@molteck #53 & #54 One is a beach scene it will not work for us to promote selling kids loot bags and both have more than 3 colours. We need to stick to 3 colours.
@hatter #51
We appreciate you showing us the different uses for the submission for faxes in black and white how the logo will show up. Like that you showed loot bags as our main business.
@#48 dilsher The submission you made is lovely however, it evokes a feeling of more of an upscale gift store. We are a children's loot bag store. We make no-candy loot bags fro birthday parties and carry eco-friendly giftware.
And also the tag line is missing:
Thanks-a-Loot Gifts
Loot Bags & Giftware for Every Occasion
@DwiMoon #38
I prefer a different shade of green. More of a lime green.
And if you read some of my other comments to designers can you make some contents in and around the gift/lootbag.
Also the not all the elements like the butterfly, stars need to be included. If you are including them they do not need to be the prominent focus of the design.
We sell primarily loot bags for children's parties. We do not include candy, we put 5 items in each bag.
@hatter #40 Can we see the design where the colour blue is used in a turquiose blue like the one that #25 drisos used.
Also not sure is that tissue paper behind the dinosaur. If it is please remove it as we do not package our lootbags with tissue paper. Also please remove the extra butterfly that is beside the dinosaur.
The butterfly over the "s' can you a add antenneas to it.
I like the exploding out contents in the loot bags can you put the items Princess tiara, beaded necklace, race car, puppy dog instead of dolly. I don't mind the dinosaur. Some other items that I include in loot bags are sticker sheets, single stickers, spinning tops, glow sticks.
Can you move the clear pony loot bag popping out where the star is and remove the star. If you need to remove the other ball toy to make room.
And the tag line stretched a little longer and the font size larger in the tag line.
If you can show other toys inside the loot bag and no-candy as I do not include candy inside the loot bags I make. I would like to see a design that does not include an animal.
Thank you for the clarification. I wish you every success in finding employment. And thank you for wishing me success in finding a design concept. I understand your need to withdraw your submission. Thank you for your time.
yes, I agree everyone is very talented here including yourself.
No offense was intended. I too am a full time - unemployed Mom. When spending hours on a design, it is hard to keep at it if the logo is not working for you. My "!" was only meant in a friendly manner.
Best of Luck on your logo project. I am sure you will get a great design, as there are many talented people on this site.
Again, sorry if I seems abrupt, it was not my intention at all.
@drisos#25
Can you find a different font. I feel its to scripted for children to read and the tag line font is appealing but may not show up bold enough during printing.
You may submit deigns with out the butterfly as well. The initial design submitted was eliminated because it had multiple colours and we would like to stick with 3 colours.
Please include loot bags/gift concepts in the designs.
Can you show us how The Company Name looks like in your original design not broken up. Also can you remove the butterflies so we can see a version without.
Please keep the background white and can we see the tag line in a fancier font. I prefer the shade of pink in #34
Can you add some loot bags in the kids hands? Also show us some designs using 3 other colour combinations and play around with a different font for the tag line.
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We appreciate you showing us the different uses for the submission for faxes in black and white how the logo will show up. Like that you showed loot bags as our main business.
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Your design shows a baby. We cannot use this graphic as we sell loot bags for kids parties. Children 3+ years.
I do not mind the other elements maybey take out the moon too ad most kids parties are during the daytime.
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And also the tag line is missing:
Thanks-a-Loot Gifts
Loot Bags & Giftware for Every Occasion
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Thanks-a-Loot Gifts
Loot Bags & Giftware for Every Occasion
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Loot Bags & Giftware for Every Occasion
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Loot Bags & Giftware for Every Occasion
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Thanks for reading my comment. Looking forward to your revised version.
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I prefer a different shade of green. More of a lime green.
And if you read some of my other comments to designers can you make some contents in and around the gift/lootbag.
Also the not all the elements like the butterfly, stars need to be included. If you are including them they do not need to be the prominent focus of the design.
We sell primarily loot bags for children's parties. We do not include candy, we put 5 items in each bag.
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Also not sure is that tissue paper behind the dinosaur. If it is please remove it as we do not package our lootbags with tissue paper. Also please remove the extra butterfly that is beside the dinosaur.
The butterfly over the "s' can you a add antenneas to it.
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The tag line: Loot Bags & Giftware for Every Occasion is missing
Also I would like to see a different font because Kids do not typically read uppercase letters.
Thanks-a-Loot Gifts
Loot Bags and Giftware for Every Occasion
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Please note to use a lower case a in the word
Thanks-a-Loot Gifts
and use hyphen - not underscore_
I prefer not having a face in the design. Loot Bags with ribbons, giftware, toys popping out of loot bags. 5 toy maximum
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I like the exploding out contents in the loot bags can you put the items Princess tiara, beaded necklace, race car, puppy dog instead of dolly. I don't mind the dinosaur. Some other items that I include in loot bags are sticker sheets, single stickers, spinning tops, glow sticks.
Can you move the clear pony loot bag popping out where the star is and remove the star. If you need to remove the other ball toy to make room.
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I would like to see the "A" as a lowercase
And the tag line stretched a little longer and the font size larger in the tag line.
If you can show other toys inside the loot bag and no-candy as I do not include candy inside the loot bags I make. I would like to see a design that does not include an animal.
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Thank you for the clarification. I wish you every success in finding employment. And thank you for wishing me success in finding a design concept. I understand your need to withdraw your submission. Thank you for your time.
yes, I agree everyone is very talented here including yourself.
Best of Luck on your logo project. I am sure you will get a great design, as there are many talented people on this site.
Again, sorry if I seems abrupt, it was not my intention at all.
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Can you find a different font. I feel its to scripted for children to read and the tag line font is appealing but may not show up bold enough during printing.
You may submit deigns with out the butterfly as well. The initial design submitted was eliminated because it had multiple colours and we would like to stick with 3 colours.
Please include loot bags/gift concepts in the designs.
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Can you show us how The Company Name looks like in your original design not broken up. Also can you remove the butterflies so we can see a version without.
Please keep the background white and can we see the tag line in a fancier font. I prefer the shade of pink in #34
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Can you add some loot bags in the kids hands? Also show us some designs using 3 other colour combinations and play around with a different font for the tag line.