Draft #6, I like your drawing. It is very Hirschfeld, but the pose seems awkward, and I don't like the tuxedo, and the hat should be a little bigger. Perhaps a script would be better.
Draft #5 - I like your drawing, but I don't like the seeds on the bagel, and I don't like the way the baker's finger goes through the hole. Maybe he could be holding the bagel in an open hand or not at all. I wouldn't mind seeing a script font as well.
I like the direction these deesigns are going. I do not like the black bagel background though, because it looks a little like a tire. I know I mentioned the idea of the baker coming out of the bagel. That is one possibility. I know there is the issue of the white on white if we stick with black and white.
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