12 juillet 2011 06:29 toddvandehey Porteur du Projet
@pensive
moving the logo to the middle and merging it into the stripe is an interesting idea. It works ok with the cards, though it brings the logo too close toe the bull silhouette in my opinion. I don't think it works well with the stationery
11 juillet 2011 16:55 toddvandehey Porteur du Projet
@momee
119 is your best work yet.
I like the black front card with the contact info and name on the same side. Can you make the bull silhouette on the opposite side of this card stand out a bit more?
11 juillet 2011 10:28 toddvandehey Porteur du Projet
@textimage
i like the idea of turning the business card on its side. the concept looks good, but can we please give it a more solid professional look in terms of the fonts, alignments, and logos used?
Thanks.
11 juillet 2011 10:27 toddvandehey Porteur du Projet
@textimage
i like the idea of turning the business card on its side. the concept looks good, but can we please give it a more solid professional look in terms of the fonts, alignments, and logos used?
Thanks.
11 juillet 2011 10:26 toddvandehey Porteur du Projet
@textimage
i like the idea of turning the business card on its side. the concept looks good, but can we please give it a more solid professional look in terms of the fonts, alignments, and logos used?
Thanks.
11 juillet 2011 04:55 toddvandehey Porteur du Projet
@akreationz
#111 is still my favorite of your designs, though I do think the envelope in #114 is an improvement
10 juillet 2011 14:16 toddvandehey Porteur du Projet
@momee...
those are the two that I like in terms of the business cards
10 juillet 2011 14:16 toddvandehey Porteur du Projet
@akreationz
Thanks for the submissions, they look pretty good.
#110 and #111 are good in general. I like the stationery better than the cards, and I don't really like the design on the black side of the cards.
The key words to keep in mind are simple and elegant.
I like #104 a lot. favorites for the "front" side are top left, bottom middle and both on the right. I prefer the black for the back side, but I guess it also depends which front side it goes with.
I like the stationery. The card still needs some work. I'm not sure what advice to give exactly, but maybe something a bit more classy and traditional, rather than super modern.
@pensive... white card on far right in #48 is better than white card in #70... also black and blue cards with the bull and slogans are better with more contrast, like in 48.
@Achiver... 65 is definitely an improvement. One minor thing is that if I mail the second envelope, the stamp would go right on top of the bull, which seems a bit silly. Can you move the bull in far enough to fit a stamp.
The envelopes and stationery look pretty good, but just a bit too plain. Can we add a LITTLE BIT more style and still keep them classy and professional?
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moving the logo to the middle and merging it into the stripe is an interesting idea. It works ok with the cards, though it brings the logo too close toe the bull silhouette in my opinion. I don't think it works well with the stationery
Porteur du Projet
119 is your best work yet.
I like the black front card with the contact info and name on the same side. Can you make the bull silhouette on the opposite side of this card stand out a bit more?
Porteur du Projet
i like the idea of turning the business card on its side. the concept looks good, but can we please give it a more solid professional look in terms of the fonts, alignments, and logos used?
Thanks.
Porteur du Projet
i like the idea of turning the business card on its side. the concept looks good, but can we please give it a more solid professional look in terms of the fonts, alignments, and logos used?
Thanks.
Porteur du Projet
i like the idea of turning the business card on its side. the concept looks good, but can we please give it a more solid professional look in terms of the fonts, alignments, and logos used?
Thanks.
Porteur du Projet
#111 is still my favorite of your designs, though I do think the envelope in #114 is an improvement
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those are the two that I like in terms of the business cards
Porteur du Projet
Thanks for the submissions, they look pretty good.
#110 and #111 are good in general. I like the stationery better than the cards, and I don't really like the design on the black side of the cards.
The key words to keep in mind are simple and elegant.
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I like #104 a lot. favorites for the "front" side are top left, bottom middle and both on the right. I prefer the black for the back side, but I guess it also depends which front side it goes with.
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I'd like to see more that are similar to that.
thanks.
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I like the stationery. The card still needs some work. I'm not sure what advice to give exactly, but maybe something a bit more classy and traditional, rather than super modern.
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the curved line design is interesting... better in black, at least as it stands currently.
The contact information is awkwardly placed though and looks cluttered and jammed together both on the card and the stationery
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can we do the style of #90, but the colors of #75
so #90 but in blue.
the back of the envelope may need a border around the logo for contrast, but otherwise it should just be a color change. Thanks.
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specifically I like the bottom left in both, top right in 78 and top left in 77.
what else can you do similar to these, or perhaps combining the ideas of both?
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the back of the envelope is better now, but I liked the stripe on the bottom of the envelope in the previous versions. Please bring that back
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I like the envelope in #70 best
stationery between 70 and 72 about equal... can we do something halfway between the two?
I prefer the bull silhouette on the stationery bigger as in 70 though.
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I like #66 a lot. Almost gave it 4 stars instead of 3.
Couple of things that could be improved. Mostly text related.
-Try a more 'serious' font... maybe something more traditional or with a serif
-Try to make the text on the "back" side (with bull and two slogans) more readable somehow, either by making it bigger or by increasing the contrast.
thanks
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The envelopes and stationery look pretty good, but just a bit too plain. Can we add a LITTLE BIT more style and still keep them classy and professional?
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@waterdropdesign... but also for everybody
on stationary and fax form,
-They are a bit too plain.
-Logo at top would be better justified either right or left than centered
on envelopes
-logo could go top left with return address