Working on a cell phone idea. Do you like round, square, or oval buttons?
23 septembre 2010 11:13 sbfounder Porteur du Projet
How about a cell phone, or laptop where the buttons are stores / buildings?
23 septembre 2010 09:26 sbfounder Porteur du Projet
All, I have extended the contest for an evaluation period (and you get to vote!).
Please make sure your final work is submitted by Friday at midnight EST. I can make no guarantee that later entries will be considered, but I reserve the option to do so. We are reviewing the submitted designs internally and with focus groups.
Also, I invite submitting designers to review your own and other designer's work, and add a comment with two (exactly and only two) votes.
One vote for your own best submission (indicate number), and one vote for another designer's best (indicate number) if your submission is not chosen.
Please indicate what you liked about BOTH designs, considering graphic elements, fonts, colors, rendering in various mediums (website, mobile phone, print, business cards, pens), message communicated, uniqueness, etc.
Add your votes as comments to the project, the sooner the better, so we have time to review.
Votes and comments from designers with actual submissions will be considered.
We reserve the right of final decision which may be different from the comments
nice design #54 by danielwatson really professional keep it up good work man..:)
21 septembre 2010 22:24 sbfounder Porteur du Projet
63, 64, 67 - please work on some variety in the building skylines.
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21 septembre 2010 22:16 sbfounder Porteur du Projet
67 - the dashed or hashed area directly under Townstore seems wasted, can it be removed? Also, on the "o" I think the waves on the left "o" should be moved to the right "o". The left "o" should be simpler. The tagline seems too small.
21 septembre 2010 22:13 sbfounder Porteur du Projet
66 - the black area directly under Townstore seems wasted, can it be removed? I like the road on the left. I also like the shorter buildings, but on the right side the heights are too even. Nee to have different height buildings, and maybe an awning store front would be nice (if possible).
21 septembre 2010 22:09 sbfounder Porteur du Projet
65 - seems small, can you make it larger within the frame?
21 septembre 2010 22:07 sbfounder Porteur du Projet
58 - I wonder if the laptop can be implemented so that it works well in various color schemes. As is, it seems like a large black area that doesn't communicate anything, other than laptop, so would and outline form work to get the point across?
21 septembre 2010 22:02 sbfounder Porteur du Projet
58, 66 - please remove the "Shop Now"
21 septembre 2010 22:01 sbfounder Porteur du Projet
61 - Like the idea, but the buildings seem too faint in intensity
I have more designs to upload. Just talked to support and there is a problem with uploads right now. They are working on the problem. I will upload as soon as possible.
Trying to upload some more designs but the site won't let me. I contacted tech support about it. Hope to have new designs up soon.
18 septembre 2010 21:39 sbfounder Porteur du Projet
37 - can you make it initial cap: "Townstore"
18 septembre 2010 21:30 sbfounder Porteur du Projet
27-28 Nice, but please make the "o" in store like the "o" in town. (drop the target)
18 septembre 2010 20:09 sbfounder Porteur du Projet
30 - can you make the phone more abstract ? Not a specific android or i-phone?
18 septembre 2010 20:06 sbfounder Porteur du Projet
21 - Can you add a few more buildings, medium to small size stores on the outside
18 septembre 2010 20:05 sbfounder Porteur du Projet
31-34 Can you make the font weight on "town" and "store" the same? the town side seems too heavy. Also on 34, can you make the capitalization: Townstore - initial "T" capitalized.
18 septembre 2010 19:59 sbfounder Porteur du Projet
All- some of the town silhouettes are starting to look more like big cities than medium size towns. Can we make it look more like medium size towns? A few large buildings and some small-med stores as well ?
18 septembre 2010 19:54 sbfounder Porteur du Projet
25 - can you remove the orange background around the buildings?
15 septembre 2010 21:59 sbfounder Porteur du Projet
I wonder if we could replace the mouse with a laptop keyboard and screen, maybe a cell phone in the foreground, and the town skyline on the screen
14 septembre 2010 22:46 sbfounder Porteur du Projet
Like color in #3 more than #2, these clearly communicate the shopping aspect, but perhaps more should be communicated from our concepts, may also remind me of other logos (ON SALE?)
#1 is clever, but would benefit from more color and adjustment of relative sizes on elements, posturing of text. Mouse should be smaller and town should be larger.
On all, perhaps we need to add a human element, ie the shopper(s)
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Also, I invite submitting designers to review your own and other designer's work, and add a comment with two (exactly and only two) votes.
One vote for your own best submission (indicate number), and one vote for another designer's best (indicate number) if your submission is not chosen.
Please indicate what you liked about BOTH designs, considering graphic elements, fonts, colors, rendering in various mediums (website, mobile phone, print, business cards, pens), message communicated, uniqueness, etc.
Add your votes as comments to the project, the sooner the better, so we have time to review.
Votes and comments from designers with actual submissions will be considered.
We reserve the right of final decision which may be different from the comments
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#1 is clever, but would benefit from more color and adjustment of relative sizes on elements, posturing of text. Mouse should be smaller and town should be larger.
On all, perhaps we need to add a human element, ie the shopper(s)