15 janvier 2012 07:51 ptpfinance Porteur du Projet
Hello guys and girls,
Love what you've done so far. Some feedback for you:
#2 like the idea, could you try making "24" same size as the text and try a variation with the #F26C4F color.
#4,5 looks great. could you try a variation with horizontally aligning 24 with the text? so it's more of on the same line. i'd like to see other fonts for "PayDay"(better "a") and something that would be distinct and clearly readable from afar.
#9 i like the arrows idea. colors seem to washed out or a bit transparent/white glow? could you please try with the same colors(solid) but without this washed out effect and no gradient on clock please. i'd like to have a look at arrows in #F26C4F.
#15,16 could you try without the top bar? looks too heavy. a variation without gradient text would be great
#20,17 not bad. could you try mixing in #3A89C9 ? would like to see "24" in #3A89C9 as well
#22 i like the giving hand and "pay" idea. could you try with Pay and Day being same size(Day is clearly bigger than PAY). try using #3A89C9 instead of #9CC4E4.
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Porteur du Projet
Love what you've done so far. Some feedback for you:
#2 like the idea, could you try making "24" same size as the text and try a variation with the #F26C4F color.
#4,5 looks great. could you try a variation with horizontally aligning 24 with the text? so it's more of on the same line. i'd like to see other fonts for "PayDay"(better "a") and something that would be distinct and clearly readable from afar.
#9 i like the arrows idea. colors seem to washed out or a bit transparent/white glow? could you please try with the same colors(solid) but without this washed out effect and no gradient on clock please. i'd like to have a look at arrows in #F26C4F.
#15,16 could you try without the top bar? looks too heavy. a variation without gradient text would be great
#20,17 not bad. could you try mixing in #3A89C9 ? would like to see "24" in #3A89C9 as well
#22 i like the giving hand and "pay" idea. could you try with Pay and Day being same size(Day is clearly bigger than PAY). try using #3A89C9 instead of #9CC4E4.
Thanks!