folder- there is a line in between the P and the F number, please take it off; also space the address, phones, and third the email and website.
brochure- something about the fading is not working. I do not know how you should changed but please feel free to work on some other versions.
thank you for the pricing list- its close to what i am looking for. The size is weird. Can you make it more the size of the brochure. I am looking more for a simple thing, size wise is about 3.7" by 11". The top page should only have something up top like the blue line on the letter head with the little logo that would say pricing. Maybe skip the logo and put the "bringing a personal....." somewhere there
Please make sure the text in the back of the folder is the same font size.
The top pic in the brochure, please give me some more ways of fading it. I like it but would like to see a different version.
please take away the background logo on the folder and letter head (the heart in the middle of the page)
thank you
Also, can you please come up with a pricing list. It should be the size of the brochure, just one page, no folding and it should say pricing with an appropriate picture or the same idea as the folder and the rest of the material. We will add the info on the back of it with the prices at the end.
Please make sure the text in the back of the folder is the same font size.
The top pic in the brochure, please give me some more ways of fading it. I like it but would like to see a different version.
please take away the background logo on the folder and letter head (the heart in the middle of the page)
thank you
Also, can you please come up with a pricing list. It should be the size of the brochure, just one page, no folding and it should say pricing with an appropriate picture or the same idea as the folder and the rest of the material. We will add the info on the back of it with the prices at the end.
sevensky,
the resolution is very bad so I can see the brochure enough to read. Please correct that.
30 septembre 2012 08:35 tatianam Porteur du Projet
#24
The spacing of the selection process is wrong. There should be space between the “driving record line” and “after they pass.” You can move the whole text up a little or loose the pace between the titles such as “selection process” and all others.
The picture on the first page of the brochure is not changed either. Lose the white line and just fade the picture up top. Put the line “bringing a personal touch at the bottom as you did on the folder.
The line in the brochure “Through our services we strive to be part of your family” should be changed to “through our services we strive to be considered part of your family”. The font should be smaller size and cursive like this.
Big picture is not changed either. Please change to the ones I provided in the previous comment with the older woman on it.
The font on the info in the back of the folder should be all same size.
On the business card, please remove the logo and just leave the picture. Please lover the picture so it doesn’t touch the top of the card.
The letter head, logo should be in the far left as it was positioned initially. I like the version where the tool free number and website are at the bottom.
29 septembre 2012 21:14 tatianam Porteur du Projet
#23
brochure, change the inside big photo that goes on this pages with the old man dressed in white to 120876638 think stock.
replace the top photo on the brochure with the 120792007 from thinksotck. thanks
29 septembre 2012 20:56 tatianam Porteur du Projet
the brochure, please work on rearranging the photos, the top photo should be change to a nurse in a home environment with a happy looking elder
28 septembre 2012 17:59 tatianam Porteur du Projet
# 21
I like that you added the selection process but it is too much writing. Please cut out the sentence "We always have a certified nurse available for them to consult with and ask if they have questions or concerns" and the "All of our caregivers are insured."
The top picture, please change to another one that looks like it was taken in a home environment.
thank you
27 septembre 2012 13:38 tatianam Porteur du Projet
It looks better. Few things that need to be changed:
-the fax number is missing
-you can see the logo clearly added to the back of the folder, color doesn't match
-as far as the letter head, try writing the info in one line
thanks
I like the pic with the hands on top of the folder
27 septembre 2012 13:28 tatianam Porteur du Projet
It looks better. Few things that need to be changed:
-the fax number is missing
-you can see the logo clearly added to the back of the folder, color doesn't match
-as far as the letter head, try writing the info in one line
thanks
I like the pic with the hands on top of the folder
27 septembre 2012 13:28 tatianam Porteur du Projet
It looks better. Few things that need to be changed:
-the fax number is missing
-you can see the logo clearly added to the back of the folder, color doesn't match
-as far as the letter head, try writing the info in one line
thanks
I like the pic with the hands on top of the folder
27 septembre 2012 13:28 tatianam Porteur du Projet
It looks better. Few things that need to be changed:
-the fax number is missing
-you can see the logo clearly added to the back of the folder, color doesn't match
-as far as the letter head, try writing the info in one line
thanks
I like the pic with the hands on top of the folder
27 septembre 2012 13:28 tatianam Porteur du Projet
It looks better. Few things that need to be changed:
-the fax number is missing
-you can see the logo clearly added to the back of the folder, color doesn't match
-as far as the letter head, try writing the info in one line
thanks
I like the pic with the hands on top of the folder
27 septembre 2012 13:28 tatianam Porteur du Projet
It looks better. Few things that need to be changed:
-the fax number is missing
-you can see the logo clearly added to the back of the folder, color doesn't match
-as far as the letter head, try writing the info in one line
thanks
I like the pic with the hands on top of the folder
27 septembre 2012 13:28 tatianam Porteur du Projet
It looks better. Few things that need to be changed:
-the fax number is missing
-you can see the logo clearly added to the back of the folder, color doesn't match
-as far as the letter head, try writing the info in one line
thanks
I like the pic with the hands on top of the folder
27 septembre 2012 13:28 tatianam Porteur du Projet
It looks better. Few things that need to be changed:
-the fax number is missing
-you can see the logo clearly added to the back of the folder, color doesn't match
-as far as the letter head, try writing the info in one line
thanks
I like the pic with the hands on top of the folder
25 Commentaire récents
Porteur du Projet
business card
name
first: Tatiana
last: Moldoveanu
Title President
can you do two versions for each card, one should say as tittle president other Care Consultant.
the email used for the president one should be tatianam@thecaringdaughters.com
the email used for Care Consultant title should be the support@thecaringdaughters.com
also, the cord n the up corner of the letter head, can you give me a version of it with white background and regular corners, not rounded?
thanks
Porteur du Projet
the "through our services..." under the mission statement in the brochure should be centered
Porteur du Projet
getting close to the final result
things to change:
folder- there is a line in between the P and the F number, please take it off; also space the address, phones, and third the email and website.
brochure- something about the fading is not working. I do not know how you should changed but please feel free to work on some other versions.
thank you for the pricing list- its close to what i am looking for. The size is weird. Can you make it more the size of the brochure. I am looking more for a simple thing, size wise is about 3.7" by 11". The top page should only have something up top like the blue line on the letter head with the little logo that would say pricing. Maybe skip the logo and put the "bringing a personal....." somewhere there
thank you
Porteur du Projet
Much better.
Things to correct:
Please make sure the text in the back of the folder is the same font size.
The top pic in the brochure, please give me some more ways of fading it. I like it but would like to see a different version.
please take away the background logo on the folder and letter head (the heart in the middle of the page)
thank you
Also, can you please come up with a pricing list. It should be the size of the brochure, just one page, no folding and it should say pricing with an appropriate picture or the same idea as the folder and the rest of the material. We will add the info on the back of it with the prices at the end.
thanks
it looks great :)
Porteur du Projet
Much better.
Things to correct:
Please make sure the text in the back of the folder is the same font size.
The top pic in the brochure, please give me some more ways of fading it. I like it but would like to see a different version.
please take away the background logo on the folder and letter head (the heart in the middle of the page)
thank you
Also, can you please come up with a pricing list. It should be the size of the brochure, just one page, no folding and it should say pricing with an appropriate picture or the same idea as the folder and the rest of the material. We will add the info on the back of it with the prices at the end.
thanks
it looks great :)
Porteur du Projet
the resolution is very bad so I can see the brochure enough to read. Please correct that.
Porteur du Projet
The spacing of the selection process is wrong. There should be space between the “driving record line” and “after they pass.” You can move the whole text up a little or loose the pace between the titles such as “selection process” and all others.
The picture on the first page of the brochure is not changed either. Lose the white line and just fade the picture up top. Put the line “bringing a personal touch at the bottom as you did on the folder.
The line in the brochure “Through our services we strive to be part of your family” should be changed to “through our services we strive to be considered part of your family”. The font should be smaller size and cursive like this.
Big picture is not changed either. Please change to the ones I provided in the previous comment with the older woman on it.
The font on the info in the back of the folder should be all same size.
On the business card, please remove the logo and just leave the picture. Please lover the picture so it doesn’t touch the top of the card.
The letter head, logo should be in the far left as it was positioned initially. I like the version where the tool free number and website are at the bottom.
Porteur du Projet
brochure, change the inside big photo that goes on this pages with the old man dressed in white to 120876638 think stock.
replace the top photo on the brochure with the 120792007 from thinksotck. thanks
Porteur du Projet
folder looks good
brochure, please use actual writing from the website
the top picture still not great, this are nurses that will go int he clients home so we need something that will show that
letter head, maybe put the line above the info instead of the bottom.
thanks :)
Porteur du Projet
can you make some changes to the letter head please.
put the information at the bottom with the line, only the logo up top and maybe write it in one line.
brochure, the pic looks ok but can you give me some other option, also put the "bringing a personal touch phrase" at the bottom
the folder, take the blue line away and just put the writing phrase at the bottom.
business cards, maybe rearrange and add a place for my picture :)
Thanks
Porteur du Projet
i like the folder
the brochure, please work on rearranging the photos, the top photo should be change to a nurse in a home environment with a happy looking elder
Porteur du Projet
i like the folder
the brochure, please work on rearranging the photos, the top photo should be change to a nurse in a home environment with a happy looking elder
Porteur du Projet
i like the folder
the brochure, please work on rearranging the photos, the top photo should be change to a nurse in a home environment with a happy looking elder
Porteur du Projet
I like that you added the selection process but it is too much writing. Please cut out the sentence "We always have a certified nurse available for them to consult with and ask if they have questions or concerns" and the "All of our caregivers are insured."
The top picture, please change to another one that looks like it was taken in a home environment.
thank you
Porteur du Projet
looks great :)
few things:
the brochure, monitoring services repeats twice
The corner above the "about us " is empty
please include details about our selection process.
the pictures are much better
the letter head looks awesome
folder, can you give me a version where the blue line across the front is at the bottom?
thanks
Porteur du Projet
The picture on top of the brochure looks good. I am not sure about the line, maybe take that away and lower the pic
I like the way you organized the info in the back, the line is so and so
On the inside the circle picture is positioned badly, as it will be folded. Also the pic on top left is crossing the border.
the border is a little thick
thanks
overall i like what you included, please add the designs for the letter head, card and folder thanks
Porteur du Projet
The picture on top of the brochure looks good. I am not sure about the line, maybe take that away and lower the pic
I like the way you organized the info in the back, the line is so and so
On the inside the circle picture is positioned badly, as it will be folded. Also the pic on top left is crossing the border.
the border is a little thick
thanks
overall i like what you included, please add the designs for the letter head, card and folder thanks
Porteur du Projet
It looks better. Few things that need to be changed:
-the fax number is missing
-you can see the logo clearly added to the back of the folder, color doesn't match
-as far as the letter head, try writing the info in one line
thanks
I like the pic with the hands on top of the folder
Porteur du Projet
It looks better. Few things that need to be changed:
-the fax number is missing
-you can see the logo clearly added to the back of the folder, color doesn't match
-as far as the letter head, try writing the info in one line
thanks
I like the pic with the hands on top of the folder
Porteur du Projet
It looks better. Few things that need to be changed:
-the fax number is missing
-you can see the logo clearly added to the back of the folder, color doesn't match
-as far as the letter head, try writing the info in one line
thanks
I like the pic with the hands on top of the folder
Porteur du Projet
It looks better. Few things that need to be changed:
-the fax number is missing
-you can see the logo clearly added to the back of the folder, color doesn't match
-as far as the letter head, try writing the info in one line
thanks
I like the pic with the hands on top of the folder
Porteur du Projet
It looks better. Few things that need to be changed:
-the fax number is missing
-you can see the logo clearly added to the back of the folder, color doesn't match
-as far as the letter head, try writing the info in one line
thanks
I like the pic with the hands on top of the folder
Porteur du Projet
It looks better. Few things that need to be changed:
-the fax number is missing
-you can see the logo clearly added to the back of the folder, color doesn't match
-as far as the letter head, try writing the info in one line
thanks
I like the pic with the hands on top of the folder
Porteur du Projet
It looks better. Few things that need to be changed:
-the fax number is missing
-you can see the logo clearly added to the back of the folder, color doesn't match
-as far as the letter head, try writing the info in one line
thanks
I like the pic with the hands on top of the folder
Porteur du Projet
It looks better. Few things that need to be changed:
-the fax number is missing
-you can see the logo clearly added to the back of the folder, color doesn't match
-as far as the letter head, try writing the info in one line
thanks
I like the pic with the hands on top of the folder