ALL DESIGNERS: I would like the tagline shortened to 'The power of recalling past experience'. Also, I would like the pronunciation line to be simplified to "ree-ten-tiv-i-tee" (without the quotation marks. The pronunciation line should be a smaller font, and less prominent than the tag line. Ideally, I would like customers to read 'Retentivity', quickly see the pronunciation to identify the text is in a dictionary definition format, and then be drawn to read the tagline, which is there to explain the tie-in of the name Retentivity to custom slide shows.
ALL DESIGNERS: I would like the tagline shortened to 'The power of recalling past experience'. Also, I would like the pronunciation line to be simplified to "ree-ten-tiv-i-tee" (without the quotation marks. The pronunciation line should be a smaller font, and less prominent than the tag line. Ideally, I would like customers to read 'Retentivity', quickly see the pronunciation to identify the text is in a dictionary definition format, and then be drawn to read the tagline, which is there to explain the tie-in of the name Retentivity to custom slide shows.
22 and 23: The tagline is now too short, but I like the font size, which makes the tagline legible. I would like the tagline shortened to 'The power of recalling past experience'. Also, I would like the pronunciation line to be simplified to "ree-ten-tiv-i-tee" (without the quotation marks. The pronunciation line should be a smaller font, and less prominent than the tag line. Ideally, I would like customers to read 'Retentivity', quickly see the pronunciation to identify the text is in a dictionary definition format, and then be drawn to read the tagline, which is there to explain the tie-in of the name Retentivity to custom slide shows.
I would like the pronunciation line to be less prominent, and the tagline 'The power of recalling and retaining past experience' to be more prominent. (May be difficult to do, I know, because it is long...)
rexboy #1: I don't like the icon; it looks like it is supposed to recognizable, but not sure what it is (camera lens?)
rexboy #2 and 3:I don't like the square icon
rexboy #4: like the icon a lot, and am leaning towards the black background.
rexboy 1-4: I like the cursive font, but it is slightly hard to read. How about a font that is slightly less 'flourish'-y?
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Porteur du Projet
Porteur du Projet
Porteur du Projet
check the entry #22and#23
Porteur du Projet
Porteur du Projet
rexboy #2 and 3:I don't like the square icon
rexboy #4: like the icon a lot, and am leaning towards the black background.
rexboy 1-4: I like the cursive font, but it is slightly hard to read. How about a font that is slightly less 'flourish'-y?