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MB/LDG/LS Team
19 octobre 2012 13:17 altarisgroup Porteur du Projet
Draft #1 Comments:
Very good start
Here are some requested changes though:
Side 1 (cover)
1. remove all contact information from the bottom of the page.
2. Add the following text in the dark brow footer - "This program will give your District the knowledge and skills to minimize safety/security risks and strengthen your staff's ability to successfully manage emergencies within your schools."
3. Delete the "Creating safe environments....." text and replace with "K-12 Emergency Management Essentials Program". I would prefer to see the program title as a type of logo if possible.
4. Add a "New" icon to left of program title that is subtle and coordinates with other colors on the page. See uploads for suggestion.
5. Add small text "See reverse for course details"
Side 2
1. Add "K-12 Emergency Management Essentials Program" as a prominent title at top of page.
2. Remove all photos to add more white space.
3. Change "DERT" to "DERT Module" in blue box.
4. Remove all times from below module titles and just leave blank.
5. Change "testimonials" to "What Districts are saying".
6. On chalkboard, "Program Cost" above price.
7. On chalkboard, delete "Fine Print" after "*" and condense line spacing between the text. Text should all be one paragraph which should be pushed to bottom of chalkboard.
8a. Use an uploaded icon for the word "Guarantee" and make associated text more prominent.
8b. Add another FAQ as follows: Q. "We use our Insurance Company risk manager or District Cooperative Safety Person. Why do we need this program? A.While risk managers do a fine job at identifying common hazards and can help reduce the risk of injury, emergency management is a specialty that encompasses assessment, planning, response and recovery. An emergency management professional has the expertise to properly identify safety and security risks, develop effective plans and develop your staff's ability to respond effectively in an emergency. Proper planning and training by certified emergency management professionals can also help reduce a District's liability should in the event of a critical incident."
9. Add a prominent call to action area stating "Call Today" (Large & Bold)
Below "call today" add "to Schedule Your Program" in a smaller font.
Add larger and bold "866-960-8739" on one line followed by "or Email:info@altarisgroup.com"
10. Add full contact info at footer of page (small text) including address, phone/fax #, email and web address.
17 octobre 2012 13:14 altarisgroup Porteur du Projet
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Please only use images provided by the project holder. If in case source of images has not been provided, you are requested to use images from “www.thinkstockphotos.com”.
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Thanks!
MB/LDG/LS Team
Porteur du Projet
Very good start
Here are some requested changes though:
Side 1 (cover)
1. remove all contact information from the bottom of the page.
2. Add the following text in the dark brow footer - "This program will give your District the knowledge and skills to minimize safety/security risks and strengthen your staff's ability to successfully manage emergencies within your schools."
3. Delete the "Creating safe environments....." text and replace with "K-12 Emergency Management Essentials Program". I would prefer to see the program title as a type of logo if possible.
4. Add a "New" icon to left of program title that is subtle and coordinates with other colors on the page. See uploads for suggestion.
5. Add small text "See reverse for course details"
Side 2
1. Add "K-12 Emergency Management Essentials Program" as a prominent title at top of page.
2. Remove all photos to add more white space.
3. Change "DERT" to "DERT Module" in blue box.
4. Remove all times from below module titles and just leave blank.
5. Change "testimonials" to "What Districts are saying".
6. On chalkboard, "Program Cost" above price.
7. On chalkboard, delete "Fine Print" after "*" and condense line spacing between the text. Text should all be one paragraph which should be pushed to bottom of chalkboard.
8a. Use an uploaded icon for the word "Guarantee" and make associated text more prominent.
8b. Add another FAQ as follows: Q. "We use our Insurance Company risk manager or District Cooperative Safety Person. Why do we need this program? A.While risk managers do a fine job at identifying common hazards and can help reduce the risk of injury, emergency management is a specialty that encompasses assessment, planning, response and recovery. An emergency management professional has the expertise to properly identify safety and security risks, develop effective plans and develop your staff's ability to respond effectively in an emergency. Proper planning and training by certified emergency management professionals can also help reduce a District's liability should in the event of a critical incident."
9. Add a prominent call to action area stating "Call Today" (Large & Bold)
Below "call today" add "to Schedule Your Program" in a smaller font.
Add larger and bold "866-960-8739" on one line followed by "or Email:info@altarisgroup.com"
10. Add full contact info at footer of page (small text) including address, phone/fax #, email and web address.
Porteur du Projet