I would like to thank all of the designers that participated in this project. You all provided very diverse, unique, and creative designs and were very impressive. Thank you for all of your hard work and receptiveness to my direction.
One designer, however, was able to capture my vision for a design that was simple and yet communicated in a very unique way. I would like to congratulate ojsgraphix for design #70 being chosen as the winner of this design project.
Thank you again to all the designers that participated and I wish you all success with your future projects.
I'd like to apologize to everyone for the recent lag time in feedback but I have been swamped with work and not able to get in front of a computer.
But if I may just remind you from the brief that ultimately the design should be very clean and very simple and to the point. It should not look in the least busy.
Hopefully I'll be back again soon with more detailed feedback.
#22 - Jovanie, I like the font, and the idea, but I'm not a big fan of the dancing figure. Maybe if you could make the figure a more muscular looking thing holding up the globe.
You may want consider applying the font from #22 to #23 and/or the man from #23 to #22 (or a different muscular looking man).
#9 & #13 - ojsgraphix, Wow...those designs look great! Even though I really like them, I feel like the figure looks a bit too bodybuilder-ish and I'd like to be able to attract female clients as well. Would be possible to either tone him down a bit, or add a female counterpart standing next to him...maybe back to back? Or any other suggestions that you may have.
Or on #9, would it possible to make the man half rock rather than just standing in front of the rock that's shaped like him?
And thank you for providing both backgrounds. Those design look really great!
#10 - Jovanie, that looks much better. Could you please take the shading out of the "Human Rock" font, and also just keep the "S" in "Fitness" the same font and color.
The HR looks good, but it looks a little geometric. Would it be possible to make it a little more rock-like, with not so perfect edges and corners.
#6 - Casshau, thank you for including the design on 2 backgrounds...that is very helpful and appreciated.
I like the fact that you've made the font look like rock...and the "O" looks very cool as a rock. "Fitness" however, needs to come after "Human•Rock" if you could put it below, and possibly use the same font or a solid type font, I'd appreciate it. Also, it would be great if you could reverse the colors so that Human•Rock is gray and Fitness is in orange.
#4 - Baburao, I really like the simplicity. You're on the right track but I would like to see the colors and font changed (I really like that font but a good buddy of mine uses it for his fitness business so I can't take advantage of it).
Also, the figure needs to look fit and in command of holding up the world (or a big rock)...This little fella seems to be having a little trouble ;)
#3 & #5 - YogaBerry, I like what you were trying to go for, but not exactly the idea I had in mind. The color palate needs to be simplified and the figure should look somewhat muscular to represent fitness.
#2 - Zsolti, You're right on with the colors. I'd like to see a much more solid font and figure. And if you could also switch the colors around, that would be great.
#1 - Jovanie, I like the idea you're going for. If you can turn the HR into a stone color (Maybe 2 shades of gray, or gray/orange) and angle it up so that we're not looking down on it, that would help. You may even like to include an Atlas like figure who is holding up the HR rock. And obviously, the font colors need to be changed.
Hello Designers. Thanks you all for participating and kicking off this design project...I appreciate all of your creative ideas. I am going to begin by sharing some general notes about what I'd like to see and then I will discuss your current individual designs.
First of all, I would very much like to stick to the Gray and Orange colors. I think that it looks very clean...gray plays the color of a rock and the orange represents a very unisex, sporty color to me. Reference Design #2 for what I'm looking for as Zsolti has the right idea. And I would prefer to see the "Human•Rock" portion in gray and "Fitness" in orange.
The Font I'm looking for should look solid and should not have a slanted or italicized feel. You can use a simple Serif or Sans Serif...Ironically enough, I like the look of a Rockwell Extra Bold font, or even a Stone Sans for tag lines...or anything else along those lines that you feel will fit, I'm open to. You can also manipulate the font to look like rock, as Casshau has done in draft #6, if you choose. I've also decided that instead of a hyphen, I would like to see a dot, as in Human•Rock, if the words are written out together. Feel free to use the dot as a rock if you can get creative with it.
If you decide to include a figure in the logo design, it should represent strength and have a muscular feel to it, but not overly done like a bodybuilder...while still remaining somewhat abstract...just enough detail to get the feel without overdoing it so that it can be easily printed and still be identifiable.
Hope that helps, and if you have any questions, don't hesitate to shoot me a message.
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One designer, however, was able to capture my vision for a design that was simple and yet communicated in a very unique way. I would like to congratulate ojsgraphix for design #70 being chosen as the winner of this design project.
Thank you again to all the designers that participated and I wish you all success with your future projects.
-Pourya
May be you are right, but I didn`t thought(?)I do this. Sorry!
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But if I may just remind you from the brief that ultimately the design should be very clean and very simple and to the point. It should not look in the least busy.
Hopefully I'll be back again soon with more detailed feedback.
Thank you all for all of your great work!
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You may want consider applying the font from #22 to #23 and/or the man from #23 to #22 (or a different muscular looking man).
Thanks.
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The color needs to be played with a little. Maybe a lighter orange and incorporate some gray into it somehow.
Also, if you could possibly turn the globe into more of a rock looking thing and eliminate the meridians and the latitudes.
Thanks.
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Or on #9, would it possible to make the man half rock rather than just standing in front of the rock that's shaped like him?
And thank you for providing both backgrounds. Those design look really great!
Thanks.
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The HR looks good, but it looks a little geometric. Would it be possible to make it a little more rock-like, with not so perfect edges and corners.
Thanks.
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I like the fact that you've made the font look like rock...and the "O" looks very cool as a rock. "Fitness" however, needs to come after "Human•Rock" if you could put it below, and possibly use the same font or a solid type font, I'd appreciate it. Also, it would be great if you could reverse the colors so that Human•Rock is gray and Fitness is in orange.
Thank you.
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Also, the figure needs to look fit and in command of holding up the world (or a big rock)...This little fella seems to be having a little trouble ;)
Than you
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Thank you.
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Thank you!
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Thank you.
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First of all, I would very much like to stick to the Gray and Orange colors. I think that it looks very clean...gray plays the color of a rock and the orange represents a very unisex, sporty color to me. Reference Design #2 for what I'm looking for as Zsolti has the right idea. And I would prefer to see the "Human•Rock" portion in gray and "Fitness" in orange.
The Font I'm looking for should look solid and should not have a slanted or italicized feel. You can use a simple Serif or Sans Serif...Ironically enough, I like the look of a Rockwell Extra Bold font, or even a Stone Sans for tag lines...or anything else along those lines that you feel will fit, I'm open to. You can also manipulate the font to look like rock, as Casshau has done in draft #6, if you choose. I've also decided that instead of a hyphen, I would like to see a dot, as in Human•Rock, if the words are written out together. Feel free to use the dot as a rock if you can get creative with it.
If you decide to include a figure in the logo design, it should represent strength and have a muscular feel to it, but not overly done like a bodybuilder...while still remaining somewhat abstract...just enough detail to get the feel without overdoing it so that it can be easily printed and still be identifiable.
Hope that helps, and if you have any questions, don't hesitate to shoot me a message.
Thanks again, and good luck!