Really like how the word 'academy' is wrapped around one of the letters in design #39 but it is slightly hard to read. Maybe we can work around this somehow? Think the black background with white writing is really effective!! :-)
Absolutely love draft #36 especially the black and white with red line design!!
Would it be possible to see it with the logo back in the star (like how the star has been straightened up) and also with the red line not finishing as close to the end outside letters.
Thanks all for submissions so far - try and stay away from it being a little too childish we are trying to aim to the parents also as they will say wherever they would like their child to attend the clinic.
Also any thoughts on a possible tag line - will be greatly appreciated.
Could we see design No'8 with a image of a swimmer across the top like a side shot of the swimmer swimming, maybe with water/waves too and see how this looks stretched to fit across the words Swim Star at the top?
I like your idea here but am not too sure on the rubber ring and star - it looks a bit too childish and playful.
Could we see design No'8 with a image of a swimmer across the top like a side shot of the swimmer swimming, maybe with water/waves too and see how this looks stretched to fit across the words Swim Star at the top?
I like your idea here but am not too sure on the rubber ring and star - it looks a bit too childish and playful.
My reason for a 2 star grade on these is just a feel the designs are quite childish and remind me of certain businesses that use this similar style here in the UK.
The children we are aiming towards are only aged between 10 and 16 but they are children that have the possibility to be serious swimmers.
The colour on design No' 6 in the word swim is ok and would maybe like to see this design with the star the same co,lour or maybe a different shade of blue and the letter t not so dropped. Though keeping the disjointed angles on the letters to an extent is working here I feel.
Thank you so much for your submission and the time you have taken to design the logo. I like the idea behind it - however I don't think the colours are quite working! After a little thought myself I am now basing my thoughts around a more bright vibrant colour combination - something different and fun. maybe like fluorescent or luminous - Also can we bring the words a little closer together I feel they are a little too far apart.
I think this could be a good starting point and take it from there.
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Would it be possible to see it with the logo back in the star (like how the star has been straightened up) and also with the red line not finishing as close to the end outside letters.
Really liking the design though!! Thanks :-)
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Overall just feeling the design submissions so far are not modern enough for the look I am hoping to achieve for the Swim Star brand.
If we could stay a little with more contemporary font styles as well as colours.
I am really liking the idea of a black background and think this could work well and could go somewhere.
Also, thought of a tag line so maybe give this a go also - might help with the structure and layout a little more. Its; '...be inspired'
Happy designing and Thanks!!
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Also any thoughts on a possible tag line - will be greatly appreciated.
Keep 'em coming!!!
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Could we see design No'8 with a image of a swimmer across the top like a side shot of the swimmer swimming, maybe with water/waves too and see how this looks stretched to fit across the words Swim Star at the top?
I like your idea here but am not too sure on the rubber ring and star - it looks a bit too childish and playful.
Thank you!!!
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Could we see design No'8 with a image of a swimmer across the top like a side shot of the swimmer swimming, maybe with water/waves too and see how this looks stretched to fit across the words Swim Star at the top?
I like your idea here but am not too sure on the rubber ring and star - it looks a bit too childish and playful.
Thank you!!!
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My reason for a 2 star grade on these is just a feel the designs are quite childish and remind me of certain businesses that use this similar style here in the UK.
The children we are aiming towards are only aged between 10 and 16 but they are children that have the possibility to be serious swimmers.
The colour on design No' 6 in the word swim is ok and would maybe like to see this design with the star the same co,lour or maybe a different shade of blue and the letter t not so dropped. Though keeping the disjointed angles on the letters to an extent is working here I feel.
Hope this makes sense,
Thank you!!!
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Thank you so much for your submission and the time you have taken to design the logo. I like the idea behind it - however I don't think the colours are quite working! After a little thought myself I am now basing my thoughts around a more bright vibrant colour combination - something different and fun. maybe like fluorescent or luminous - Also can we bring the words a little closer together I feel they are a little too far apart.
I think this could be a good starting point and take it from there.
Thanks again!