Draft #29 - Like this font better and the change to "Premium Artisan Honey". I don't really like the decorative element on either side of the phrase though. Can I see something else in its place?
Draft # 26 by lekvector - I like this much better. Not sure about the text/tag line on the bottom. It appears to have too much of an angle, Maybe it's the font, something not right it about it though. Maybe yo can try something different like "Premium Artisan Honey" or "Natural (insert the scroll graphic) "Organic". I guess just experiment a bit.
Draft #19 by lekvector - I like this quite a lot. I would like the bottom line to read, "Organic Premium Honey". ALso, I noticed that on this draft, the little design was omitted from the right side of the bottom line.
Draft #17 by lekvector - I like this, but it's still not quite right. Maybe it's the font or the blocked look - I'm not sure. Anyhow, try tweaking it a little. - Thanks
29 février 2012 11:07 operacoach Porteur du Projet
Daft #13 by artguy. I think that's about got it. I would like to experiment with the size of the bee. Maybe just a little bit larger, but in the same place on the logo.
29 février 2012 10:05 operacoach Porteur du Projet
Draft #12 by artguy: I like everything about this one except the grey smudging behind the word, "Leopold Brothers". I would like to see this same design with the following changes:
1. The smudge/shadowing removed behind the words, "Leopold Brothers".
2. The bee moved up a little further as in Draft #7.
Thanks for working with me on this. I think we're almost there.
29 février 2012 08:39 operacoach Porteur du Projet
Draft # 11 by artguy. I am liking this more and more. I am wondering if all the text will be clearly visible when used on a honey jar label. Can we experiment with makeing the words, "Leopold Brothers" just a little more prominent? It may also be wise to do that with the words, "natural organic". Can we use a honey bee that is somewhere between the size used in draft #7 and this one. I hope this is not too confusing, because I really like this concept a lot. Ultimately it has too look good on a label and in print. - Thanks a million!
28 février 2012 14:29 operacoach Porteur du Projet
Draft #7 by artguy - Now this is more like it. Thank you for paying attention to my brief. At this point, I would like to see some variations of this design. For instance, changing the size of the bee, color changes and so on. In addition, I would like to add the words, "Leopold Brothers" or "Leopold Bros." as in "Leopold Brothers Spring Hill Honey Company". Maybe that can be accomplished with some type of scroll - just a thought. If you need the room, we can drop the words, "farm fresh". Use your own creativity and best judgement.
28 février 2012 05:05 operacoach Porteur du Projet
Draft #4 by DesignerHawk is not acceptable for the following reasons:
1. Too bland
2. Too Small
3. Unsuitble for use on a label.
Draft #5 by ARdes is getting closer but is still not what I'm looking for in terms of being colorful and eye-catching. All the drafts seem to be releuctant to use any colors besides brown and gold.
27 février 2012 19:48 operacoach Porteur du Projet
Draft #2 by ARdes is getting closer, but still falls short for the following reasons:
1. Not colorful and thus, too bland
2. Not suitable for a colorful label
I'm looking for something elegant and artistic.
27 février 2012 14:36 operacoach Porteur du Projet
Draft #1 by brillsolutions is not acceptable for the following reasons;
1. Does not follow description set forth in the design brief.
2. Far too simplistic.
3. Not suitable for use in labeling.
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1. The smudge/shadowing removed behind the words, "Leopold Brothers".
2. The bee moved up a little further as in Draft #7.
Thanks for working with me on this. I think we're almost there.
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1. Too bland
2. Too Small
3. Unsuitble for use on a label.
Draft #5 by ARdes is getting closer but is still not what I'm looking for in terms of being colorful and eye-catching. All the drafts seem to be releuctant to use any colors besides brown and gold.
Porteur du Projet
1. Not colorful and thus, too bland
2. Not suitable for a colorful label
I'm looking for something elegant and artistic.
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1. Does not follow description set forth in the design brief.
2. Far too simplistic.
3. Not suitable for use in labeling.