#6 I think if we should be able to use your draft on a round bottle, you need to put the "optimal Shine inside the circle under ONE. This will also make ONE stand out as bigger than optimal shine.
#6 is good. Could you do something to it, so that ONE is even more separated from optimal shine? Maybe reduce the size of the "O" in optimal? What about adding a mirror effect on the logo?
#16 and #17 is also both nice. We feel they are a little bit too anonymous. Still it's dificult to say why. Maybe Outline something in it?
#18 and #19 is also both very nice. Here we feel they get a little bit too feminin for the product.
#20#21 and #22 is also nice. Here we are missing some effect that illustrates the shine-effect, and we wish it could have more exciting elements.
#1 has got it right with ONE as it is separated some from Optimal Shine. ONE should be the spoken product! Optimal Shine is just a little bit too anonymous in this draft. Idea is good, but we are hoping for something we have never seen before. But we understand this is not easy. You're missing the tagline!
#3 is very nice!Tagline should be bigger, and
ONE also.
We don't want to give too much directions on how we wan't it to look like, as we are hoping you will help us with that!
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#16 and #17 is also both nice. We feel they are a little bit too anonymous. Still it's dificult to say why. Maybe Outline something in it?
#18 and #19 is also both very nice. Here we feel they get a little bit too feminin for the product.
#20 #21 and #22 is also nice. Here we are missing some effect that illustrates the shine-effect, and we wish it could have more exciting elements.
Thank you all very much so far!
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#1 has got it right with ONE as it is separated some from Optimal Shine. ONE should be the spoken product! Optimal Shine is just a little bit too anonymous in this draft. Idea is good, but we are hoping for something we have never seen before. But we understand this is not easy. You're missing the tagline!
#3 is very nice!Tagline should be bigger, and
ONE also.
We don't want to give too much directions on how we wan't it to look like, as we are hoping you will help us with that!
Thank you so far!
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