All designers:
"Making dreams come true" is a theme of the book, but not a tagline/subtitle. If you'd like to add a tagline, please use (including the quote marks):
"Nothing you can touch, can show you what is really there."
Thanks!
Draft #10 is approaching what I'm looking for. Love the idea of her goal being the shaft of light. A musical element is all that's missing. Music is such a key theme to the book (I'm selling with a CD), I really think it needs to be reflected on the cover and to tie in with the title.
A couple of nitpicky items:
- Looks like the girl is in a wedding dress, which doesn't fit the story at all
- The heroine has blonde, curly hair
- Not too thrilled with the red ampersand
I like the lightness and layout of Draft #8. Would like to see another element from the brief included to clue in the reader about key themes in the book: music, dreams, reaching the (shaft of) light, reaching goals.
Draft #4 and #5 are approaching what I want. I like the face, the cabin and deck, the type, and the layout. Not too keen on the line-drawn gramaphone. (The image in the story is a lacquered wooden music box with a rose on the lid.) My main concern, though, is the "mystery" feel to this design. The story is lighthearted, and needs a more happy feel to it. I'll rework my brief to better reflect this.
Draft #2 and Draft #3 are handsome and incorporate a couple of elements I like, but do not capture the spirit of my book. The heroine has curly hair...and the story is lighthearted, not brooding like these images. Please thoroughly read the detailed brief I provided.
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• I'm leaning toward more color rather than black & white...
• I really like the treble clef sign replacing the ampersand.
• Not too keen on the "laser beam" shaft of light. Would rather have a more ethereal, but still strong, "ray from heaven" kind of look
• Like the softer, sans serif fonts used
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"Making dreams come true" is a theme of the book, but not a tagline/subtitle. If you'd like to add a tagline, please use (including the quote marks):
"Nothing you can touch, can show you what is really there."
Thanks!
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A couple of nitpicky items:
- Looks like the girl is in a wedding dress, which doesn't fit the story at all
- The heroine has blonde, curly hair
- Not too thrilled with the red ampersand
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