Draft #92
-Change "not even a ...." to; "Even jewelers can't tell the difference"
-Add "sm" at end of "Even jewelers can't tell the difference" line.
-Diamond is too blue. Make look more like a natural diamond.
-Make diamond larger.
Draft #62 and Draft #60
We like the size and proportion of the words in #60 as well as the placement of "man made" but make "man made" a little smaller. Also, in #60 make the whole ring blue and make all grey font a little deeper grey.
We like the ring and shading of the letters in #62. In #62 make the last line grey, move "man made to the left, and make "wedding rings" font larger. Thank you.
Draft #49
-please take away the background color and adjust font shade to make stand off the page.
-make the "man made" smaller and light grey color
-make "wedding rings" larger (like in #57) and use same revised font shade and effect as in your "diamond".
-Lastly, adjust "not even a jeweler can tell the difference" accordingly...your choice on font color, upper lower case.
Thank you.
Draft #21
That is not what I meant by "Could you make the o in diamond look more like a diamond ring".
I would like you to revise the "o" to make it look more like a diamond ring. Right now it looks like a circle with a ball on it.
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-Change "not even a ...." to; "Even jewelers can't tell the difference"
-Add "sm" at end of "Even jewelers can't tell the difference" line.
-Diamond is too blue. Make look more like a natural diamond.
-Make diamond larger.
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-Make "man made" slightly smaller.
-Add an "SM" at end of "not even a jeweler..." line.
-Make "wedding rings" line 30% larger.
Thank you.
Porteur du Projet
We like the size and proportion of the words in #60 as well as the placement of "man made" but make "man made" a little smaller. Also, in #60 make the whole ring blue and make all grey font a little deeper grey.
We like the ring and shading of the letters in #62. In #62 make the last line grey, move "man made to the left, and make "wedding rings" font larger. Thank you.
Porteur du Projet
-please take away the background color and adjust font shade to make stand off the page.
-make the "man made" smaller and light grey color
-make "wedding rings" larger (like in #57) and use same revised font shade and effect as in your "diamond".
-Lastly, adjust "not even a jeweler can tell the difference" accordingly...your choice on font color, upper lower case.
Thank you.
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"Not even a jeweler can tell the difference" and use a different font.
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That is not what I meant by "Could you make the o in diamond look more like a diamond ring".
I would like you to revise the "o" to make it look more like a diamond ring. Right now it looks like a circle with a ball on it.
Porteur du Projet
Please use upper and lower case for
"Not even a jeweler can tell the difference" and use a different font.
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