Draft #38 - like top and bottom right designs. Please use black. Blue is wrong. would like to see how tag line can be integrated as well. You can find it in the brief. Shorten hyphen to bring S closer and would also like to see one design without the hyphen. Thanks.
Thanks for the latest drafts! Much improved. Prefer the text outside the initials as per drafts #33, #35 and #37. #33 and #35 the best as initials are softer and rounded. The S looks a little too much like a 5; people make ask if my company name is dh5! Try and make the S similar to the d and h without reducing its coverage. Give me one draft w/o the hyphen so I can see what it looks like.
Thanks for the revisions. Will consider extending deadline for delivery by a further 3-days to allow additional designs based on a slightly varied brief > please submit designs without incorporation of dragon and yin/yang. This means only initials DHS and text - Security Vehicle Solutions. Full interpretation of dhs/DHS or combination of upper / power case. I like text written in drafts #21 and 28. In addition, you are free to use blue. Similar to my original brief, I want to keep the logo simple, elegant, strong and of a premium quality. You are free to intepret different fonts and interplay of letters. Please do not forget the hyphen.
Draft#12 - like the dragon encircled around the yin/yang but this looks like the logo leaving the DH-S as an after thought? Is there anywhere of incorporating this into the S of DH-S or even making it like an S. You might have to recolour a little to separate the yin/yang from the dragon. When printed, it could all intertwine.
Draft #13-14 - prefer #12
Draft #15 - very nice. Please make text in grey and refer to #8 for style. Recolour dragon to incorporate more yellow/orange - too black. Some external comments that it looks a little cartoonish but really like how you have made it the 'S' and also how you have incorporated the d and h. Interested to see how text would look like as per #8 (bottom).
In the interests of time, I will respond as soon as a design draft comes in. Thanks all.
#3 - #4 > dragon is too western. No need for fire breathing (eastern dragons are not associated with this). Have a look at www.crystalinks.com/chinadragons for guidance. Like stylized spacing between d and h on #4 (bottom pic); thunderbolt is overly stylized and not necessary. Would still like to see some creativity with the d and h. Try to incorporate yin and yang as per #2. Like how you have spaced and placed text - security vehicle solutions but focus and emphasis should be on initials. Could you tone it / lighten it down more or use combo of upper / lower case?
Thanks. Pls remove my name. It's not necessary. Only the initials. Second, please use capital letters for the SVS of Security Vehicle Solutions. Can you perhaps look to incorporate the d and h together? The S of DHS is a little too plain. Can you try and stylize the dragon a little more, perhaps by incorporating a little more colour. At this stage, I am open to other interpretations, so let your creative mind run free! Look forward to seeing a few more ideas.
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Draft #13-14 - prefer #12
Draft #15 - very nice. Please make text in grey and refer to #8 for style. Recolour dragon to incorporate more yellow/orange - too black. Some external comments that it looks a little cartoonish but really like how you have made it the 'S' and also how you have incorporated the d and h. Interested to see how text would look like as per #8 (bottom).
In the interests of time, I will respond as soon as a design draft comes in. Thanks all.
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