HATTER - The dog looks too much like a cartoon for us. We would like to see an even balance of reality vs. cartoon. We'd like a bit for depth/dimension to him as well. The wording/font should be a little more traditional, too.
ARTSIE - We like the concept you're working toward. However, the colors are too dark, and the overall design is a bit too simple. I'm not sure what else to suggest, just needs some more life to it.
SHARI - No tail, no rope, and still going to need some more depth/dimension to the dog.
KENMORRISON - We don't like the idea of simply animating the picture we provided. The concept of the character should only be influenced by the photo. Not copied verbatim. We also do not like the all red background, or the shape of the overall design.
ATTIDESIGNS - Sorry, it was too simplistic for our needs and too much dead/negative space. We'd like something that is a bit tighter and more like a stamp or seal, if that makes sense. Think along the lines of the Starbucks logo concept, but not necessarily a perfect circle - just a tighter grouping.
SHEMET - We like this one better than your last, but still not sold on your concept of the dog. He still comes off a little too plain, and not real "umph".
DEMONA (#54 and #50)- We don't like the colors, fonts, or the way the dog looks. The basic layout is decent, but everything else would need to be redone.
YUDESIGN (#46 and #47) - The dog needs to be an original design, not a direct product of the photograph we provided. We also are not happy with the overall design. See the comment provided to ATTIDESIGNS.
JP1876 - The dog in your picture is entirely wrong. Take a look at the photograph of the dog we uploaded and indicated that we want to use to base our character off.
Additionally, your design is far too simplistic. I would really suggest you look at all of the sample logo/images we provided that we like. It should give you a better idea of what we're going for.
SHEMET - We like your latest submission (#29). However, in order for us to consider it as a viable option, we would probably need the dog to look a LITTLE bit less realistic. I know that might seem finicky, but it is what we're looking for. We do like the layout, fonts, and colors you used!
IVASTRES - I have eliminated quite a few of your submissions due to them not meeting the main criteria of our design concept (dog was all wrong). I have rated the remaining submissions (#27/28).
Our suggestion would be that you try to recreate the dog that you've used for those two submissions. He needs to be a larger focus of the overall logo. As such, he needs far more detail.
DIRGZZ - This is the best submission so far! We love what you did with the dog! Keeping the general concept of your design the same, could you please provide some alternate color schemes? The coloring of the dog is perfect. However, maybe play with the background color and font colors...
SHARI - We like what you've done with the dog. It definitely represents the dog we have in mind! That being said, the rest of the logo is not what we're looking for. It's too plain and simple for what we want. There should be some more depth/dimension. Additionally, the font size should be increased and maybe even switched up a bit.
CACTUS - Out of the two of your designs, 18 is more of what we're looking for. That being said, there seems to be a lot of negative space in that design. It doesn't feel right for what we're trying to accomplish. However, we do like the font that you used and the color of the font. The dog should have a bit more of a presence in the log than what you've done with it. Greater detail, more color.
FRIESFX - Though you have the basic concept down of what we're looking for, there isn't enough color or design originality. We want more colors, fatter/funner fonts, and more detail on the dog.
FRIESFX - Though you have the basic concept down of what we're looking for, there isn't enough color or design originality. We want more colors, fatter/funner fonts, and more detail on the dog.
AKREATIONZ - Because it did not fit any of the criteria we provided. I would recommend you reread our criteria, as well as view the sample logos we uploaded and, more importantly, the image of the dog we want our character/mascot based off.
BAKOSTAMASS - We'd like more color in the logo design, more vibe, and the dog would need to be changed as well, if we were going to consider it. Though you got the breed (Australian Cattle Dog / Heeler) down, the picture we provided was not a purebred dog. He did not have the scruffy neck. You also have the facial markings wrong.
DOKYUN - Your submission (#6) does not meet the criteria we have specified. Although the dog has a red patch over his eye, it is not the likeness of the picture we provided as an example. We would prefer that it looks less like a cartoon than what you have provided.
SHEMET - The dog in your picture is entirely wrong. Take a look at the photograph of the dog we uploaded and indicated that we want to use to base our character off.
Additionally, your design is far too simplistic. I would really suggest you look at all of the sample logo/images we provided that we like. It should give you a better idea of what we're going for.
ZEGYONAGYO - The dog you came up with is in the top two that we've seen so far. However, your overall design is all wrong (no disrespect, just not for us).
While we appreciate you trying something different with the doghouse, it is not what we'd like to see as a part of our logo. If you could keep the character the same, but change the design up, that'd be great. Take a look at the example logos we uploaded that we like. Obviously we don't want them identical, but it should give you a real idea of what type of theme/concept we're aiming for.
Please be informed that your project is a veiled project and designers are restricted to view only their own drafts which ensure that each design has its own originality however, you being a project holder can see all the designs.
Suggestion: Provide consistent feedback and star rating on designs to attract more designers towards your project.
MycroBurst permits you to submit unlimited designs with unlimited variations. However, if you are providing 2 or 3 different color versions of the same logo in one draft, please make sure that if the particular draft gets finalized, each color version should be separated before you will send the final files.
Thanks for the submission. Still looking for something with more detail, as well as the terminology that I've outlined (which you have yet to include).
None of the items I asked for have been included in this design. It needs to incorporate an actual red dog, as well as the terminology "Red Dog Pet Care, LLC" and "Bonded and Insured"...
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SERGIULAZIN - The dog looks nothing like the one we provided. The marking looks like a hand. Sorry, just not happy with it.
CACTUS (#34) - Dog look too simplistic. We do not like the color scheme, either.
ALGRAPHICS (#52) - Again, dog looks too simplistic. Needs more "umph" and too look somewhat realistic. Not impressed with font or colors, either.
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ARTSIE - We like the concept you're working toward. However, the colors are too dark, and the overall design is a bit too simple. I'm not sure what else to suggest, just needs some more life to it.
SHARI - No tail, no rope, and still going to need some more depth/dimension to the dog.
KENMORRISON - We don't like the idea of simply animating the picture we provided. The concept of the character should only be influenced by the photo. Not copied verbatim. We also do not like the all red background, or the shape of the overall design.
ATTIDESIGNS - Sorry, it was too simplistic for our needs and too much dead/negative space. We'd like something that is a bit tighter and more like a stamp or seal, if that makes sense. Think along the lines of the Starbucks logo concept, but not necessarily a perfect circle - just a tighter grouping.
SHEMET - We like this one better than your last, but still not sold on your concept of the dog. He still comes off a little too plain, and not real "umph".
DEMONA (#54 and #50)- We don't like the colors, fonts, or the way the dog looks. The basic layout is decent, but everything else would need to be redone.
YUDESIGN (#46 and #47) - The dog needs to be an original design, not a direct product of the photograph we provided. We also are not happy with the overall design. See the comment provided to ATTIDESIGNS.
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Additionally, your design is far too simplistic. I would really suggest you look at all of the sample logo/images we provided that we like. It should give you a better idea of what we're going for.
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Our suggestion would be that you try to recreate the dog that you've used for those two submissions. He needs to be a larger focus of the overall logo. As such, he needs far more detail.
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Additionally, your design is far too simplistic. I would really suggest you look at all of the sample logo/images we provided that we like. It should give you a better idea of what we're going for.
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While we appreciate you trying something different with the doghouse, it is not what we'd like to see as a part of our logo. If you could keep the character the same, but change the design up, that'd be great. Take a look at the example logos we uploaded that we like. Obviously we don't want them identical, but it should give you a real idea of what type of theme/concept we're aiming for.
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Please be informed that your project is a veiled project and designers are restricted to view only their own drafts which ensure that each design has its own originality however, you being a project holder can see all the designs.
Suggestion: Provide consistent feedback and star rating on designs to attract more designers towards your project.
Thanks,
MB/LDG/LS Team.
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MycroBurst permits you to submit unlimited designs with unlimited variations. However, if you are providing 2 or 3 different color versions of the same logo in one draft, please make sure that if the particular draft gets finalized, each color version should be separated before you will send the final files.
Thanks,
MB/LDG/LS Team
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