#24 -- Is it possible to incorporate "Fresh Seltzers and Gourmet Italian Sodas" around the bottom radius of the logo, like you did in submission #5. I just need the text to be darker and more prominent so it stands out. I also liked the way that you had written "Soda" and "Stop" in submission #5. Is it possible to incorporate that look and style into Submission #24
#5--I also like this concept. However, the word "The" is getting lost in the bubbles in the upper right. Possibly this word could be respositioned on the upper left area of the logo. The "bubbles" in the upper poriton might be a bit large. Possibly a bit smaller a more of them. A different type of "action" image might help as well. Something that denotes "crisp, or crackling" might work as well---usually you see these expressions in images that denote fireworks or firecrackers popping and exploding. A different color for the bottom text might be advisable so the product description is just noticeable as the name.
Design #10 and #11--I love the overall concept. Shows excitement and clearly identifies the concept. I am concerned about image #11 with the white lettering describing the actual product. I feel that the white lettering is not going to grab their attention, because my eyes keep drifting upwards to the main body of the logo..which is not a bad thing.
Design #10 and #11--I love the overall concept. Shows excitement and clearly identifies the concept. I am concerned about image #11 with the white lettering describing the actual product. I feel that the white lettering is not going to grab their attention, because my eyes keep drifting upwards to the main body of the logo..which is not a bad thing.
Eg Draft #3-- I like the gradient shading from the ends to the center. I also like the font with the emphasis on the "d" and "p". I like the fact that you didn't box yourself strictly in a "stop sign" but that you incorporated the colors. Would it be possible to see a little "action" in the portion above the "a Stop" with something representing carbonation bubbles or visually demonstrating popping and fizzing of fresh seltzer? Would it be possible to somehow dress up the text at the bottom in a different font or color to draw attention to the product?
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