Could you make the card version have the same logo on both sides? MAke sure the ring goes the same way as in the original design provided, but ONLY on the paper card design, NOT the plastic card.
draft #65
Could you try the circle going over the back like draft #56 ? I still want TB on both side, but I want a circley thing going over the side/top too.
draft #63
The logo and wording on the pen are backwards... Also, it's not the pen that I sent over, any chance you could do it on a pen like that? I was assuming you would put the name of the company, logo or something on the clip on a pen similar to the biro I sent over.
Also, any chance you could invert the ring so that the TB can be pushed over further to the left?
Perhaps that could be the second design of the card? Could you put them all together in a single submission when done?
I prefer draft #59 to draft #60
draft #59 looks a little bit ore minimalistic and sleek. Could you also do draft #59 with rounded edges? I've been told plastic cards with edges are a health and safety issue!!! :)
draft #59
I like the design of the card... Is there anything you can do so the back to make it a little more different to the front? I REALLY do like how it's kind of a mirror image, it looks really good, but the front and back look very similar, it's not a bad thing, but maybe you can do something to make the back a little more interesting?
Please put this card in with the envelop and letterhead so that I can pick it all if nothing better comes up.
how about the front of draft #57 and the back of draft #56 ?
Also in regards to the plastic card, the box for TB on the front would be visible from the back, could you reflect this in your design so that I can see what it would really look like? I have a feeling it might not look too great.
The problem with draft #57 is that white writing is always hard to read (for most anyway).
The problem with draft #56 is that the top and bottom blue bards don't look great. Could you rework the front of draft #56 so that it looks a little better? I don't how you can do this but you've already done some great work, so I'm sure you'll manage! :)
*** TO ALL (Design Notes) ***
1) White writing is hard to read on cards.
2) My logo should be visible
3) I chose a blue logo, so if you change the colour of it do something BETTER, don't just make it grey.
4) I want to see the good designs in a Letterhead, Envelope, Card AND Pen.
5) Don't just stick my logo on a pen, colour the pen, thee are going to be given to clients so they need to look good!
5) Black cards aren't usually manufactured too well, plus when they bend/tear a little the white is visible! Stay away from black cards!
6) If you have any questions please message me. I read all messages, but all comments regarding designs will be posted here.
Would it be possible to have little symbols for email, phone, website & twitter? In the same blue colour, maybe still two-tone but I don't know how good the two-tone effect would look on symbols...
I don't like the envelope with the white on the back (I don't think I do anyway)...
Could we try the card with colours at the top and bottom instead of plastic? Plastic cards are harder to source and much harder for manufacturers to get right, if possible I'd like to find a card design which doesn't have to be plastic...
25 Commentaire récents
Porteur du Projet
Will you bundle all of your designs, even the rejected ones together if I pick your design?
Porteur du Projet
Could you make the card version have the same logo on both sides? MAke sure the ring goes the same way as in the original design provided, but ONLY on the paper card design, NOT the plastic card.
Porteur du Projet
Also, could you bundle everything together so that I can get everything if/when I pick? Including the white backed envelope, other cards etc..
Porteur du Projet
Could you try the circle going over the back like draft #56 ? I still want TB on both side, but I want a circley thing going over the side/top too.
Porteur du Projet
If there is not at minimum a business card, letterhead and envelope design with your submission it will not be considered when the project is closed.
The extras I would *like* are:
Business card
Letterhead
Envelope
Compliments slip
Pen design
Porteur du Projet
The logo and wording on the pen are backwards... Also, it's not the pen that I sent over, any chance you could do it on a pen like that? I was assuming you would put the name of the company, logo or something on the clip on a pen similar to the biro I sent over.
Also, any chance you could invert the ring so that the TB can be pushed over further to the left?
Perhaps that could be the second design of the card? Could you put them all together in a single submission when done?
Thanks
Porteur du Projet
draft #59 looks a little bit ore minimalistic and sleek. Could you also do draft #59 with rounded edges? I've been told plastic cards with edges are a health and safety issue!!! :)
Porteur du Projet
I like the design of the card... Is there anything you can do so the back to make it a little more different to the front? I REALLY do like how it's kind of a mirror image, it looks really good, but the front and back look very similar, it's not a bad thing, but maybe you can do something to make the back a little more interesting?
Please put this card in with the envelop and letterhead so that I can pick it all if nothing better comes up.
Also, please put together a pen design!
Porteur du Projet
Also in regards to the plastic card, the box for TB on the front would be visible from the back, could you reflect this in your design so that I can see what it would really look like? I have a feeling it might not look too great.
The problem with draft #57 is that white writing is always hard to read (for most anyway).
The problem with draft #56 is that the top and bottom blue bards don't look great. Could you rework the front of draft #56 so that it looks a little better? I don't how you can do this but you've already done some great work, so I'm sure you'll manage! :)
Porteur du Projet
1) White writing is hard to read on cards.
2) My logo should be visible
3) I chose a blue logo, so if you change the colour of it do something BETTER, don't just make it grey.
4) I want to see the good designs in a Letterhead, Envelope, Card AND Pen.
5) Don't just stick my logo on a pen, colour the pen, thee are going to be given to clients so they need to look good!
5) Black cards aren't usually manufactured too well, plus when they bend/tear a little the white is visible! Stay away from black cards!
6) If you have any questions please message me. I read all messages, but all comments regarding designs will be posted here.
Porteur du Projet
white writing is too hard to read...
The logo in grey doesn't look great.
draft #54 draft #55
The card looks dirty... Not much more to say than people would assume I've kept it in my wallet too long!
Porteur du Projet
Also, the ball on the back (in the ringy thing) should be visible.
Porteur du Projet
I like the front, I don't like the dots on either side though. Also could we try a small-ish line under the title?
The back doesn't look great, part of the logo is the box and you can't see it at all on the back. Perhaps if the TB were bigger it would look better?
Porteur du Projet
could you change the lines on the front to match the logo colour and change the back completely? The black on blue doesn't work for me.
Porteur du Projet
The back is hard to read and the black on the front looks strange with the blue logo.
Porteur du Projet
Could you get rid of the whitespace in the logo where it's over the blue line?
Porteur du Projet
Could you make the line look as though it's part of the logo? Perhaps center it a little?
Porteur du Projet
I like the general concept, but white writing is usually hard to read on cards...
Porteur du Projet
I don't like white writing on cards.
Porteur du Projet
Porteur du Projet
I'm not a bit fan of the things at the bottom, they seem "cheap".
Also I'm looking for a card with a front and a back, any ideas for a back for draft #23 ?
Porteur du Projet
Porteur du Projet
I don't like the envelope with the white on the back (I don't think I do anyway)...
Could we try the card with colours at the top and bottom instead of plastic? Plastic cards are harder to source and much harder for manufacturers to get right, if possible I'd like to find a card design which doesn't have to be plastic...
Porteur du Projet
I see why the line is missing now... Could we perhaps still try a line but a horizontal one?
Please also read my previous comment.
I'm off to watch some TV, I'll be back to check up on things in a couple of hours.
Thanks again.