#21 Temoy
As you know you are the winner! Great job we are so pleased.
We just have 1 favor. Could we have everything exactly the same but see Tessie with brown hair instead of the blondish-red. We may not change it but we would just like to see what she looks like.'Thanks again for your patience and hard work
karen
#19 Temoy
Love the bag!!!! It is perfect, the color and across the body I really think you nailed it. You only have to get rid of the leather jacket on the shoulder because you can't tell what it is. Maybe Tessie's arm that is holding the top of jacket can just move over a little as if it is holding onto the strap of the messenger bag. I think when you fix that we may have a winner!!!!! Karen
#18
TEMOY
Amazing job!!!! Consensus is leave the boots. We just need to fix the purse and we're done. Try either hanging from her side instead of leather jacket or cross body (messenger style) and we'll make a final pick
As I said before, I love the arms so don't change her stance if you don't have too.
Thanks again
Karen
colors are awesome
#18 Draft
Temoy
I love it! I like the colors better, I like the strength and size of the girl. Love the background color of card
I do think I like the boots. I know I said sling a jacket over her shoulder but I can't tell what it is. Could she just have a purse hanging from that same shoulder? Love the way you have both her arms positioned. I will ask my partner if she prefers shoes or boots but I am very happy. Almost there! Karen
Draft #7
We love the girl, we're just wondering if there's a way to make her a little edgier looking. Just a little hipper if possible. Maybe the color needs to be a little darker or a cool leather jacket thrown over 1 shoulder or maybe she's in awesome boots Can you put an apostrophe in Tessie's
Love the way she's standing and the big T in black, just need to tweak her a bit.Give me a couple of your ideas cause I love this logo
Thanks so much
#14
I like the T in pink just make it smaller please.Also put both words( on the) in black outside of circle. More feminine font and try adding a sketch of girl as previously mentioned Thank you
#13
In addition to my comments about the font last night, everyone likes the girl you had before in the same dress, same bracelets and shoes but with the blonde hair. can I see what she looks like again like that? Thanks again
#16
Love the colors and the T in circle. The apostrophe is after the last e before the s.
Can you make the font on (Tessie's on the)a little more flirty not so stuctured. Also, we would like a sketch at the end of logo with a young preteen girl in a short flowy dress in hot pink or purple wearing beaded bracelets and heels. Can you try adding that for us to see?
Thanks so much Great beginning!!!
Draft #13
Just a little fine tuning. The girl is great! Can you make the T in the circle a little smaller. Love the background color of card but now I'm wondering if you can try putting all the letters in the hot pink and softening the font. Perhaps a little more flowy like the girl. I don't want the Tessies's on the T in grey Almost there.
Love the smile the blue eyes etc. good job
Draft #12
Great job Can you get rid of the headband please? I will show my daughter tonight but I like that dress back and bracelets We are almost there.
Thanks
#10 draft
Agaim I really like it,but could you capitalize first T of Tessie's and it's missing the apostophe. I lik the shading of the colors very much. Also is there a way to make the font on just( Tessies's on the )a little more feminine or flirty. The last T as I mentioned has to be strong in the circle, maybe a black circle or dark pink but the beginning script could be a little less strong Thank you!
Draft #10
Really like it. Please change the last T to be inside a circle like the real T symbol for the MBTA in Boston. It's the actual subway logo for Boston
Thank you.
Like font
Draft #9
Can you please use dress from draft #5 I'm sorry but my daughter loves that dress!!!!!
No anklet same pose same hair (only darker) and with necklace Same T logo from #9 we are just going back to your original dress
Thanks
#9 Draft
No anklet, please make bracelets look like beads not wristbands
Can hair be a little wavy and eyes a little rounder and not quite so black and her mouth a smile not an oval
Thanks
Draft#9
We're getting there. Your dress in draft #8 was a better style than my idea! It was more flirty!!!! Please go back to that purple dress but make it shorter.Tessie (the girl) probably should be a little shorter as she is suppose to be a preteen.Even though I suggested a head band its not good.It's not as simple. Just leave bracelets.Love the bottom clean thanks for getting rid of other stuff. Good job We're almost there
Draft #8
Looking good. Please go back and make Tessie's dress that purple color and make her dress shorter.Also she needs a pink headband and brcelets that we can see, maybe alternating black, pink and purple.
I like it.
Why is there another Tessie's on the T on the bottom? Can you get rid of that so it's cleaner looking.
Thanks again
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Porteur du Projet
We are waiting to see tessie with dark hair?
Am I not looking in the right place?
Karen
Porteur du Projet
As you know you are the winner! Great job we are so pleased.
We just have 1 favor. Could we have everything exactly the same but see Tessie with brown hair instead of the blondish-red. We may not change it but we would just like to see what she looks like.'Thanks again for your patience and hard work
karen
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-Liz
Porteur du Projet
Love the bag!!!! It is perfect, the color and across the body I really think you nailed it. You only have to get rid of the leather jacket on the shoulder because you can't tell what it is. Maybe Tessie's arm that is holding the top of jacket can just move over a little as if it is holding onto the strap of the messenger bag. I think when you fix that we may have a winner!!!!! Karen
Porteur du Projet
TEMOY
Amazing job!!!! Consensus is leave the boots. We just need to fix the purse and we're done. Try either hanging from her side instead of leather jacket or cross body (messenger style) and we'll make a final pick
As I said before, I love the arms so don't change her stance if you don't have too.
Thanks again
Karen
colors are awesome
Porteur du Projet
Temoy
I love it! I like the colors better, I like the strength and size of the girl. Love the background color of card
I do think I like the boots. I know I said sling a jacket over her shoulder but I can't tell what it is. Could she just have a purse hanging from that same shoulder? Love the way you have both her arms positioned. I will ask my partner if she prefers shoes or boots but I am very happy. Almost there! Karen
Porteur du Projet
Temoy
I love this!! I hope you got my latest suggetions because this is going to be great!!!!! Just a few tweaks
Thanks
Karen
Porteur du Projet
We love the girl, we're just wondering if there's a way to make her a little edgier looking. Just a little hipper if possible. Maybe the color needs to be a little darker or a cool leather jacket thrown over 1 shoulder or maybe she's in awesome boots Can you put an apostrophe in Tessie's
Love the way she's standing and the big T in black, just need to tweak her a bit.Give me a couple of your ideas cause I love this logo
Thanks so much
Porteur du Projet
I like the T in pink just make it smaller please.Also put both words( on the) in black outside of circle. More feminine font and try adding a sketch of girl as previously mentioned Thank you
Porteur du Projet
Also, T in circle doesn't have to be quite so large either. It kind of is too big in relation to the other words
Porteur du Projet
In addition to my comments about the font last night, everyone likes the girl you had before in the same dress, same bracelets and shoes but with the blonde hair. can I see what she looks like again like that? Thanks again
Porteur du Projet
Love the colors and the T in circle. The apostrophe is after the last e before the s.
Can you make the font on (Tessie's on the)a little more flirty not so stuctured. Also, we would like a sketch at the end of logo with a young preteen girl in a short flowy dress in hot pink or purple wearing beaded bracelets and heels. Can you try adding that for us to see?
Thanks so much Great beginning!!!
Porteur du Projet
Just a little fine tuning. The girl is great! Can you make the T in the circle a little smaller. Love the background color of card but now I'm wondering if you can try putting all the letters in the hot pink and softening the font. Perhaps a little more flowy like the girl. I don't want the Tessies's on the T in grey Almost there.
Love the smile the blue eyes etc. good job
Porteur du Projet
Great job Can you get rid of the headband please? I will show my daughter tonight but I like that dress back and bracelets We are almost there.
Thanks
Employé(e)
Porteur du Projet
Agaim I really like it,but could you capitalize first T of Tessie's and it's missing the apostophe. I lik the shading of the colors very much. Also is there a way to make the font on just( Tessies's on the )a little more feminine or flirty. The last T as I mentioned has to be strong in the circle, maybe a black circle or dark pink but the beginning script could be a little less strong Thank you!
Porteur du Projet
Really like it. Please change the last T to be inside a circle like the real T symbol for the MBTA in Boston. It's the actual subway logo for Boston
Thank you.
Like font
Porteur du Projet
Porteur du Projet
Can you please use dress from draft #5 I'm sorry but my daughter loves that dress!!!!!
No anklet same pose same hair (only darker) and with necklace Same T logo from #9 we are just going back to your original dress
Thanks
Porteur du Projet
Porteur du Projet
No anklet, please make bracelets look like beads not wristbands
Can hair be a little wavy and eyes a little rounder and not quite so black and her mouth a smile not an oval
Thanks
Porteur du Projet
Sorry I forgot to say the box around Tessie can go too
Thanks
P.S. Didn't realize how good your swingy purple dress was till I saw my idea on the pink Yuk!
Porteur du Projet
We're getting there. Your dress in draft #8 was a better style than my idea! It was more flirty!!!! Please go back to that purple dress but make it shorter.Tessie (the girl) probably should be a little shorter as she is suppose to be a preteen.Even though I suggested a head band its not good.It's not as simple. Just leave bracelets.Love the bottom clean thanks for getting rid of other stuff. Good job We're almost there
Porteur du Projet
Looking good. Please go back and make Tessie's dress that purple color and make her dress shorter.Also she needs a pink headband and brcelets that we can see, maybe alternating black, pink and purple.
I like it.
Why is there another Tessie's on the T on the bottom? Can you get rid of that so it's cleaner looking.
Thanks again
Porteur du Projet
Tessie's has an apostophe Love the T in the circle