dany96... thanks for the new iteration. looks really good. i like that the entire design has the same margin. that block-feel looks strong...
... the two creative symbols ... above the 'i' and beside the 'c' i'm not too crazy about ....
... i'm hispanic and i wonder if the letters 'i' were aligned in the design and they were both exclamation marks... the top being the English mark: !
and the bottom being the Spanish version: ¡
the dots on both marks would almost be touching...
as for the creative symbol to the left of the word 'creative' ... i wonder if there's a graphic element that can make the word 'creative' pop forward?
i love what you did with the TABLES ARE TURNING MEDIA logo... if feels like it's going to spin off the screen.
thanks for your work on this... i hope you'll find time for a new iteration.
samwoofer... thank you very much for your submission. my immediate reaction was very positive. the design jumped off the screen.
the logo is cool... there's perspective issues, though. seems like the camera looking at the crescent waves is from the sky... but the camera looking at the bulb that is generating the crescent waves is just slightly above the horizon... the bulb's shadow should also feel more oblong...
... the font on the name is jumps, but i do not like all caps... i like the lower case approach, because it fits my personality better: coach, mentor... not searching for credit.
nice work!
aldo
topdesigns.... WOW.... very nice! i like it... a lot. .... .......
......... i'm trying to offer ideas on how to tweak and improve, but..... i can't... it's really good!
aldo
Parksdesign... excellent revisions to the design. impressive. love the beveled look to the pyramid. almost looks like the pry could take the place of the 'a' in a. gandia... but, i really like the lower case 'a.'
there does it appear to be an inconsistency with the black shadowing on the pyramid and the shadow source... perhaps that is because the beveling is inconsistent
finally, regarding font... the 'g' should be lower case... the font choice on both the name and creative ........... perhaps, could be different... not quite popping. although i like the change on the creative - a lot.
Parksdesign... thank you for your submission. my original reaction was: i like it a lot. upon closer inspection it needs further tooling. suggestions:
- pyramids are so overused, but there's possibilities with this because with some tinkering it could feel 3Dish
- the designs within the pyramid feel a lil haphazard, I wish it could feel like it had meaning
- too much space between the pyramid and the lettering
- the font on 'creative' should serve as a shadow of the pyramid - meaning the angles of the first and last syllables should be inward
thank you for your submission... i thought it was a very good first iteration.
aldo
topdesigns... after showing your work to a few people it's clear that your second submission generated the most positive buzz. i've re-evaluated it and asked myself why was my first impression... less than excited.... i think it's because WOW is missing. If you are going to continue to work on this - and I hope you do - I'd focus your next iteration(s) on #2. Again, thank you for your efforts!
dany96... really liked your latest submission. the simplicity. a.gandia pops. again, your treatment of 'inform, engage...' works well. the creative is lost in the letter i. i wonder if it would work better under 'inform, engage...' in the same type of 'a.gandia?'
i like using the letter 'i' for a graphic element that tells our story of innovation.... whether it's how we dot it or how we treat the entire letter. perhaps, the letter 'i' in both gandia and creative are treated the same way.... thinking out loud.
sangomma... thank you for your submissions. There is a simplicity to your designs that I like. The crown-like symbol above the 'a' does not work. The font ... the entire design has a regal feel to it. That's not me. I'm urban. Edgy. I'll wear a suit... with jeans or sneakers.
Hope that helps and that you submit another idea.
dany96.. thank you for your submission. Excellent use of "inform, engage..." Don't care for the period after "a." It looks weird. Cool idea to have "creative" upside down, but not quite working. Thank you, I hope you will submit other iterations.
Aldo
TopDesigns... thank you again for your continued work. My favorites are the last two designs you submitted and number four. How you integrated "inform, engage..." is cool. I'm concerned it will be lost, though, when used in most cases.
Thank you kindly for these designs. I really like how the letter "i" is dotted in Number Two. It's a memorable exclamation. The internal marketing theme of the company is: "inform. engage. inspire." we also try and look for innovative solutions to communication problems. Overall, I think the designs do not quite capture the essence of what we strive for.
I hope you topdesigns will further their thinking on these designs.
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... the two creative symbols ... above the 'i' and beside the 'c' i'm not too crazy about ....
... i'm hispanic and i wonder if the letters 'i' were aligned in the design and they were both exclamation marks... the top being the English mark: !
and the bottom being the Spanish version: ¡
the dots on both marks would almost be touching...
as for the creative symbol to the left of the word 'creative' ... i wonder if there's a graphic element that can make the word 'creative' pop forward?
i love what you did with the TABLES ARE TURNING MEDIA logo... if feels like it's going to spin off the screen.
thanks for your work on this... i hope you'll find time for a new iteration.
aldo
Porteur du Projet
the logo is cool... there's perspective issues, though. seems like the camera looking at the crescent waves is from the sky... but the camera looking at the bulb that is generating the crescent waves is just slightly above the horizon... the bulb's shadow should also feel more oblong...
... the font on the name is jumps, but i do not like all caps... i like the lower case approach, because it fits my personality better: coach, mentor... not searching for credit.
nice work!
aldo
Porteur du Projet
......... i'm trying to offer ideas on how to tweak and improve, but..... i can't... it's really good!
aldo
Porteur du Projet
there does it appear to be an inconsistency with the black shadowing on the pyramid and the shadow source... perhaps that is because the beveling is inconsistent
finally, regarding font... the 'g' should be lower case... the font choice on both the name and creative ........... perhaps, could be different... not quite popping. although i like the change on the creative - a lot.
aldo
Porteur du Projet
- pyramids are so overused, but there's possibilities with this because with some tinkering it could feel 3Dish
- the designs within the pyramid feel a lil haphazard, I wish it could feel like it had meaning
- too much space between the pyramid and the lettering
- the font on 'creative' should serve as a shadow of the pyramid - meaning the angles of the first and last syllables should be inward
thank you for your submission... i thought it was a very good first iteration.
aldo
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Porteur du Projet
i like using the letter 'i' for a graphic element that tells our story of innovation.... whether it's how we dot it or how we treat the entire letter. perhaps, the letter 'i' in both gandia and creative are treated the same way.... thinking out loud.
Porteur du Projet
Hope that helps and that you submit another idea.
Aldo
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Aldo
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Porteur du Projet
I will comment in more detail later, but I think these new designs are a step in the right direction.
Porteur du Projet
I hope you topdesigns will further their thinking on these designs.
Thank you very much!