Draft #39 and #40 are good design. I like that the text "Performance Vision" comes out strong in this Logo.
I like drafts #50 and #51 as well.
From the new color variations by the concept of #24 i liked first concept #48 most but the colors in concept #45 are a bit stronger, although it might be a bit to blue.
I would like to see #45 with the text in Blue and Black to make the text as strong as it appears in concept #21 and #40. And I would like to see the globe a bit smaller or the text a bit larger as in #24.
Review until draft#33.
I have had a critical look at all your logo's and made some evaluation about
visual appearance,
freshness of the logo,
appearance both on screen and in color print and black/white print
balance
association of the logo.
Draft#9/#11 I miss the balance between "Performance" and "Vision" I think they are good designs but are not working for me.
Draft #12 is nice and I still like the fresh look of design #13 but in black/white print both designs are loosing some of its attractiveness.
Draft #19 I get a parking sign association.
Draft #20 is really nice and fresh looking logo, but I don't like the eye concept. I think this good be great for an optician but I look for an association into Performance within the field of internet/IT.
Draft #21 Is a good and well balanced logo.
Draft #22 nice and fresh, but I get more business consultancy association, it's not working for me.
Draft #23/#24 I like Draft #23 but #24 is my favorite sofar. I like the shape, subtle 3d effect and its fresh appearance and also.
Draft #25 is not working for me.
Draft #27 and #28 are well balanced. I am not attracted by the symbol in #27, the arrows are more dynamic.
Draft #30 I like the 3-d effects when enlarged on the screen, but overall it is missing some freshness and not that recognizable when printed in color and too dark when printed in balck/white.
Draft #32 is fresh looking, but I miss the balance in the text and I get more the association for a paint shop. I don't like the color combination of #33 "Performance" is hardly readable while the text also plays an important role in my logo.
Review until draft #18 I would pick #13 as best. But I see some nice drafts coming by I will provide more detailed feedback about tomorrow. I see some nice ideas in the latest additions but I can not decide right now which concept I like most.
Comments after drafts #1/#6:
In general there is to much focus on 'eye' symbol. For me Performance is the key word and Vision is subordinate to Performance in the Logo (my business is about Performance). In most designs the symbol is to big related to the Text. The text "Performance Vision" is an important part of the logo. I think I prefer a logo based on this text with a symbol positioned left to it or maybe on top of it.
Draft #1 Nice start! I think so far the best design. I would prefer a logo with the symbol left of the text. In this case the symbol should be smaller and the text larger.
Draft #2, I prefer the symbol to be visually more appearing like one element (composed) like design #1.
Draft #3 is to detailed, I like more simpler designs (Less is More principle) and I don't want the eye principle or it should be subtle without noticing it.
Draft #4 To much focus on V. Performance is leading, so 'if' letters are used as a base for the symbol 'P' should be the focus on and 'V' might be added as additional).
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I like drafts #50 and #51 as well.
From the new color variations by the concept of #24 i liked first concept #48 most but the colors in concept #45 are a bit stronger, although it might be a bit to blue.
I would like to see #45 with the text in Blue and Black to make the text as strong as it appears in concept #21 and #40. And I would like to see the globe a bit smaller or the text a bit larger as in #24.
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I will come with my feedback tomorrow.
I really like it that I can see my feedback and remarks in the latest drafts!
Good Quality work guys!
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I have had a critical look at all your logo's and made some evaluation about
visual appearance,
freshness of the logo,
appearance both on screen and in color print and black/white print
balance
association of the logo.
Sofar draft #24 is my favorite.
Keep up the good work!
Draft#9/#11 I miss the balance between "Performance" and "Vision" I think they are good designs but are not working for me.
Draft #12 is nice and I still like the fresh look of design #13 but in black/white print both designs are loosing some of its attractiveness.
Draft #19 I get a parking sign association.
Draft #20 is really nice and fresh looking logo, but I don't like the eye concept. I think this good be great for an optician but I look for an association into Performance within the field of internet/IT.
Draft #21 Is a good and well balanced logo.
Draft #22 nice and fresh, but I get more business consultancy association, it's not working for me.
Draft #23/#24 I like Draft #23 but #24 is my favorite sofar. I like the shape, subtle 3d effect and its fresh appearance and also.
Draft #25 is not working for me.
Draft #27 and #28 are well balanced. I am not attracted by the symbol in #27, the arrows are more dynamic.
Draft #30 I like the 3-d effects when enlarged on the screen, but overall it is missing some freshness and not that recognizable when printed in color and too dark when printed in balck/white.
Draft #32 is fresh looking, but I miss the balance in the text and I get more the association for a paint shop. I don't like the color combination of #33 "Performance" is hardly readable while the text also plays an important role in my logo.
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In general there is to much focus on 'eye' symbol. For me Performance is the key word and Vision is subordinate to Performance in the Logo (my business is about Performance). In most designs the symbol is to big related to the Text. The text "Performance Vision" is an important part of the logo. I think I prefer a logo based on this text with a symbol positioned left to it or maybe on top of it.
Draft #1 Nice start! I think so far the best design. I would prefer a logo with the symbol left of the text. In this case the symbol should be smaller and the text larger.
Draft #2, I prefer the symbol to be visually more appearing like one element (composed) like design #1.
Draft #3 is to detailed, I like more simpler designs (Less is More principle) and I don't want the eye principle or it should be subtle without noticing it.
Draft #4 To much focus on V. Performance is leading, so 'if' letters are used as a base for the symbol 'P' should be the focus on and 'V' might be added as additional).