14 juillet 2011 16:40 brooksdavis Porteur du Projet
mdsgrafix,
Using Draft #18 as the base. Place "wow!" like it is in draft #39, but a little larger. Keep the hand drawn apple placed above the ea in "healthy". The "vending" seems to wash out in the light green. Maybe a darker shade of green on "vending" and the apple leaf.
Thanks.
14 juillet 2011 07:11 brooksdavis Porteur du Projet
I am being drawn to the simple clean design drafts #18, #35 and #39. I would like to see some different sizes and placement of wow! and some color alternatives. 3+ colors are ok.
Hi I would really like to know what you have to say about my logo. :)
13 juillet 2011 13:31 brooksdavis Porteur du Projet
Re: Draft #33, I would like the oval angled with left side lower and right side higher, about the same as the samsung logo. Not as much angle as draft #7 or #9. I have also uploaded and example of the font style I would like to see for "wow!" It is the Specialized bike "S" symbol. It is a felt tip/crayon type effect. A little bit larger font for wow also. I would be good to see "vending" under "healthy" and maybe half sized starting at the l or t of healthy.
Thanks.
13 juillet 2011 07:44 brooksdavis Porteur du Projet
Hi all,
Since we are getting close to the end, here are some things I would like to see in a design (unless I have sent a private message directly related to one of your other designs):
1. An oval in the background. See the Samsung upload file.
2. The oval can be silver, green or orange.
3. "wow!" should be outside of the logo on the left side above in red. "healthy" should be in a color that works with the oval color. Can be white. "vending" should be black or silver.
4. "healthy vending" should be in a simple clean font similar to draft #18 or the fresh health logo upload is another good example. It may be in one word (i.e. without a space between). Prefer vending to be in a smaller font than healthy. Prefer all letters be lower case.
In #24 I added the tagline in this design just to see how it looked. But it can be removed easily.
12 juillet 2011 07:39 brooksdavis Porteur du Projet
Hello, I see everyone is trying hard to get a fruit/Veg in the logo. If it works, ok, but it is not a requirement. I am more interested in a clean bold look. Please review the attached files and the brief, the "Fresh Healthy" is a good example of a subtle use of the fruit.
11 juillet 2011 07:50 brooksdavis Porteur du Projet
Hi prakarevich,
It is my first time working through this format. I will rate and comment vs. eliminate when appropriate going forward.
Specifically related to your designs, actually, I think they are pretty good, but they did not follow the brief. Wow is to be more more of an accent and not the focus word. Basically, wow should be smaller and I see it incorporated more like #13. (I was thinking if I did not eliminate these, other designers would follow with big WOW's.)
The black background did not work for me. The w's in wow looked more like double yy's. I would like the wow to be free of any fruit/veg stuff. If that is included, please do it in "healthy".
Hello, could you may be not eliminate the ones that are designed in the right direction and rate them according to their appropriateness? It helps us a lot
10 juillet 2011 13:17 brooksdavis Porteur du Projet
On the right track with wow! as an accent instead of the focus. Please DO NOT include the tagline. I am looking for simple, clean bold colors and lines. The logo will be used on a large white background. Thanks.
9 juillet 2011 08:35 brooksdavis Porteur du Projet
It has started, Great. Thanks for the drafts. I would like "wow!" to be more of an accent than the focus. Draft #5 is the direction of the "wow!" element. healthy vending is the focus. If fruits or veg's are to be incorporated in the logo, I am looking for a more subtle or abstract version, like in the Sweet Tomatoes logo attachment.
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Using Draft #18 as the base. Place "wow!" like it is in draft #39, but a little larger. Keep the hand drawn apple placed above the ea in "healthy". The "vending" seems to wash out in the light green. Maybe a darker shade of green on "vending" and the apple leaf.
Thanks.
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Thanks.
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Since we are getting close to the end, here are some things I would like to see in a design (unless I have sent a private message directly related to one of your other designs):
1. An oval in the background. See the Samsung upload file.
2. The oval can be silver, green or orange.
3. "wow!" should be outside of the logo on the left side above in red. "healthy" should be in a color that works with the oval color. Can be white. "vending" should be black or silver.
4. "healthy vending" should be in a simple clean font similar to draft #18 or the fresh health logo upload is another good example. It may be in one word (i.e. without a space between). Prefer vending to be in a smaller font than healthy. Prefer all letters be lower case.
Thanks
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#13 and #18 are a start in the right direction.
Thanks for the hard work.
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It is my first time working through this format. I will rate and comment vs. eliminate when appropriate going forward.
Specifically related to your designs, actually, I think they are pretty good, but they did not follow the brief. Wow is to be more more of an accent and not the focus word. Basically, wow should be smaller and I see it incorporated more like #13. (I was thinking if I did not eliminate these, other designers would follow with big WOW's.)
The black background did not work for me. The w's in wow looked more like double yy's. I would like the wow to be free of any fruit/veg stuff. If that is included, please do it in "healthy".
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Looking forward to the next round.