28 janvier 2011 10:20 thedealgoose Porteur du Projet
Ideate – obviously, it is down to a variation of one of yours, unless we get more submissions. After deliberating with partners, we’ve decided we are close, but not quite there. We’d like to see a few more tweaks in this last 22 hours, please. We greatly appreciate it. You do not have to show the black bar for all of these. We’ll worry about that upon final.
#17 and #7 – place the mark that is above “theDealGOOSE” in front of “theDealGOOSE” instead. Then enlarge the tag line to span the entire thing. The tagline should get larger and easier to read.
#7 – we’d like to see what it looks like to have the golden egg from #18 and #17 behind the goose in #7 instead of the circle. Maybe show it straight and tilted a bit.
#17 – enlarge the egg a bit and tilt it a bit. A few versions with different sized eggs and different tilts would be nice.
#17 – take the egg out, put the “o” back in, and place the egg on its side above the “o” as if the goose laid it.
#17 – take the scenario above “as if the goose laid the egg”, but place the goose and the egg in front of “theDealGOOSE” and enlarge the tag line. Try it a few ways making the marks a few different sizes.
These are all the variations the partners asked for. I hope this is just placement that can be done relatively easily. Thank you very much!
26 janvier 2011 09:58 thedealgoose Porteur du Projet
Thank you so far... I have a few requests and one comment for now.
ideate, #7: I'd like to see that version without the mark above, but with a golden egg in place of the second "o" in goose. I'd like it to have depth, maybe with a shadow, etc.
ideate, #7: I'd like to see that version but with the mark you created to the left and/or right of the name, not above it.
ramroum, #16: very fun, but too childish for our business model.
ramroum, #16: I do like the way you highlighted "free" by placing it in a tag...if you want to take a stab at a more corporate feel.
Thank you, all. Good stuff so far. Looking forward to the rest.
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#17 and #7 – place the mark that is above “theDealGOOSE” in front of “theDealGOOSE” instead. Then enlarge the tag line to span the entire thing. The tagline should get larger and easier to read.
#7 – we’d like to see what it looks like to have the golden egg from #18 and #17 behind the goose in #7 instead of the circle. Maybe show it straight and tilted a bit.
#17 – enlarge the egg a bit and tilt it a bit. A few versions with different sized eggs and different tilts would be nice.
#17 – take the egg out, put the “o” back in, and place the egg on its side above the “o” as if the goose laid it.
#17 – take the scenario above “as if the goose laid the egg”, but place the goose and the egg in front of “theDealGOOSE” and enlarge the tag line. Try it a few ways making the marks a few different sizes.
These are all the variations the partners asked for. I hope this is just placement that can be done relatively easily. Thank you very much!
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ideate, #7: I'd like to see that version without the mark above, but with a golden egg in place of the second "o" in goose. I'd like it to have depth, maybe with a shadow, etc.
ideate, #7: I'd like to see that version but with the mark you created to the left and/or right of the name, not above it.
ramroum, #16: very fun, but too childish for our business model.
ramroum, #16: I do like the way you highlighted "free" by placing it in a tag...if you want to take a stab at a more corporate feel.
Thank you, all. Good stuff so far. Looking forward to the rest.