30 octobre 2012 19:33 pfexpress2 Porteur du Projet
Designs #13 and #14 are getting close. The only thing I do not like is the Block-Aid type or look. This needs to be much more stand-out, bold, interesting or fun.
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30 octobre 2012 08:52 pfexpress2 Porteur du Projet
BTW Love how #12 shows the comp on the bottle very helpful. I would suggest that any winning design will show it this way as well as the flat of the lable so we can see the entire layout.
30 octobre 2012 08:51 pfexpress2 Porteur du Projet
#8 needs that flag or checked background. Change the dark type to something brighter. Make Block-Aid more fund. Maybe on these designs the By FVP bank should be the Footer on the bottles not complete with the product name. This would apply to the Miracle Boost version and Block-Aid version . Not the FVP motor treatment version in Project #1.
30 octobre 2012 08:48 pfexpress2 Porteur du Projet
On #12 I would suggest using an ingine graphic vs the pistons. I like this name of Block Aid first and larger and we could reduce the by FVP size to about half. I'm wanting to promote the Block-Aid idea much more than FVP. (Think of FVP as more of J & J or P & J on the produc lable but a more minor role. Color and typography look good. Try to come up with a more exciting typography for the Block-Aid. Make it more fun, blowing out the carbon, exploding, etc.
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29 octobre 2012 08:30 pfexpress2 Porteur du Projet
Please have a little more fun with this design. Block-Aid is supposed to convey the idea of this being a "first-aid" type product for your engine block. Maybe a super-hero type approach?
27 octobre 2012 07:40 pfexpress2 Porteur du Projet
Hello, The idea behind the Block-Aid name was to reference an Engine Block. I believe that in order for this name to make sense. There needs to be a 3D time perspective image of an engine on the front of the label. It needs to emphasize that this is a Block - Aid or and Aid to your Engine Block.
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Same type of comments for # 11
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Please only use images provided by the project holder. If in case source of images has not been provided, you are requested to use images from “www.thinkstockphotos.com”.
Images used from any other website or source will not be accepted. In case you are using images from “www.thinkstockphotos.com”, please make sure to keep a record of image ID numbers as contest winners will be required to provide those ID's.
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