14 octobre 2011 18:05 csieuchand Porteur du Projet
Maddock,
#23 and #29 are my absolute favourites thus far. The "thumbs up" is too small to be noticeable. Perhaps the telescope should remain but perhaps it could be just a bit shorter. Also, the tagline in these designs isn't working. I think in this design, it should either be left out completely or amended to resemble #32.
14 octobre 2011 18:03 csieuchand Porteur du Projet
Aribudsucahyo,#30 to #33 are clever, but I think their identity seems too japanese. I major fact in design is trinidad and tobago pride. I do however admit that your strategy for the tagline is my favourite.
Thank you for your appreciation, I will try to revise according to your wishes ....
12 octobre 2011 20:36 csieuchand Porteur du Projet
I like #20, aribudisucahyo. The birds give an interesting dimension.
Guys, The tagline is a work in progress. Focus groups are suggesting "for the win".
Placement of the tagline is causing me some trouble. Can we try placing the tagline, in smallish script font, below the logo itself? I like the idea of using two wavy lines at the top and bottom of the tagline text, like in 14, but it needs to be placed somewhere else.
Maddock, I also really like the idea of using the coconuts to dot the I's in Trini.
hopefully I've fixed design # 3 and # 10, can satisfy your desire ..
thank you
Best regards
#maddock
12 octobre 2011 07:23 csieuchand Porteur du Projet
#10 is fantastic! My only concern is the tag-line is not as prominent as it ought to be. I'm not suggesting that it be huge or anything, but I think it gets lost between the main words. I like the idea of the badge in #3 for the tag line but it should be slightly bigger.
I should say #1 is very well done, but it might be a little too busy.
#5 is simple, clean and elegant, but just a little too much so. While I like it alot, it just seems too generic.
11 octobre 2011 17:46 csieuchand Porteur du Projet
#6 is definitely leading right now. I think it captures the "fun"-ness of my site. I would like to see "challenges" be more prominent and the tag-line could definitely be more subtle (I'm also thinking "get into it" might be better). I would also like to see the challenger character become a bit more sohpisticated, possibly looking like a lara croft-esque character. Excellent job so far, though!
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#23 and #29 are my absolute favourites thus far. The "thumbs up" is too small to be noticeable. Perhaps the telescope should remain but perhaps it could be just a bit shorter. Also, the tagline in these designs isn't working. I think in this design, it should either be left out completely or amended to resemble #32.
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Guys, The tagline is a work in progress. Focus groups are suggesting "for the win".
Placement of the tagline is causing me some trouble. Can we try placing the tagline, in smallish script font, below the logo itself? I like the idea of using two wavy lines at the top and bottom of the tagline text, like in 14, but it needs to be placed somewhere else.
Maddock, I also really like the idea of using the coconuts to dot the I's in Trini.
hopefully I've fixed design # 3 and # 10, can satisfy your desire ..
thank you
Best regards
#maddock
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I should say #1 is very well done, but it might be a little too busy.
#5 is simple, clean and elegant, but just a little too much so. While I like it alot, it just seems too generic.
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