#76
I like the bottom half with the pin and dough but the top graphic is undeveloped and unclear what it is.
The orange is not an obvious baking colour as it appears here.
#62
Easier now to read but the shape is not convincing as a piece of dough. It is too hard edged and the text sits awkwardly
#61
I like the drop shadow for ease of reading and on cap, but
where the band of the cap meets the top part looks a bit sharp and torn.
Use lower-case for the uniquely gluten-free and dash in gluten free.
This text is too hard to read when small also.
MycroBurst permits you to submit unlimited designs with unlimited variations. However, if you show 2 or 3 different color versions of the same logo in one draft, please make sure that if that draft gets finalized, each color version is separated before final files are sent out.
our brand is "tru-dough" and this must be prominent... not just "dough"
the gluten free text looks awkward where it is
the main text could be more dough like maybe by opening the "d, o, g"
the lump of dough with hat looks a bit like a potato
the hat could work well with maybe just the tru-dough text somehow
#20
Do you have another milling or bakery symbol apart from the windmill as collegues seem to associate this with Holland rather than a generic symbol?
Can you find a script which has open characters for the closed ones like "d, o, g " to make it more dough-like rather than like doughnuts which are made from batter?
colour too washed out
bakers cap on dough OK idea but needs refining... too bulky, too bland
disconnect between text and dough mass
repetition of 'dough' not good idea
#18
remove the whispy pointy 'lick'at the top of the logo and give colour options for a baking feel rather than the burnt brown and you are in with a chance
these remaining ones have possibilities but the challenge is to prevent the 'd' looking like an 's' and they need to be more dough like rather than ribbons
Eisaks I like the font.
The logo is promising but maybe too much like gears on a machine.
Maybe different colour for the font.
I love that you are looking for a central symbol.
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Porteur du Projet
Please read the brief more carefully
Porteur du Projet
I like the bottom half with the pin and dough but the top graphic is undeveloped and unclear what it is.
The orange is not an obvious baking colour as it appears here.
Porteur du Projet
Easier now to read but the shape is not convincing as a piece of dough. It is too hard edged and the text sits awkwardly
#61
I like the drop shadow for ease of reading and on cap, but
where the band of the cap meets the top part looks a bit sharp and torn.
Use lower-case for the uniquely gluten-free and dash in gluten free.
This text is too hard to read when small also.
Porteur du Projet
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MycroBurst permits you to submit unlimited designs with unlimited variations. However, if you show 2 or 3 different color versions of the same logo in one draft, please make sure that if that draft gets finalized, each color version is separated before final files are sent out.
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MB/LDG Team
Porteur du Projet
good tight clear design but the graphics really only suggests pastries rather than all goods baked with a dough
Porteur du Projet
Nice concept but text a bit hard to read and sharp edge of dough is disturbing
Porteur du Projet
this dough ball looks more promising
our brand is "tru-dough" and this must be prominent... not just "dough"
the gluten free text looks awkward where it is
the main text could be more dough like maybe by opening the "d, o, g"
the lump of dough with hat looks a bit like a potato
the hat could work well with maybe just the tru-dough text somehow
Porteur du Projet
Do you have another milling or bakery symbol apart from the windmill as collegues seem to associate this with Holland rather than a generic symbol?
Can you find a script which has open characters for the closed ones like "d, o, g " to make it more dough-like rather than like doughnuts which are made from batter?
Porteur du Projet
colour too washed out
bakers cap on dough OK idea but needs refining... too bulky, too bland
disconnect between text and dough mass
repetition of 'dough' not good idea
Porteur du Projet
remove the whispy pointy 'lick'at the top of the logo and give colour options for a baking feel rather than the burnt brown and you are in with a chance
Porteur du Projet
strong design but maybe more suited to chocolate or icecream than goods baked from a dough
Porteur du Projet
love the little symbol and the design overall
we need a better word than 'simple' to show our uniqueness and revolutionary product
Porteur du Projet
these remaining ones have possibilities but the challenge is to prevent the 'd' looking like an 's' and they need to be more dough like rather than ribbons
Porteur du Projet
the font is OK but too bulky and script underneath is hard to read when small.
We probably need a symbol or graphics as well as font.
Porteur du Projet
The logo is promising but maybe too much like gears on a machine.
Maybe different colour for the font.
I love that you are looking for a central symbol.
Porteur du Projet
Porteur du Projet