Draft 25 - Is there a way to include more of the state of Florida in that design? Does not have to even be the entire state yet enough that it could easily be identified.
Draft 18-24 - There is no state of Florida included in the design. This is targeted to centers in this state and would like to see the state of florida with a surgery center on land with the tidal waving coming over the top. I am not thrilled with any of the pictures that are included. It is less about being an actual surgery center and more about fitting within the overall design.
I have increased the prize by $100. I would like to see a design that incorporates the tidal wave I discussed in the brief. I have a clear vision of what I would like to see, so please review the brief.
Draft 14 & 15 - Overall I like the design you have submitted, however I do have a few notes.
a. The plane seems as though it is representing my organization. The idea was that US Healthcare was dropping the four bombs on surgery centers and that my organization is there to unite these centers. A plane without any name would be preferred.
b. I would like to see a surgery center on the state of Florida to drive home the idea that the centers are being bombed by these four points and not the actual state.
Option 11/12 - The state of Florida is upside down in both of these drafts. I do not like the flowers in option 12. We are getting closer adding the four points, yet I would like to see the bombs bigger with the words actually on them instead of next to them as a bulleted list.
Option 10 - I would like to see a surgery center on the state of Florida. In addition I would like to see the following 4 points listed on the bombs themselves.
-Physician Employment by Hospitals
-Managed Care Contracts
-Supply Cost
-Accountable Care Organizations
A more colorful option would be nice as well. I want this to grab the recipients attention.
Option 2 - As requested would like to see larger bombs with the actual points listed on the bombs themselves. I would like the plane to read "USA Healthcare" Once again, a surgery center should be on the state of FL.
Option 6 - Would like to see the "Mission" removed. Also would like to see a different color scheme and a surgery center on the state. The idea is that the tidal wave is overtaking the surgery center which I do not gather looking at this draft.
Project two is off to a good start. However I would like the points listed in the description to be reflected on each bomb. Also would like to see more of a cartoon rendition of this concept. It is extremely important that the points listed are clear for all to see and understand immediately.
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a. The plane seems as though it is representing my organization. The idea was that US Healthcare was dropping the four bombs on surgery centers and that my organization is there to unite these centers. A plane without any name would be preferred.
b. I would like to see a surgery center on the state of Florida to drive home the idea that the centers are being bombed by these four points and not the actual state.
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-Physician Employment by Hospitals
-Managed Care Contracts
-Supply Cost
-Accountable Care Organizations
A more colorful option would be nice as well. I want this to grab the recipients attention.
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