Draft #14, I sent you my last remarks before the session ended but I have just seen that these have not been incorporated. Could you please do them. I will go for your design but I would like to have my last comments incorporated first. When I did them the contest was still opened.
Draft #14, herewith the final remarks: as regards the rim of the video, please put an hyphen between A Marathon Experience and New York City ..... Now there is no space between the subtitles. It should appear like this:
A Marathon Experience - New York City Marathon 2011
Please replace the back cover text by the following one:
Soda Bodyfit has been training people to run marathons for almost a decade. We train them to run for life: perhaps fast, definitely far, but also for and with fun. We have been training with beginners and experienced runners to prepare them for the famous New York Marathon, one of the most beautiful long distance races and probably also one of the hardest.
Every year again, we are in awe of the drive and motivation of each single one of the runners we work with, the physical and emotional pain they manage to overcome – all with that one goal, to get in such good shape that they’re able the run a full marathon. Last year, we shot a fantastic video to record the experience of the group of 30 people who trained with us for the marathon. It gives a pretty good impression of the highs and lows you go through when training for such an event. We hope you’ll enjoy watching it and will get the urge to put on your running shoes too!
Our thanks to all the Running Stars who ran the New York Marathon with us in the past years, and we very much look forward to the ones who will be running with us in the future.
draft #13, could you please make the drawing run to the right and not to the left? Thanks.Could you also put in the subtitle: A Marathon Experience - New York .....
Herewith the text for the back cover:
'Soda Bodyfit has been training people to run marathons for almost a decade. Regardless if they are beginners or experienced runners, the motivation to run a full marathon and the emotion of crossing the finish line is the same for everyone.
Last year, a group of thirty people ran the New York City Marathon with us. They experienced the beauty and difficulty of this famous event. We captured their experience and emotion on this documentary video.
We would like to thank all the Running Stars that have run marathons with us so far. If you are motivated to run a marathon in the future, this is your invitation to get moving and make it happen!'.
Draft #10. Please see the text above for the back cover. Could you please write down the titel of the dvd on the dvd spine? I think you forgot to do it. Thanks
Designer of draft #1, have you seen my previous comment? I will send you the text to place on the back cover.
Draft #4, please delete the logo of the Ing. Instead of it, please place the logo of Soda Bodyfit in black. I will send you the text to place on the back cover today.
Could you please make a draft with the colour in light grey instead of yellow? Thanks
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A Marathon Experience - New York City Marathon 2011
Please replace the back cover text by the following one:
Soda Bodyfit has been training people to run marathons for almost a decade. We train them to run for life: perhaps fast, definitely far, but also for and with fun. We have been training with beginners and experienced runners to prepare them for the famous New York Marathon, one of the most beautiful long distance races and probably also one of the hardest.
Every year again, we are in awe of the drive and motivation of each single one of the runners we work with, the physical and emotional pain they manage to overcome – all with that one goal, to get in such good shape that they’re able the run a full marathon. Last year, we shot a fantastic video to record the experience of the group of 30 people who trained with us for the marathon. It gives a pretty good impression of the highs and lows you go through when training for such an event. We hope you’ll enjoy watching it and will get the urge to put on your running shoes too!
Our thanks to all the Running Stars who ran the New York Marathon with us in the past years, and we very much look forward to the ones who will be running with us in the future.
Thanks a lot for your changes!
Luz
Porteur du Projet
Herewith the text for the back cover:
'Soda Bodyfit has been training people to run marathons for almost a decade. Regardless if they are beginners or experienced runners, the motivation to run a full marathon and the emotion of crossing the finish line is the same for everyone.
Last year, a group of thirty people ran the New York City Marathon with us. They experienced the beauty and difficulty of this famous event. We captured their experience and emotion on this documentary video.
We would like to thank all the Running Stars that have run marathons with us so far. If you are motivated to run a marathon in the future, this is your invitation to get moving and make it happen!'.
Draft #10. Please see the text above for the back cover. Could you please write down the titel of the dvd on the dvd spine? I think you forgot to do it. Thanks
Thank you
Porteur du Projet
Draft #4, please delete the logo of the Ing. Instead of it, please place the logo of Soda Bodyfit in black. I will send you the text to place on the back cover today.
Could you please make a draft with the colour in light grey instead of yellow? Thanks
Porteur du Projet
Could you please make a sample but without the 'running people'? Just for me to see how I like it beter.
Thank you.
Maria