1. The silver or gray of "SIMULATION" in the Logo Draft I uploaded is not the actual mirrored, pure silver effect I will be using. I have uploaded another logo for a related business that uses the proper effect. If you can, I would appreciate it if you could change your silver to match the effect used in that logo (but do not use that logo).
3. Please align the telephone number and Email address as follows:
2. The back of the business cards should be blank i.e. white.
Again, no draft was rated on the above. If you have a design rated with five stars you may want to consider making the above changes otherwise don't waste the effort.
Please note: No, repeat no, design is being rated based on fonts or colors. However the finalists will be asked to make some changes in this regard so I might as well tell all of you the changes now.
1. The most important parts of the business card are the logo, my name, and the web address. My name and the web address should be in "midnight blue" with a larger font. I would like to see the web address centered at the bottom of the business card and stationary. All other lettering should be in black.
2. Please use two lines for the address not one line as follows:
3. Please separate the address from the telephone number and e-mail address. I don't like everything "bunched" together.
4. Please use the words Telephone and e-mail (or nothing) instead of "cute" little symbols. The wed address needs nothing.
5. I don't need an excessive number of "Falcons" on everything. Only the letter head (and possibly the back of the envelopes) may have the second version of the logo as a watermark and I would prefer this mark be in a very faint shade of "midnight blue" as opposed to yellow.
Again, no draft was rated on the above. If you have a design rated with five stars by tomorrow you may want to consider making the above changes otherwise don't waste the effort.
Thank you for the numerous excellent draft submissions to date!
I have a few general comments as follows:
1. I have received many, many duplicate or almost duplicate drafts. I suspect many designers are using the same software package. When I go to select a winner and there are duplicates I will have to select the draft submitted first.
2. In the design brief I said keep it "clean and simple". Those designs that adhere to this are being rated highest.
3. I am receiving numerous drafts. Please wait until I can review your work before submitting additional concepts. It will save you a lot of effort.
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Porteur du Projet
Here are some additional comments.
1. The silver or gray of "SIMULATION" in the Logo Draft I uploaded is not the actual mirrored, pure silver effect I will be using. I have uploaded another logo for a related business that uses the proper effect. If you can, I would appreciate it if you could change your silver to match the effect used in that logo (but do not use that logo).
3. Please align the telephone number and Email address as follows:
Telephone: (813) 442-3489
Email: eladlum@peregrinesimulation.com
2. The back of the business cards should be blank i.e. white.
Again, no draft was rated on the above. If you have a design rated with five stars you may want to consider making the above changes otherwise don't waste the effort.
Thank you.
eladlum
Porteur du Projet
Please note: No, repeat no, design is being rated based on fonts or colors. However the finalists will be asked to make some changes in this regard so I might as well tell all of you the changes now.
1. The most important parts of the business card are the logo, my name, and the web address. My name and the web address should be in "midnight blue" with a larger font. I would like to see the web address centered at the bottom of the business card and stationary. All other lettering should be in black.
2. Please use two lines for the address not one line as follows:
11820 Branch Mooring drive
Tampa, Florida 33635 U.S.A.
3. Please separate the address from the telephone number and e-mail address. I don't like everything "bunched" together.
4. Please use the words Telephone and e-mail (or nothing) instead of "cute" little symbols. The wed address needs nothing.
5. I don't need an excessive number of "Falcons" on everything. Only the letter head (and possibly the back of the envelopes) may have the second version of the logo as a watermark and I would prefer this mark be in a very faint shade of "midnight blue" as opposed to yellow.
Again, no draft was rated on the above. If you have a design rated with five stars by tomorrow you may want to consider making the above changes otherwise don't waste the effort.
Thank you.
eladlum
Porteur du Projet
Thank you for the numerous excellent draft submissions to date!
I have a few general comments as follows:
1. I have received many, many duplicate or almost duplicate drafts. I suspect many designers are using the same software package. When I go to select a winner and there are duplicates I will have to select the draft submitted first.
2. In the design brief I said keep it "clean and simple". Those designs that adhere to this are being rated highest.
3. I am receiving numerous drafts. Please wait until I can review your work before submitting additional concepts. It will save you a lot of effort.
Thank you.
eladlum