aLesS - This is a really intriguing submission. I like it but would like to see what you could do with it to make the company name - "Minor League Paper" - larger.
I am concerned that if I used this on a mailing label, letterhead, etc., that a consumer might need to squint closely to read the company name, due to both the sizing and the script font.
I do like the script font you chose, but paired with the relatively small size, it makes for a tough read.
Juayusta (#10) - Thanks for your submission. Your design is very similar to #3, #4 and #5. For this style of masthead logo - company name above tagline - I prefer the early versions by LilD3vil27 and I don't think revisions will lift your version to that level.
I would suggest taking a different approach and submitting a new version of a circular, ring or oval logo.
lild3vil27 - Love these designs. You definitely grasped the basic look I described in the brief.
On the circular logo, I like that you have inscribed the store name in the circle. Rather than using a solid red, would you please update the circle logo so that the circle is "ring" with a white center, rather than a solid red "ball". (See the Starbucks Coffee logo as an example, if I have not described this clearly). I would also like the "finest quality" tagline to become larger in this design.
The other designs you submitted are certainly still in the running as well.
Draft #1: I'm looking for a much more more illustrative design, both in shape (preferably circular or oval) and especially in font, which needs to be more distinctively retro (1950's -1960's feel. This comes off more like a contemporary rubber stamp. Thank you for your submission regardless.
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Porteur du Projet
I am concerned that if I used this on a mailing label, letterhead, etc., that a consumer might need to squint closely to read the company name, due to both the sizing and the script font.
I do like the script font you chose, but paired with the relatively small size, it makes for a tough read.
Porteur du Projet
I would suggest taking a different approach and submitting a new version of a circular, ring or oval logo.
Porteur du Projet
On the circular logo, I like that you have inscribed the store name in the circle. Rather than using a solid red, would you please update the circle logo so that the circle is "ring" with a white center, rather than a solid red "ball". (See the Starbucks Coffee logo as an example, if I have not described this clearly). I would also like the "finest quality" tagline to become larger in this design.
The other designs you submitted are certainly still in the running as well.
Porteur du Projet