Luc, Thanks so much for your rendering. I like where you're going with this, especially the part where you turn the ^ into the word one^bird. Very interesting.
I'd like to use more of the space in the area and I'd prefer to smooth out the animation rather than have so many stop-starts. Glad you italicized the "can change a migration bit"
And as you saw before, I'd like to see a greyed out map or city silhouette or something in the background.
Thanks again for taking a shot at this! Really appreciate your help.
Daniel! Bold leap forward. Really captured the storyboard very well.
The flash animation was the perfect format. I wasn't aware you couldn't upload to the site. (I'm new here).
T
Would like to see a little more in the background is my feedback. Would like to work in a greyed-out map or silhouette of a city in the background.
The animation is only rough, but I wanted to get some feedback before I tidied it up as animation understandably can take quite a while! If you approve I'll continue to clean it up and insert your correct logo at the end.
Potential Storyboard Idea:
What about this as a "Story" for the animation.
Lets call this story the honeybee animation. In it, the onebird flies across the screen, exploring. He finds the honey and goes back to the rest of the hive to tell them (the followers) where the honey is and other bees follow him and they all find the honey.
You can depict this story as you feel appropriate. But here is one example:
In this version, the big ^ represents the one^bird and the smaller ^s represent the followers--the ones that follow the one^bird.
SLIDE 1
The BIG^ flies (zig-zagging) across the screen from left to right
SLIDE 2
The big^ returns back from left to right (directly). Almost like the BIG^ has found something at its destination.
SLIDE 3
Then the BIG^ returns from left to Right with a lot of smaller ^s following it to the destination that the BIG^ has found.
SLIDE 4
Then the words "it only take s one^bird to change a migration" appear on the screen.
SLiDE 5
The BIG^ returns to the screen slowly from the bottom to the top. It is large at first but becomes smaller, fading in size. Then the words one and bird fade in on either side of the ^ to form the logo--one^bird.
SLIDE 6
Finally the words "changing migrations" fade in below the one^bird logo.
Another good question on animation--please do upload flash. My apologies to any community members I may have offended with slow replies. I'm very much online now.
Sorry if you guys think my logo is immature. You guys are the professionals. I am just a poor, design-deprived entrepreneur. I am very much awake and I am NOT an agency. Let me know if you can help me. I will return feedback on your designs.
Hi all, Thanks for all your questions and thoughts. Sorry to take so long to get back to everyone. Logo's been uploaded (at last). Looking over the drafts submitted so far.
great question - ive personally lost enterest in this project, i have imba skills in animation and AS3/3 And currently working on a new FB game/website -
this project owner fails to assist us with "basic" details and has not recieved any submisttions as far, i
suspect its an Agency job - you know :P
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I'd like to use more of the space in the area and I'd prefer to smooth out the animation rather than have so many stop-starts. Glad you italicized the "can change a migration bit"
And as you saw before, I'd like to see a greyed out map or city silhouette or something in the background.
Thanks again for taking a shot at this! Really appreciate your help.
Porteur du Projet
The flash animation was the perfect format. I wasn't aware you couldn't upload to the site. (I'm new here).
T
Would like to see a little more in the background is my feedback. Would like to work in a greyed-out map or silhouette of a city in the background.
Thank you!
Porteur du Projet
What about this as a "Story" for the animation.
Lets call this story the honeybee animation. In it, the onebird flies across the screen, exploring. He finds the honey and goes back to the rest of the hive to tell them (the followers) where the honey is and other bees follow him and they all find the honey.
You can depict this story as you feel appropriate. But here is one example:
In this version, the big ^ represents the one^bird and the smaller ^s represent the followers--the ones that follow the one^bird.
SLIDE 1
The BIG^ flies (zig-zagging) across the screen from left to right
SLIDE 2
The big^ returns back from left to right (directly). Almost like the BIG^ has found something at its destination.
SLIDE 3
Then the BIG^ returns from left to Right with a lot of smaller ^s following it to the destination that the BIG^ has found.
SLIDE 4
Then the words "it only take s one^bird to change a migration" appear on the screen.
SLiDE 5
The BIG^ returns to the screen slowly from the bottom to the top. It is large at first but becomes smaller, fading in size. Then the words one and bird fade in on either side of the ^ to form the logo--one^bird.
SLIDE 6
Finally the words "changing migrations" fade in below the one^bird logo.
Porteur du Projet
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Porteur du Projet
I don't really have a storyboard here. I was more looking to everyone else's creativity to fill in the blanks.
Thanks to everyone who's given it a shot.
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Alex
Please get in touch with more detailed information - a storyboard (no matter how rough) or images would be great!
Hope to hear from you.
Cheers,
Dan.
this project owner fails to assist us with "basic" details and has not recieved any submisttions as far, i
suspect its an Agency job - you know :P
p.s designers pull effort into our design please return the favour in your brief :D
As soon as you can provide the logo and some more details or a reference video. i will submit the animation within 24 hours.
Thanks.
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