bigger than the others?
- Colours - green seems to work well but it certainly doesnt have to be that colour - any other thoughts, bearing in mind our brief?
I’ve posed these as questions, I’d appreciate your creative judgement.
Porteur du Projet
Thanks for your design. The proportionate sizing of the words is interesting, and the balance between the symbol and the words, which has become a theme, seems to work well. But the symbol doesn’t evoke anything for us.
Porteur du Projet
Thanks for your design. It’s almost there, but not quite somehow. It could almost be a logo for an Islamic centre, the surround is evocative of a half-moon. We’re keen to avoid any religious connotations.
Porteur du Projet
Thanks for your design. We love the concept on paper (your words) but somehow it doesn’t quite translate in the logo. It’s a bit too straightforward as it stands.
Porteur du Projet
Hi thanks for your design, best so far. It works well, we like the overall concept and the image concept particularly. It should work well on a website and stationary. Our only reservation might be that the colour on the text may not stand out enough. Oh, and we should spell "Center" as "Centre" (Uk). One more thing, you'll see from our website that the place the logo will go has a graduated grey background. Will the 'background' on your logo object be transparent?
Thanks again
Porteur du Projet
Hi, thanks for your design. We like the design concept. The graphic and the text aren't at odds with one another, something which most of the designs we've seen have struggled with; perhaps it's the length of our business name and the relative lengths of the words...
We're not sure about the colours or the font. The primary colours perhaps undermine the whole and the font is a little too flat and blocky. It doesnt quite strike the sophistication we we're hoping to see.
Porteur du Projet
thanks for your design. The overall design works and blends well with our site and the font is pleasing to the eye. Thanks also for setting it in this context; am I correct in thinking that the logo object will sit over the top of the graduated grey background of our site without us having to blend it in in some way?
Our immediate impression from the logo is 'fun' though, which doesn't fit with what we're aiming to convey.
Porteur du Projet
thanks for your design. There seems to be a religious connotation which I'm afraid won't work for healthcare. The design also needs to look rather more 'polished' - professional and sophisticated
Best wishes
Porteur du Projet
Thanks for posting a design for us. It's a nice concept. Our immediate thoughts on seeing it is that it suggests an holistic therapy, which Occupational Therapy isn't.
We'd prefer not to have a background as this could make branding of other materials awkward. This also made me wonder whether the grey background on our website, where the logo will sit, will make life difficult for a logo designer?
Thanks