hello all,
as project manager I will comment in particular draft #25, which I like the most.
but I hope this can be useful for others.
We like very much the idea and the design of the hand on the first letter.
We need some minor edits:
- the "C" letter must be more readable. We tested the logo with some
people and they tend to read not "cibo" but "ibo" as the first letter
seems just a symbol.
- we would like to see the draft also with just one colour (green), so to check if it is better
- we want the final "i" as a simple normal font "i", but with a leave
(just one leave ) over the letter
We would like to see a test for a new development for this logo (this means trying a major edit) .
We would like to see the general outcome of the logo as less "conventional". Now the logo is nice but we want it to look more "creative" and "disruptive".
So, we ask you:
- to try some changes with the dimensions of the fonts
- in particular you could do some changes at the letter "o" in the middle of the logo. You could enlarge the font size till it is as big as the capital "C" and "S". You could try to look it like a seed or containing a seed. We are thinking at the shapes of the walnut seed (which are very peculiar and cool) but please feel free to find the way to reach this "seeds" feeling.
- We like the idea of the hands combined with the fruit. This looks also
like an ethnic symbol and you could develop this on the letter "O" or on other letters too.
MycroBurst permits you to submit unlimited designs with unlimited variations. However, if you are providing 2 or 3 different color versions of the same logo in one draft, please make sure that if the particular draft gets finalized, each color version should be separated before you will send the final files.
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Porteur du Projet
as project manager I will comment in particular draft #25, which I like the most.
but I hope this can be useful for others.
We like very much the idea and the design of the hand on the first letter.
We need some minor edits:
- the "C" letter must be more readable. We tested the logo with some
people and they tend to read not "cibo" but "ibo" as the first letter
seems just a symbol.
- we would like to see the draft also with just one colour (green), so to check if it is better
- we want the final "i" as a simple normal font "i", but with a leave
(just one leave ) over the letter
We would like to see a test for a new development for this logo (this means trying a major edit) .
We would like to see the general outcome of the logo as less "conventional". Now the logo is nice but we want it to look more "creative" and "disruptive".
So, we ask you:
- to try some changes with the dimensions of the fonts
- in particular you could do some changes at the letter "o" in the middle of the logo. You could enlarge the font size till it is as big as the capital "C" and "S". You could try to look it like a seed or containing a seed. We are thinking at the shapes of the walnut seed (which are very peculiar and cool) but please feel free to find the way to reach this "seeds" feeling.
- We like the idea of the hands combined with the fruit. This looks also
like an ethnic symbol and you could develop this on the letter "O" or on other letters too.
Employé(e)
MycroBurst permits you to submit unlimited designs with unlimited variations. However, if you are providing 2 or 3 different color versions of the same logo in one draft, please make sure that if the particular draft gets finalized, each color version should be separated before you will send the final files.
Thanks,
MB/LDG/LS Team