draft#46
- in addition to last comments
- could you show a variation of the design with a rendering on a black background (the coloured and grey scale versions)
draft#56
- in addition to last comments
- could you show a variation of the design showing a rendering on a blab background (the coloured and grey scale versions)
draft#56
- liking this a lot
- the energy graphic currently looks like a crack on the ball and we suggest that the energy discharge should not touch the edges of the sphere
- we also would prefer that the 'energy discharge' graphic within the ball has another 'branch' from the center perpendicular or in at least one more direction to the current one (this might also help it look less than a crack)
Draft #50 like that you tried a new approach, nice. we would like to see the logo developed to more readily reflect the energy industry without being cliche. We find the line through the company name somewhat distracting,maybe lightening or something would make it less so.
draft#44
- can we see what the internal swirl on the logo would look like in blue (i.e. the position of the orange swirl in draft#41 becomes a blue swirl in draft#44)
draft#31 and draft#33
- we like the general idea
- we feel the logo (ball) could be developed into a more 3D and unique play on solar power and hydro power with sustainability and energy as background themes
- we feel the logo could also be made more abstract with energy discharge and cutouts etc
- we feel the open lightning bolt might symbolize a division or break to some (could also symbolize a bringing together / developing but we'd rather avoid ambiguity
- we feel the font type and weighting could be improved
- we feel the number of color shades and grades could be reduced to have a simpler and more corporate feel
draft#27
- very cool and polished concept
- looks more like solar energy within the sustainable ball logo
- it would be cool to try working something with water or hydro power into this (without taking away from the simplicity and corporate look)
- we feel that this effort could be useful for branded items and a linear version with the logo by the side would be great for business cards and letterheads etc
draft#29
- cool concept, we really like the use of the electric discharge graphic in the logo ball as per drafts #28 & 29
- we would prefer the electric discharge to be less busy and more defined and pronounced so that in print outs, business cards or grey scale it doesn't look like a flaw
- we like that draft#28 & 29 are similar in concept and feel that draft#28 could be useful for branded items and draft#29 for business cards, correspondence etc (they look like a package)
draft#38
- we like the arrangement for draft#38 and draft#40
- we think the use of the blue in the internal part of the logo as per draft#19 (which used orange for the 'swirl') would be interesting and represent water and hydro power
- we like the fading of the orange to yellow in the 'pawa' but maybe we could lessen the effect so it doesn't wash out in grey scale
draft#23
- like the general arrangement
- like the line between the 'smol pawa' and the tag line as well as the font for the tag line
- we feel the font and color combination for the company name could be improved
- we don't quite get the logo and feel this could be improved as well to provide a clear idea of small and barely contained but powerful, dynamic and useful (electricity, energy etc)
draft#24
- like the overall concept, very cool
- the font and colors for the company name and tag line work very well
- like the solid looking ball and the 'green / sustainable' implications (with some modifications this could also work as a stand alone logo)
- we could maybe try a shadow under the ball to give some idea of depth
- the intent of the lightning bolt through the ball could be improved if we use an actual electrical energy discharge / arc flash graphic instead of the idealized bolt...alternatively we could go abstract on the whole ball and energy discharge thing (we figure having a logo with 'violent' looking electricity contained within a small 3D ball/sphere is what would fit the concept of 'smolpawa'
- would be interesting to see a design with the 'ball' at the side of the text (before or after) as well as the one with the 'ball' behind the text
- as always we are interested in making sure it will look fine in grey scale as well and this effort looks like it could
Ribnica comment on draft 22 was incomplete, please start in a new direction. The logo conveys the idea of sustainability but not quite power and development. Also our original intention was to work around the orange and grey and maybe a third color.
draft#21
- interesting concept
- we like the 'smol' but feel the lightning bolt could be more relevant and representative of an electrical discharge
- we feel the 'pawa' could be improved to be less confusing
- we would prefer the 'energizing development' to be aligned with the 'smol pawa'
- overall we would prefer it to look less flat and more solid / 3dish
draft#19
- we like that it looks somewhat corporate and polished
- the play on the font and character size between the 'smol' and the 'pawa' could be slightly more pronounced for intentional effect
- we like the 3d feel of the logo but think it could be more relevant to an electric power business with an orange (or other suitable color) electric discharge in the grey 3d ball
- the 'energizing development' tagline should / could be centered under the 'smolpawa' text
- we could maybe experiment with the green or a similar color for the text of the tag line 'energizing development' to provide a link to the sustainable theme of the company
draft#18
- we like the general concept
- we like the gradation of colors on the 'smol'
- less shading works especially in grey scale but some element of 3D or volume on the 'smol pawa' might work
- we might want to consider switching the blue in the 'pawa' back to the grey as per draft#9
- we might want to re-align the 'energizing development' with 'pawa' as per draft# 9
- would be great if the logo was more 3d than flat
- it would also be great if the lightning bolt on the logo was more dynamic or looked like an electric discharge
- a 3D sphere or ball with barely contained electrical discharges / lightning might work for the logo
- the green and blue (drafts 12 - 18)don't seem to work and maybe its the shades...we think using a more corporate green for the 'energizing development' might provide the sustainable development theme
draft#9
-the abstract and slick nature...very nice, we like
- the font generally and "o" in "smol" is cool
- there is a possibility the "o" in "smol" could also be developed into a stand alone logo...please look at this...
- the current "o" in "smol" puts us in mind of solar power which is one of our intended focus areas...so that's fine
- we suggest developing a new stand alone logo to be beside the current text and tag line...this could have the energy, sustainability and hydro power themes / colors
- alternatively the top part of the "o" could be modified to represent electricity or hydropower or green energy
draft#7
- interesting start...the positioning makes the "m" and "w" look like megawatts (a unit of electricity)
- the lightning bolt could be positioned better to present more of a stand alone logo
- maybe a third primary color could be experimented with to present a sustainable theme, electricity or hydro power...
- it would be nice if the tagline was included
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Porteur du Projet
Thanks for all the work and your awesome efforts. This will be a challenging decision.
Porteur du Projet
- in addition to last comments
- could you show a variation of the design with a rendering on a black background (the coloured and grey scale versions)
Porteur du Projet
- in addition to last comments
- could you show a variation of the design showing a rendering on a blab background (the coloured and grey scale versions)
Porteur du Projet
- liking this a lot
- the energy graphic currently looks like a crack on the ball and we suggest that the energy discharge should not touch the edges of the sphere
- we also would prefer that the 'energy discharge' graphic within the ball has another 'branch' from the center perpendicular or in at least one more direction to the current one (this might also help it look less than a crack)
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- can we see what the internal swirl on the logo would look like in blue (i.e. the position of the orange swirl in draft#41 becomes a blue swirl in draft#44)
Porteur du Projet
- we like the general idea
- we feel the logo (ball) could be developed into a more 3D and unique play on solar power and hydro power with sustainability and energy as background themes
- we feel the logo could also be made more abstract with energy discharge and cutouts etc
- we feel the open lightning bolt might symbolize a division or break to some (could also symbolize a bringing together / developing but we'd rather avoid ambiguity
- we feel the font type and weighting could be improved
- we feel the number of color shades and grades could be reduced to have a simpler and more corporate feel
Porteur du Projet
- very cool and polished concept
- looks more like solar energy within the sustainable ball logo
- it would be cool to try working something with water or hydro power into this (without taking away from the simplicity and corporate look)
- we feel that this effort could be useful for branded items and a linear version with the logo by the side would be great for business cards and letterheads etc
Porteur du Projet
- cool concept, we really like the use of the electric discharge graphic in the logo ball as per drafts #28 & 29
- we would prefer the electric discharge to be less busy and more defined and pronounced so that in print outs, business cards or grey scale it doesn't look like a flaw
- we like that draft#28 & 29 are similar in concept and feel that draft#28 could be useful for branded items and draft#29 for business cards, correspondence etc (they look like a package)
Porteur du Projet
- we like the arrangement for draft#38 and draft#40
- we think the use of the blue in the internal part of the logo as per draft#19 (which used orange for the 'swirl') would be interesting and represent water and hydro power
- we like the fading of the orange to yellow in the 'pawa' but maybe we could lessen the effect so it doesn't wash out in grey scale
Porteur du Projet
- like the general arrangement
- like the line between the 'smol pawa' and the tag line as well as the font for the tag line
- we feel the font and color combination for the company name could be improved
- we don't quite get the logo and feel this could be improved as well to provide a clear idea of small and barely contained but powerful, dynamic and useful (electricity, energy etc)
Porteur du Projet
- like the overall concept, very cool
- the font and colors for the company name and tag line work very well
- like the solid looking ball and the 'green / sustainable' implications (with some modifications this could also work as a stand alone logo)
- we could maybe try a shadow under the ball to give some idea of depth
- the intent of the lightning bolt through the ball could be improved if we use an actual electrical energy discharge / arc flash graphic instead of the idealized bolt...alternatively we could go abstract on the whole ball and energy discharge thing (we figure having a logo with 'violent' looking electricity contained within a small 3D ball/sphere is what would fit the concept of 'smolpawa'
- would be interesting to see a design with the 'ball' at the side of the text (before or after) as well as the one with the 'ball' behind the text
- as always we are interested in making sure it will look fine in grey scale as well and this effort looks like it could
Porteur du Projet
Porteur du Projet
- we like the shade of blue
Porteur du Projet
- interesting concept
- we like the 'smol' but feel the lightning bolt could be more relevant and representative of an electrical discharge
- we feel the 'pawa' could be improved to be less confusing
- we would prefer the 'energizing development' to be aligned with the 'smol pawa'
- overall we would prefer it to look less flat and more solid / 3dish
Porteur du Projet
- we like that it looks somewhat corporate and polished
- the play on the font and character size between the 'smol' and the 'pawa' could be slightly more pronounced for intentional effect
- we like the 3d feel of the logo but think it could be more relevant to an electric power business with an orange (or other suitable color) electric discharge in the grey 3d ball
- the 'energizing development' tagline should / could be centered under the 'smolpawa' text
- we could maybe experiment with the green or a similar color for the text of the tag line 'energizing development' to provide a link to the sustainable theme of the company
Porteur du Projet
- we like the general concept
- we like the gradation of colors on the 'smol'
- less shading works especially in grey scale but some element of 3D or volume on the 'smol pawa' might work
- we might want to consider switching the blue in the 'pawa' back to the grey as per draft#9
- we might want to re-align the 'energizing development' with 'pawa' as per draft# 9
- would be great if the logo was more 3d than flat
- it would also be great if the lightning bolt on the logo was more dynamic or looked like an electric discharge
- a 3D sphere or ball with barely contained electrical discharges / lightning might work for the logo
- the green and blue (drafts 12 - 18)don't seem to work and maybe its the shades...we think using a more corporate green for the 'energizing development' might provide the sustainable development theme
Porteur du Projet
-the abstract and slick nature...very nice, we like
- the font generally and "o" in "smol" is cool
- there is a possibility the "o" in "smol" could also be developed into a stand alone logo...please look at this...
- the current "o" in "smol" puts us in mind of solar power which is one of our intended focus areas...so that's fine
- we suggest developing a new stand alone logo to be beside the current text and tag line...this could have the energy, sustainability and hydro power themes / colors
- alternatively the top part of the "o" could be modified to represent electricity or hydropower or green energy
Porteur du Projet
- interesting start...the positioning makes the "m" and "w" look like megawatts (a unit of electricity)
- the lightning bolt could be positioned better to present more of a stand alone logo
- maybe a third primary color could be experimented with to present a sustainable theme, electricity or hydro power...
- it would be nice if the tagline was included