things to correct:
the "Bringing .... " under the logo, the first letter B should be capital.
Change the words on the big picture to "Through our services we strive to be part of your family"
bottom menu, you forgot to add one service, the hygiene one. please correct.
also, can you provide me a version of the corrected version of 56 but with the background color of the blue that would match the logo color; is the color you used towards the bottom of #31
#52
can you do this one as well (besides the changes i already mentioned, with the writing under the logo to match the font of the logo and in cursive and put "bringing a personal touch to in home care"
#53
can you fix up the bottom and actually instead of dummy content put the tabs such as about us, senior resources, our caregivers, ways to reach us, employment opportunities, FAQ, warning signs, information center, pricing, home-care services
can you take the "bringing a personal touch to in-home care" phrase from the top and instead put it on the big picture?. Erase the text that is there " through our services..." and "a mother's earnings..." just have the "bringing a personal touch to in-home care"
1. make the search box up top smaller and fit it under the phone numbers
2. the local phone number, should just say local, remove the "No" part
3.the copyright should say to National Eldercare Inc
4.Somewhere up top fit in the "Bringing a personal touch to in-home care" that is our catch phrase, maybe under the logo
5. replace the writing on the main big picture with the hand with "Through our services we strive to be considered part of your family"
6. The picture where is says "Home care" should be replaced to say warning signs
7.replace the tab"home" to "about us" and the "about us" should say "senior resources"
8. add linkedin
9.remove quick contact form from the bottom menu, add a local number, fax
10. make a phone numbers up top a little bigger
the through our services we strive to be part of your family- can you write that in one line, at the bottom of the picture as i did in my website.
second the new letter message, take the " get a email" off just leave the join our newsletter
the big picture, can you incorporate so they pictures change, so while someone looks at the main page there will be 5 different pictures that will change every 5 seconds or so.
the join with us and the FAQ should be removed from under the phone numbers
the credit cards accepted should be take off as well.
can you add a suggestion box somewhere on the page; maybe make the testimonials smaller and add it there
i like the background
the phone numbers,can you put the 1800 on top and then the other under it. use only one icon for it, the receiver.
i do not see a box to sign up for newsletter. when you add it it should have a space where they can fill up their name in and a another one where they could put their email address. it should say subscribe newsletter.
i do not want a map thing there, see if you can change that,
the background needs to be changed for the picture, pick a better picture as well. Go on what ever website for photos you have a do a search for elder care.
the background of the webpage, try and make it dark blue to match the top menu :)
i like the bottom part of the draft but not the top. the logo is huge.... it should be on the left hand side.
eliminate the contact us form and add a name bx for people to write their name in when they submit their email for a newsletter.
also, the picture, it is bad, should have a elder person and a nurse looking one holding or hugging her.
there is to much going on on it, with the different styles of writing and it looks unprofessional and childish.
one thing you got right is the header, i like the color and simplicity.
the menu, the picture, the bottom menu and the follow us are completely off from what i am looking for.
the site needs to be professional looking and have a clean feel to it.
please read the description i submitted for the project and give it another chance
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things to correct:
the "Bringing .... " under the logo, the first letter B should be capital.
Change the words on the big picture to "Through our services we strive to be part of your family"
bottom menu, you forgot to add one service, the hygiene one. please correct.
also, can you provide me a version of the corrected version of 56 but with the background color of the blue that would match the logo color; is the color you used towards the bottom of #31
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can you do this one as well (besides the changes i already mentioned, with the writing under the logo to match the font of the logo and in cursive and put "bringing a personal touch to in home care"
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can you fix up the bottom and actually instead of dummy content put the tabs such as about us, senior resources, our caregivers, ways to reach us, employment opportunities, FAQ, warning signs, information center, pricing, home-care services
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can you add the:
bookmark this page, email this page and print this page as it is on this website. http://www.bizliteracy.com/training
you could fit it under the search box? maybe
also the email is support@thecaringdaughters.com
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ok, look good;
can you take the "bringing a personal touch to in-home care" phrase from the top and instead put it on the big picture?. Erase the text that is there " through our services..." and "a mother's earnings..." just have the "bringing a personal touch to in-home care"
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can you submit a dark blue background for the draft 51
thanks
also switch the tab "home" to "about us" and the " about us" to "senior resources"
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the picture that says 24/7 services, the wording should be changed to " frequently asked questions"
thanks
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things to change:
1. make the search box up top smaller and fit it under the phone numbers
2. the local phone number, should just say local, remove the "No" part
3.the copyright should say to National Eldercare Inc
4.Somewhere up top fit in the "Bringing a personal touch to in-home care" that is our catch phrase, maybe under the logo
5. replace the writing on the main big picture with the hand with "Through our services we strive to be considered part of your family"
6. The picture where is says "Home care" should be replaced to say warning signs
7.replace the tab"home" to "about us" and the "about us" should say "senior resources"
8. add linkedin
9.remove quick contact form from the bottom menu, add a local number, fax
10. make a phone numbers up top a little bigger
thanks
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also the copyright at the bottom should say National Eldercare Inc not the caringdaughters.
thanks
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i love what you did with it,
few things to add:
the through our services we strive to be part of your family- can you write that in one line, at the bottom of the picture as i did in my website.
second the new letter message, take the " get a email" off just leave the join our newsletter
the big picture, can you incorporate so they pictures change, so while someone looks at the main page there will be 5 different pictures that will change every 5 seconds or so.
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things to change:
the join with us and the FAQ should be removed from under the phone numbers
the credit cards accepted should be take off as well.
can you add a suggestion box somewhere on the page; maybe make the testimonials smaller and add it there
i like the background
the phone numbers,can you put the 1800 on top and then the other under it. use only one icon for it, the receiver.
i do not see a box to sign up for newsletter. when you add it it should have a space where they can fill up their name in and a another one where they could put their email address. it should say subscribe newsletter.
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i like the new design.
things to change:
i do not want a map thing there, see if you can change that,
the background needs to be changed for the picture, pick a better picture as well. Go on what ever website for photos you have a do a search for elder care.
the background of the webpage, try and make it dark blue to match the top menu :)
i love the suggestion box
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go back to your # 6, the picture was great and the arrangement had potential...
clean it up.
May I get some feedback on my last entry #21? So that I can do some modification.
Thanks,
Designfeedz
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i love the feel of it and how it all looks put together.
changes to be made:
switch the way to reach us tab with the employment opportunities. the employment one should be at the end.
also take away the inquiry for/ contact form under the us flag off.
try to make the background the same color as the top menu boxes are, that blue.
also i like how the pictures were on #14 see if you can give me a version of that on the #18, meaning the pictures on the side.
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i like the bottom part of the draft but not the top. the logo is huge.... it should be on the left hand side.
eliminate the contact us form and add a name bx for people to write their name in when they submit their email for a newsletter.
also, the picture, it is bad, should have a elder person and a nurse looking one holding or hugging her.
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i do not like dark colors for the bottom or for that matter any part of the website.
the background of the picture is tropical, it looks like a vacation site.
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there is to much going on on it, with the different styles of writing and it looks unprofessional and childish.
one thing you got right is the header, i like the color and simplicity.
the menu, the picture, the bottom menu and the follow us are completely off from what i am looking for.
the site needs to be professional looking and have a clean feel to it.
please read the description i submitted for the project and give it another chance
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good things:
the follow us at the bottom.
the page design and color is better
things to change:
i do not want the contact us on the right hand side form. i have a age dedicated to that and a form as well on the way to reach us.
so take that of and replace it with the newsletter, place it right were the contact us is now and under it add a suggestions box and testimonials.
i like the picture of the two women, but do not like the background
change the font of the writing "through our ..." to some other one and make it fit in 1 line at the bottom of the picture
for the call now, there will be 2 numbers so add (301)654-7678
thanks
also try a plain color for background.
Please check your private message.
thanks,
InnovativeDesigner
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Check the websites I provided as support and ideas.
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Guys, please. Submitt some fresh designs, and give me so I your ideas. The project is veiled now so I hope I will see less copied versions.
Thanks
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should be like this simple and elegant