Entry #24 has more realistic water. The work is improved from the previous design. To be honest, the design would benefit from changing the font, and by integrating the text and water splashes. That could create a very strong contestant!
Your designs # 26 and #25 are unique! I like the color work you have done. Could you please try different fonts (the one chosen is also good) and somehow improve the readability of "XL" (especially the "L")!?
All in all: It's a strong entry that I would like to see completed! Well done, good luck!
Your entries #30 - 27 are all great designs! I especially like the color combination of blue and orange (#29) or the one that's in just plain blue (#30).
The arrows symbolize trade/shipping/delivery and gives indication of what the company does. This is one of the things mentioned on the list earlier!
Points of improvement: the arrows look too sharp and aggressive. Rounder shape and more positive vibe to them could create a strong logo!
Thanks for your contribution once again! Your design #23 could work. However, at the moment the water splashing does not look sufficiently realistic... just a point for improvement.
EVERYONE: PLEASE TRY TO INCLUDE SOMETHING THAT HINTS TO OUR SERVICE. FOR EXAMPLE:
1. SOCIAL MEDIA (speech bubble, hand, connections, etc.)
2. TRADE (shopping cart, shipping, international, etc.)
3. BAY (water, splash, raindrops, etc.)
4. PERSONALIZED / CUSTOMER ORIENTED
5. EVERYTHING YOU CAN IMAGINE, WE HAVE
I discussed the logos with my colleagues, and we think your logo #1 has a lot of potential. It does need some adjustments though, if it's going to win the competition.
Could you please try changing the color into blue and try it with a different font? This might make a big difference.
I like your design #16!!! I'm a little confused by the wheels on top of the bubble. Eliminating them would bring clarity and significantly improve your design.
I really like your contribution #22! Great work, I'll keep my eyes open for your designs. Please feel free to add more! Your design is currently one of my favourites!
I like your most recent post! It's also what I asked for. Our business idea builds on the fact that we are going to connect social media to our online store. The design could have some element of social media in it.
The logo could consist of only the darker blue you used. Please also try a more standard font, to create trustworthiness in our business.
Thanks again for your contributions! It's not quite what we are looking for though. It's difficult to communicate design ideas. That's why let's take a different approach. Let's focus on Web 2.0 type design: simple, elegant, easy to read, similar to facebook, Skype, YouTube, one color (blue), good finish, attention to detail.
I hope you are not offended by these comments, it's just to help you win the competition. Wishing you the best of luck!
Thanks for your contribution, I really like your design! Here's some hints for improvement:
(i) In order to better illustrate a bay, perhaps the "water" could have mainly nuances of blue in it. Since it's an online business, a colorful scheme could also suit (e.g., Google, eBay);
(ii) The logo for sure appeals to the younger generation < 25 yrs, but it should ideally also be appealing to older shoppers. The main point is that it should communicate trustworthiness;
(iii) Ideally the text should be formed of the splash, similar to the image I uploaded;
(iv) The entire word "bay" could be typed in same size font (including the "b"), whereas, as you have done correctly, have the XL stand out with capital letters.
Again, thanks for your contribution, really like it!
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Entry #24 has more realistic water. The work is improved from the previous design. To be honest, the design would benefit from changing the font, and by integrating the text and water splashes. That could create a very strong contestant!
Thanks again! Best of luck!
Porteur du Projet
Your designs # 26 and #25 are unique! I like the color work you have done. Could you please try different fonts (the one chosen is also good) and somehow improve the readability of "XL" (especially the "L")!?
All in all: It's a strong entry that I would like to see completed! Well done, good luck!
Porteur du Projet
Your entries #30 - 27 are all great designs! I especially like the color combination of blue and orange (#29) or the one that's in just plain blue (#30).
The arrows symbolize trade/shipping/delivery and gives indication of what the company does. This is one of the things mentioned on the list earlier!
Points of improvement: the arrows look too sharp and aggressive. Rounder shape and more positive vibe to them could create a strong logo!
I like your ideas and contributions, well done!
Porteur du Projet
Thanks for your contribution once again! Your design #23 could work. However, at the moment the water splashing does not look sufficiently realistic... just a point for improvement.
Porteur du Projet
One more thing: are you able to add an element of e.g., social media into the design (speech bubble, hand), shopping (cart, shipping), etc.?
The scale of the color blue you use is ideal. I'm wondering how the shading works on a dark/black background...
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1. SOCIAL MEDIA (speech bubble, hand, connections, etc.)
2. TRADE (shopping cart, shipping, international, etc.)
3. BAY (water, splash, raindrops, etc.)
4. PERSONALIZED / CUSTOMER ORIENTED
5. EVERYTHING YOU CAN IMAGINE, WE HAVE
Porteur du Projet
I discussed the logos with my colleagues, and we think your logo #1 has a lot of potential. It does need some adjustments though, if it's going to win the competition.
Could you please try changing the color into blue and try it with a different font? This might make a big difference.
Porteur du Projet
I like your design #16!!! I'm a little confused by the wheels on top of the bubble. Eliminating them would bring clarity and significantly improve your design.
Porteur du Projet
I really liked your entry #19!!! How would it look in different fonts?
Porteur du Projet
what would your logo look like on a dark/black background? I would be interested to see that...
Porteur du Projet
I really like your contribution #22! Great work, I'll keep my eyes open for your designs. Please feel free to add more! Your design is currently one of my favourites!
Porteur du Projet
I like your most recent post! It's also what I asked for. Our business idea builds on the fact that we are going to connect social media to our online store. The design could have some element of social media in it.
The logo could consist of only the darker blue you used. Please also try a more standard font, to create trustworthiness in our business.
Great work once again, thanks!
Porteur du Projet
I like the design and it's exactly what I asked for. Only problem I see with it, is that it's too close to the logo of an internet telephone company.
If you are able to take some ideas of that and create something of your own, then this design will be hot!
Porteur du Projet
I hope you are not offended by these comments, it's just to help you win the competition. Wishing you the best of luck!
Porteur du Projet
Thanks for your contribution, I really like your design! Here's some hints for improvement:
(i) In order to better illustrate a bay, perhaps the "water" could have mainly nuances of blue in it. Since it's an online business, a colorful scheme could also suit (e.g., Google, eBay);
(ii) The logo for sure appeals to the younger generation < 25 yrs, but it should ideally also be appealing to older shoppers. The main point is that it should communicate trustworthiness;
(iii) Ideally the text should be formed of the splash, similar to the image I uploaded;
(iv) The entire word "bay" could be typed in same size font (including the "b"), whereas, as you have done correctly, have the XL stand out with capital letters.
Again, thanks for your contribution, really like it!