Inplace of the cross under the feet of the warrior - would you place a small reproduction of this image:
http://bookofmormonfacts.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/02/golden-plates.jpg
1. No I'm not set on a circle, but some of the formats that this is to be used in: PATCH, and sticker, and a stencil that is cut from a piece of metal - so you can use a spray paint to reproduce the logo. A circle so far seems the best way to "keep it all together". But I'm NOT set on it.
2. I like both of your swords (80) the same, they look great! Only issue I have is the background can only be white or black...... no grey of any kind.
#1: Do you have your heart fairly set on the circling text?
#2: Do you have a certain type of sword in mind? My first design was mesopotamian based, an influence Hebrew/ Nephite culture might have had, but I'm seeing a lot of European style swords. I've switched my most recent post to more of a European feel just to test it out, but on behalf of all of us, is there a type you would prefer?
Looking good - thanks for the effort and multiple designs.
ON #58 (top ranked right now)
Lets try the folling ideas:
1. Try some other helmets, remove the "plume" on top... maybe a ridge on the top of the helmet?
2. Increase the size of the white lines on the body of the warrior.
3. I like the font - except on the flag where its hard to tell that its God, but looks like Goo.
4. Lets try it inverted - like in #85.
Draft #81, Designer: BPWDesign
Draft #84, Designer: niexZ
The above mentioned design replicates sniperwuf's concept of adding the word GOD inside the flag, therefore have been taken down.
Designers! Please note that Mycroburst DONOT encourage plagiarism and/or derivative of original ideas!
Oh man, it was flip then literally "traced" including the cape and helmet without the flag and the upward pointing of sword. The exact stock visual. Nice capture jp1876.
Not a bad start - but it needs to be an outline, or silhouette. Also, as a way to try to explain the warrior think more of the movie LOTR and less of the movie 300.
It looks nice, but there is too much detail on the warrior. I need just a silhouette. That means just the outline of the warrior. No detail on the face or body - except the outline. And the sword is too large. Thanks for all your creativity.
Not bad - great first start - try to make the warrior just a silhouette. As the logo will be used in a small format, so less detail on the warrior would be an improvement.
Thankyou for the placement of the flag and the body position of the warrior. Thanks for your upload!
I gave out three stars because it has the best body position and layout - but its not perfect, because its NOT a silhouette. I liked your text layout, but I have asked for the warrior to be in front of the flag. If you can make that change and
mdsgrafix -
I liked your style, I wish you would have continued in the project. If the warrior was infront of the flag - I think it would look great! You were on the right path.
OK - thanks everyone, to clarify why I keep asking for it to JUST be a silhouette. I will be using this logo in very small formats - under 2". I love the detail of may of the designs, but too much detail will not work for the use I want for this project. So I need contrast, that is why I have asked for the warrior to be in-front of the flag. That way the flag can be one color and the warrior another color.
With all the respect, you asked repeatedly for a plain silhouette, but as I see you gave 3 stars for a detailed one. It would be helpful if you clear to us how exactly you prefer the silhouette. Thank you for all the previous comments.
Looking good!
I really like the detail you have worked on, but to just compare would you mind doing the warrior in just a silhouette? Also if we raised the mountains to the height of the top of his armored boots it would make the same nice contrast - (same you have done with the flag).
Lets try to increase his skull size a bit, and down a little on the size of the sword.
Maybe a few more swords from the warriors below.
Love your ideas and your creative efforts. Thank you!
It looking sharp!
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Porteur du Projet
Inplace of the cross under the feet of the warrior - would you place a small reproduction of this image:
http://bookofmormonfacts.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/02/golden-plates.jpg
THANKYOU
Porteur du Projet
Thanks for the drafts!
To clarify -
1. No I'm not set on a circle, but some of the formats that this is to be used in: PATCH, and sticker, and a stencil that is cut from a piece of metal - so you can use a spray paint to reproduce the logo. A circle so far seems the best way to "keep it all together". But I'm NOT set on it.
2. I like both of your swords (80) the same, they look great! Only issue I have is the background can only be white or black...... no grey of any kind.
Thanks!!!
Will post the revised design ASAP.
Best regards and Happy Holidays.
Sniperwuf
#1: Do you have your heart fairly set on the circling text?
#2: Do you have a certain type of sword in mind? My first design was mesopotamian based, an influence Hebrew/ Nephite culture might have had, but I'm seeing a lot of European style swords. I've switched my most recent post to more of a European feel just to test it out, but on behalf of all of us, is there a type you would prefer?
Thanks
Porteur du Projet
Looking good - thanks for the effort and multiple designs.
ON #58 (top ranked right now)
Lets try the folling ideas:
1. Try some other helmets, remove the "plume" on top... maybe a ridge on the top of the helmet?
2. Increase the size of the white lines on the body of the warrior.
3. I like the font - except on the flag where its hard to tell that its God, but looks like Goo.
4. Lets try it inverted - like in #85.
Thanks!
Porteur du Projet
Employé(e)
Draft #84, Designer: niexZ
The above mentioned design replicates sniperwuf's concept of adding the word GOD inside the flag, therefore have been taken down.
Designers! Please note that Mycroburst DONOT encourage plagiarism and/or derivative of original ideas!
thank you for all
Porteur du Projet
I need to be able to use the logo in small formats - 2".
So the fine detail - wont show up or work.
Thanks.
Porteur du Projet
Not a bad start - but it needs to be an outline, or silhouette. Also, as a way to try to explain the warrior think more of the movie LOTR and less of the movie 300.
Porteur du Projet
Porteur du Projet
#49 - I like the background, and the new sword - but not a fan of the flag, or text layout. BUT THE BODY SHAPE IS VERY GOOD.
It would be better if "god" was organized with the other text and not separate.
Also if the warrior had no facial features and was just an outline - it would greatly help.
Porteur du Projet
May be I am using the wrong word?
Silhouette = OUTLINE.
Not facial details on the warrior.
Just the shape of the warrior almost like a shadow. And the flag needs to be behind him.
#49, 46, and 45 have good use and organization of the text!
Porteur du Projet
It looks nice, but there is too much detail on the warrior. I need just a silhouette. That means just the outline of the warrior. No detail on the face or body - except the outline. And the sword is too large. Thanks for all your creativity.
Porteur du Projet
Not bad - great first start - try to make the warrior just a silhouette. As the logo will be used in a small format, so less detail on the warrior would be an improvement.
Thankyou for the placement of the flag and the body position of the warrior. Thanks for your upload!
Porteur du Projet
I gave out three stars because it has the best body position and layout - but its not perfect, because its NOT a silhouette. I liked your text layout, but I have asked for the warrior to be in front of the flag. If you can make that change and
Porteur du Projet
I liked your style, I wish you would have continued in the project. If the warrior was infront of the flag - I think it would look great! You were on the right path.
Porteur du Projet
With all the respect, you asked repeatedly for a plain silhouette, but as I see you gave 3 stars for a detailed one. It would be helpful if you clear to us how exactly you prefer the silhouette. Thank you for all the previous comments.
Porteur du Projet
Looking good!
I really like the detail you have worked on, but to just compare would you mind doing the warrior in just a silhouette? Also if we raised the mountains to the height of the top of his armored boots it would make the same nice contrast - (same you have done with the flag).
Lets try to increase his skull size a bit, and down a little on the size of the sword.
Maybe a few more swords from the warriors below.
Love your ideas and your creative efforts. Thank you!
It looking sharp!
thank you for comment