I agree... when designing I am usually looking at everything zoomed in really close. Let me work on the text a bit, I can make it pop and stand out a little more.
ginobrown. #50. Thank you for your quick responses. You have been very "on the mark". I like the green addition, but it seems a bit more difficult to read. Not sure what to do. I think it may need the color, but don't want to sacrifice the crispness. Any ideas? Maybe some outlining of then green with the darker brown? Do your magic... Thank you for your patience!
Thanks! Here it is with the house wine of the south in green. I'm also going to show you a couple with more of an aged look... finnishing them now. Hope you like!
ginobrown, really like your work would like to see some of the same designs with "House wine of the south" placed above "sweet tea" so that it reads "house wine of the south, sweet tea" Thanks
#13 Please make the shape more oval aged tea stained background and more interesting font. As I have stated in previous posts please place House Wine of the South above Sweet tea. Thanks for your submission.
#7 You are on the right track. Can you make the background more aged looking and make "House Wine of the South" longer and more prominent than "Sweet Tea" without making Sweet Tea smaller.House wine of the South should go above Sweet tea Also lose the design outside the oval. The words need to be the focus not the design around it so much. #5 try again with different fonts. We like the simplicity of your design #8, #9, #10, #11, #12. great work but too ornate. Thanks everyone please keep trying.
#5. Try a different font for the words "SWEET TEA" that are less western. Think more Gone With the Wind and less Bonanza. I like that it looks bold and distinct, so keep that aspect.
Julia Yates, draft #1. Please try this label in oval shape. The aged look you have chosen is good. Please make "House Wine of the South" a bit more prominent. Give us one rendition with the "House" phrase as positioned and one with the "House" phrase all together, curved in top half of oval. Again, the aged color of the background is good.
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