For #122, could we see drafts with the last name in blue (like the first name)? Could you darken the tagline and separate the letters a bit so they are distinct words? We would also like to see drafts with and without the separating line (in green and blue versions) and please darken the "MD PA" so it is more visible.
For #113, could you use a darker blue for the name and try putting the "MD PA" initials above the last "a" of the last name?
For #115, we like the icon next to the text instead of on top, could we see drafts incorporating yellow/orange in the head of the icon and the "MD PA"? Also, could we see drafts with the "MD PA" both where it is and also above the last "a" of the last name?
For #73, could we see the name in blue and the tagline in green? Make the tagline font smaller. Experiment with colors in the curve underneath the people...
For #71, could we see a draft with a slightly darker tagline? Also, please make the thickness of the last name the same as the first name? (it seems like the letters in "victor" are thicker than in "Arboleda")
For #69, could we please see a draft with the icon to the left of the text. We also would like you to change the spacing on the name and tagline so they are closer together. We would also like to see a drafts in different color combinations and also see some with effects like you have it and some icons with solid colors.
For #52, could we see drafts with matte solid colors in the name? Could we also see the tagline letters separated into words? Could we also see the icon to the left of the name?
For #47, could we see combinations of blue/green/(yellow-orange) and also see the tagline in both all caps and non-all caps. We think it looks a little too big.
For #53, we like the color scheme. We would like to incorporate the symbol into the text.
We are sending you a mockup of what we are thinking. Could you please make the name (except the "V" and "A") smaller so the icons come closer to give the impression of an ECG tracing. Thanks
Thank you for your draft. We really like the colors and the icon.
For #42, could you please enlarge the icon and insert the Staff of Asclepius in the middle? We just want to see how that would work...
Also, could you play with the font of the tagline?
For #32, could you please soften the "hands" of the people so they are not so sharp (reminds us of the biohazard symbol). Also, could you please use the Staff of Asclepius (one snake winding around a staff) instead of the Caduceus? Could you try it with different colors? Also, could you replace the red with yellow/orange in the icon and text? Finally, could you use a softer/smoother font for the text? Thanks.
For #34, could you replace the cross with the Staff of Asclepius (in different colors) and replace the gray person with different colors?
For #25, could you incorporate yellow/orange into the icon?
For #23 and #24, could we see a draft that places the icon above the text just to test it out?
We really like the shape of the icon and the use of the initials.
For #16, could you add yellow/orange in the icon instead of the dark color?
For #17, we really like the icon, could you incorporate the yellow/orange in the icon?
Thank you for the draft.
We like the color scheme but could you please add another color of your choice?
Also, could we see a design that contains an icon which conveys a feeling or theme of healthcare?
For #13, we really like the new colors
Could you please make the VA icon look 3D
For #14, thank you for making the icon less linear but could we please see another icon not necessarily resembling initials?
Thank you for your drafts.
For #4, we really like the color combination. However, could you please change the icon to something that does not resemble a heart because that implies a cardiologist. Thanks
For #3, could you add the color combination from #4 and make the icon less geometric. Thanks
Thank you for your drafts, we really enjoyed the Blue/Green drafts with the tagline, and we liked the people holding hands icon better than the initial-based icon because it had more rounded shapes.
For #5 Could we please see and initial-based icon that is a little less linear? Also could you add one more color to the design? (your choice)
For #8 Could you add one more color to the design? (your choice)
Dear Designers: This project has both a logo and business card/stationery element, but there are separate prizes for each project. Only the logo project has launched thus far. The other project will launch once logo is finalized.
Thanks,
Victor Arboleda MD PA
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Porteur du Projet
Thank you for your drafts.
For #122, could we see drafts with the last name in blue (like the first name)? Could you darken the tagline and separate the letters a bit so they are distinct words? We would also like to see drafts with and without the separating line (in green and blue versions) and please darken the "MD PA" so it is more visible.
Thanks!
Porteur du Projet
Thank you for the drafts.
For #113, could you use a darker blue for the name and try putting the "MD PA" initials above the last "a" of the last name?
For #115, we like the icon next to the text instead of on top, could we see drafts incorporating yellow/orange in the head of the icon and the "MD PA"? Also, could we see drafts with the "MD PA" both where it is and also above the last "a" of the last name?
Thanks
Porteur du Projet
Thank you for the drafts.
For #97, could you make the name font not shaded and then darken the tagline font.
For #92, could we see it without font shading, darken the tagline and without the yellow sphere?
Thanks
Porteur du Projet
Thank you for the redesign.
For #77 could we please see the name in all blue?
Thanks
Porteur du Projet
Thank you for the redesign,
In addition to the concept we wrote you about, could we see #81 with the icon to the left of the text to see how it would work?
Thanks
Porteur du Projet
Thank you for your drafts
For #73, could we see the name in blue and the tagline in green? Make the tagline font smaller. Experiment with colors in the curve underneath the people...
Porteur du Projet
Thank you for the redesign,
For #71, could we see a draft with a slightly darker tagline? Also, please make the thickness of the last name the same as the first name? (it seems like the letters in "victor" are thicker than in "Arboleda")
Porteur du Projet
Thank you for your drafts.
For #69, could we please see a draft with the icon to the left of the text. We also would like you to change the spacing on the name and tagline so they are closer together. We would also like to see a drafts in different color combinations and also see some with effects like you have it and some icons with solid colors.
Thanks! We like the icon.
Porteur du Projet
Thank you for the redesign,
The icon to the left is better than above.
Could we please see a draft with the icon from #24 with the solid text of #23 and darken the green a little?
Porteur du Projet
Thank you for the redesign,
For #52, could we see drafts with matte solid colors in the name? Could we also see the tagline letters separated into words? Could we also see the icon to the left of the name?
Thanks, we really like the icon!
Porteur du Projet
Thank you for the re-design.
For #47, could we see combinations of blue/green/(yellow-orange) and also see the tagline in both all caps and non-all caps. We think it looks a little too big.
For #53, we like the color scheme. We would like to incorporate the symbol into the text.
We are sending you a mockup of what we are thinking. Could you please make the name (except the "V" and "A") smaller so the icons come closer to give the impression of an ECG tracing. Thanks
Porteur du Projet
Thank you for your draft. We really like the colors and the icon.
For #42, could you please enlarge the icon and insert the Staff of Asclepius in the middle? We just want to see how that would work...
Also, could you play with the font of the tagline?
Thanks
Porteur du Projet
Thank you for your drafts. We like what you did with the initials.
For #39 and #40, could you please add green,yellow/orange in different combinations?
For #41, could you please add colors of your choice in different combinations? We really like the concept!
Thanks
Porteur du Projet
Thank you for your drafts.
For #32, could you please soften the "hands" of the people so they are not so sharp (reminds us of the biohazard symbol). Also, could you please use the Staff of Asclepius (one snake winding around a staff) instead of the Caduceus? Could you try it with different colors? Also, could you replace the red with yellow/orange in the icon and text? Finally, could you use a softer/smoother font for the text? Thanks.
For #34, could you replace the cross with the Staff of Asclepius (in different colors) and replace the gray person with different colors?
Thanks
Porteur du Projet
Thank you for the redesign.
For #25, could you incorporate yellow/orange into the icon?
For #23 and #24, could we see a draft that places the icon above the text just to test it out?
Thanks
Porteur du Projet
Thank you for your draft. We really like the icon.
Could you please use a softer/smoother font for the text?
Thanks
Porteur du Projet
Thank you for the drafts.
We really like the shape of the icon and the use of the initials.
For #16, could you add yellow/orange in the icon instead of the dark color?
For #17, we really like the icon, could you incorporate the yellow/orange in the icon?
Porteur du Projet
Thank you for the draft.
We like the color scheme but could you please add another color of your choice?
Also, could we see a design that contains an icon which conveys a feeling or theme of healthcare?
Thanks
Porteur du Projet
Thank you for the redesign.
For #13, we really like the new colors
Could you please make the VA icon look 3D
For #14, thank you for making the icon less linear but could we please see another icon not necessarily resembling initials?
Thanks
Porteur du Projet
Thank you for your drafts.
For #4, we really like the color combination. However, could you please change the icon to something that does not resemble a heart because that implies a cardiologist. Thanks
For #3, could you add the color combination from #4 and make the icon less geometric. Thanks
Porteur du Projet
Thank you for your drafts, we really enjoyed the Blue/Green drafts with the tagline, and we liked the people holding hands icon better than the initial-based icon because it had more rounded shapes.
For #5 Could we please see and initial-based icon that is a little less linear? Also could you add one more color to the design? (your choice)
For #8 Could you add one more color to the design? (your choice)
Porteur du Projet
Thanks,
Victor Arboleda MD PA