Hi Barbara
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Sorry for being so bad with providing all the right information. The first page shall be the title page, there shall be a second and third page with text (I dont have the text yet) and a last page with this text:
Sustainable Business Consulting has experience in carbon accounting and management, climate change strategy, risk management and opportunities assessment, delivering training and workshops, and Green IT. We are in the business of helping organisations transition to a low carbon economy, because we believe that business growth can be decoupled from a growth in carbon emissions. We also believe that doing something good for the environment will in most cases have a positive effect on an organisation’s bottom line.
Sustainable Business Consulting strives to be a trusted partner in an organisation’s endeavour to manage climate change related risks and embrace the new opportunities offered. Our values are to provide vendor-independent, honest advice to customers, in a highly professional way.
We are looking forward to working with you. If you have any questions about this capability statement please do not hesitate to contact:
Barbara Albert
MD and Principal Consultant
M: 0408 487 648
E: b.albert@sustainablebizconsulting.com.au
Sustainable Business Consulting Pty Ltd
Level 32, 101 Miller Street, North Sydney 2060
P: 1300 102 195 | F: +61 2 8079 6101 | www.sustainablebizconsulting.com.au
one of the best so far.
I like the background picture and the green line below. However, I do not like the particular green that you used at the top between the logo and the picture. I like the heading, the two columns and the way the box is shaped round. How would pages 1 and 3 look like?
this is too busy. to much usage of the logo. On the second page I like how the box extends downward in a curved way, but I dont like how the logo is 'crossed out' with the curved blue line
Achiever, #8
one of the best so far. Can the first page be changed to a white background, so that less colour is used when the brochure is printed? I also need a heading on the first page saying 'Capability Statement'. Second and third page: I prefer for the headings to use a blue colour, like in design #6. I dont like the bottom of the page with the logo to the left side. The logo is used too often on the page, but it does need to be displayed somewhere.I really like how you used the leaves as the background and I like the text boxes. For the enumeration list, can you please use the blue or grey leaf from the homepage, thanks! third page: I dont like the last paragraph, it's too crowded.
Hi Barbara,
Thanks for feedback.
Due to more contents I put all and brought up this look.
Now I am clear and I filter more texts and make it like your reference sample.
thanks
sundar
The design is too much in your face and overwhelming. I am looking for a more sophisticated design similar to the competitor brochures I have submitted in the additional material and the online link I provided. Although now the corporate colours are used they have been used too much and as a reader I do not even want to read what it says. Sorry for the bad feedback, Sundarprakash.There is also too much text and it needs to be broken up more.
Also, I would like the brochure to be 3 pages long. The last page would just be the location and a statement about what the company is about.
I also uploaded additional material so you can take a look at it.
Dear Sundarprakash,
thanks for submitting your design work.
I think the colours you used do not conform with the colour scheme that I described in the project brief. I also need the boxes to be straight, as my customers are professional organisations.
Kind regards,
Barbara
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I have upload my new design please check it.
All images is high resolution 300 DPI
I also provide MS Work format editable as your requirement.
Thank you
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Porteur du Projet
Sustainable Business Consulting has experience in carbon accounting and management, climate change strategy, risk management and opportunities assessment, delivering training and workshops, and Green IT. We are in the business of helping organisations transition to a low carbon economy, because we believe that business growth can be decoupled from a growth in carbon emissions. We also believe that doing something good for the environment will in most cases have a positive effect on an organisation’s bottom line.
Sustainable Business Consulting strives to be a trusted partner in an organisation’s endeavour to manage climate change related risks and embrace the new opportunities offered. Our values are to provide vendor-independent, honest advice to customers, in a highly professional way.
We are looking forward to working with you. If you have any questions about this capability statement please do not hesitate to contact:
Barbara Albert
MD and Principal Consultant
M: 0408 487 648
E: b.albert@sustainablebizconsulting.com.au
Sustainable Business Consulting Pty Ltd
Level 32, 101 Miller Street, North Sydney 2060
P: 1300 102 195 | F: +61 2 8079 6101 | www.sustainablebizconsulting.com.au
ACN 140 233 932 | ABN 46 506 219 241
Printed on 100% recycled post-consumer waste paper
Copyright © 2012 SBC, All rights reserved
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one of the best so far.
I like the background picture and the green line below. However, I do not like the particular green that you used at the top between the logo and the picture. I like the heading, the two columns and the way the box is shaped round. How would pages 1 and 3 look like?
Achiever, #7,
this is too busy. to much usage of the logo. On the second page I like how the box extends downward in a curved way, but I dont like how the logo is 'crossed out' with the curved blue line
Achiever, #8
one of the best so far. Can the first page be changed to a white background, so that less colour is used when the brochure is printed? I also need a heading on the first page saying 'Capability Statement'. Second and third page: I prefer for the headings to use a blue colour, like in design #6. I dont like the bottom of the page with the logo to the left side. The logo is used too often on the page, but it does need to be displayed somewhere.I really like how you used the leaves as the background and I like the text boxes. For the enumeration list, can you please use the blue or grey leaf from the homepage, thanks! third page: I dont like the last paragraph, it's too crowded.
Sundarprakash #9 and #10,
I like the curved lines at the top and the bottom, but otherwise the design is not 'corporate' enough. It needs to be more sophisticated.
Thanks for feedback.
Due to more contents I put all and brought up this look.
Now I am clear and I filter more texts and make it like your reference sample.
thanks
sundar
Porteur du Projet
The design is too much in your face and overwhelming. I am looking for a more sophisticated design similar to the competitor brochures I have submitted in the additional material and the online link I provided. Although now the corporate colours are used they have been used too much and as a reader I do not even want to read what it says. Sorry for the bad feedback, Sundarprakash.There is also too much text and it needs to be broken up more.
Waiting for your comments on my recent designs.
thanks
sundar
Thanks for comments.
I will do the update and submit the new design soon.
thanks
sundar
Porteur du Projet
I also uploaded additional material so you can take a look at it.
Porteur du Projet
thanks for submitting your design work.
I think the colours you used do not conform with the colour scheme that I described in the project brief. I also need the boxes to be straight, as my customers are professional organisations.
Kind regards,
Barbara