I am very pleased about what I have seen until now, but this is still not where I want it to be. So I have decided to extend the project deadline of an other week in order to receive more proposals from more designers before making the final choice on the logo.
Meanwhile, my comments on the latest draft submitted:
- Draft 61: thanks for making the changes. I am just not comfortable with the D modelization of the tower. Somehow I feel it is not matching with the rest of the logo. Would you be able to use an other modelization of the tower? Maybe different color, orientation view, texture effect? No other changes to the rest of the logo.
- Draft 62-64: Thanks for changing the police. Looks much better!
- Draft 39to44: very original proposals and unseen until now!
- Draft 46: I liked better the style of your draft 16-17. The only issue was with the police of the D-U-B-I. Could you go back to the same but just by proposing a new police for these letters?
- Draft 57: 3 modifications I would like you to make. 1) Center the "O" between th "i" and "n". 2) Remove totally the letter "D" and keep only the Burj Al Arab tower, but in this case maybe you ll need to use an other style of the tower modelization? 3) I am afraid the website adress would be too small and less visible as compared to the rest of the logo. Could it be increased?
I m back online after the weekend and thrilled to see so many new proposals! Comments:
- Ramy20: appreciate all your efforts but all the logo you are proposing are using symbols of dubai/uae rather than landmarks. + the style of the logos would be more appropriate for local real estate agencies types of businesses i feel. You are more than welcome to make new proposals keeping in mind it is for a tourism business.
- Draft 36: thanks for update. See again my previous comment please
- Draft 32-31: i like very much 31. How about the D of burj al arab was for the 2 lines?
- Draft 27: good job, i like it. Could you use burj al arab as the "D" letter?...
- Draft 17-16: i like what you did but not the police used for Dubai. Makes me think of a holywood style police. Can you try sthg else?
- Draft 26: there s a spelling mistake + can the tower fill the "D" instead?
- Draft 25-20: good proposals but style not matching with tourism business
- Draft 23-22-21: i prefer 23 amongst the 3. I like what you did with the "i". What can you do with the "d"? Color combination is not the best choice
- Draft 12-11-10-9: cant see 12-11 on my screen. Can you upload again please. 10 is too simple. 9 is interesting but color code selected not the best combination
- Draft 8-7-6: the idea is there but the eye goes a bit all over the place when reading the logo
Once again thanks all for your proposals. Hope the comments will keep you going. There s less than 2 days to go!!! All the best
Draft#2: getting better. Color codes are not fully as per the brief guidelines. I find black makes the overall a bit too serious?
Draft#3: Good attempt but unfortunately the arabic knife is not really a symbol of Dubai (rather Oman / Yemen). Please try to stick to the touristic landmarks of Dubai.
Draft#4: nicely done. Not very convinced by the brown color though and not sure if the dot of the "i" is supposed to represent a sun? How about the last "i" was the burj khalifa tower?
To all designers, do make use of the DUBAI landmarks/symbols in the design. This is the key to the final logo. Please do also include versions that have the website adress in the bottom
Looking forward to seeing more proposals! All the best...
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Porteur du Projet
I am very pleased about what I have seen until now, but this is still not where I want it to be. So I have decided to extend the project deadline of an other week in order to receive more proposals from more designers before making the final choice on the logo.
Meanwhile, my comments on the latest draft submitted:
- Draft 61: thanks for making the changes. I am just not comfortable with the D modelization of the tower. Somehow I feel it is not matching with the rest of the logo. Would you be able to use an other modelization of the tower? Maybe different color, orientation view, texture effect? No other changes to the rest of the logo.
- Draft 62-64: Thanks for changing the police. Looks much better!
Keep the inspiration going!
All the best to all
Porteur du Projet
My comment:
- Draft 38: much better!
- Draft 39to44: very original proposals and unseen until now!
- Draft 46: I liked better the style of your draft 16-17. The only issue was with the police of the D-U-B-I. Could you go back to the same but just by proposing a new police for these letters?
- Draft 57: 3 modifications I would like you to make. 1) Center the "O" between th "i" and "n". 2) Remove totally the letter "D" and keep only the Burj Al Arab tower, but in this case maybe you ll need to use an other style of the tower modelization? 3) I am afraid the website adress would be too small and less visible as compared to the rest of the logo. Could it be increased?
All the best everyone!
Porteur du Projet
I m back online after the weekend and thrilled to see so many new proposals! Comments:
- Ramy20: appreciate all your efforts but all the logo you are proposing are using symbols of dubai/uae rather than landmarks. + the style of the logos would be more appropriate for local real estate agencies types of businesses i feel. You are more than welcome to make new proposals keeping in mind it is for a tourism business.
- Draft 36: thanks for update. See again my previous comment please
- Draft 32-31: i like very much 31. How about the D of burj al arab was for the 2 lines?
- Draft 27: good job, i like it. Could you use burj al arab as the "D" letter?...
- Draft 17-16: i like what you did but not the police used for Dubai. Makes me think of a holywood style police. Can you try sthg else?
- Draft 26: there s a spelling mistake + can the tower fill the "D" instead?
- Draft 25-20: good proposals but style not matching with tourism business
- Draft 23-22-21: i prefer 23 amongst the 3. I like what you did with the "i". What can you do with the "d"? Color combination is not the best choice
- Draft 12-11-10-9: cant see 12-11 on my screen. Can you upload again please. 10 is too simple. 9 is interesting but color code selected not the best combination
- Draft 8-7-6: the idea is there but the eye goes a bit all over the place when reading the logo
Once again thanks all for your proposals. Hope the comments will keep you going. There s less than 2 days to go!!! All the best
Porteur du Projet
Draft#3: Good attempt but unfortunately the arabic knife is not really a symbol of Dubai (rather Oman / Yemen). Please try to stick to the touristic landmarks of Dubai.
Draft#4: nicely done. Not very convinced by the brown color though and not sure if the dot of the "i" is supposed to represent a sun? How about the last "i" was the burj khalifa tower?
Draft#5: Not quite matching with the briefing
To all designers, do make use of the DUBAI landmarks/symbols in the design. This is the key to the final logo. Please do also include versions that have the website adress in the bottom
Looking forward to seeing more proposals! All the best...
Porteur du Projet