Just wanted to say thank you to those of you who worked on this project, particularly ultimatedesign and niexZ for their repeated revisions, and work to move the brief forward.
Very very very close decision, either of the final designs would have worked well for my business, and one that took a few days - thanks for your patience.
Last set of revisions are the icing on the cake. Really nice work both of you. I like both of these designs for very different reasons.
Right now it is a tough call between the two... not sure if we will see anyone else come in at this stage but I am working on my final thoughts and feedback to you both.
Thanks for all of your hard work. Lots of great improvements made to all of the logos - appreciate you taking on my comments and working them into the designs.
I have done a ranking and huge elimination to focus on the designs I like best from all of the logos, and to make it easier for me to compare them. Elimination doesn't mean they are bad - just that better revisions or designs are present.
comments again:
niezX - #52 best of the ones you have shown me. I like the revised main logo and the little icon contained within. I think I would prefer the "Meonshore" NOT to have a reflection.
Could you also remove the two small lines to the lower left hand side of the parents icon - I think it might be better with a bit of space there. Have you been able to find an office block/factory type logo similar to the parents & child that might work for my commercial business ?
Please could I see variants for text to the right hand side of the logo and on a white background.
ultimatedesign - really like the enhanced look of the square logo in #48 and #50. Again please could I see a white background variant. Otherwise please focus any further revisions on developing/enhancing the logo shown in #48 and #50.
studio10 - I'm not getting the linkage from your current logo with my business the same way I do with niezX and ultimatedesign - hence the eliminations. Sorry.
Great new submissions and revisions - thanks for all your hard work ! I think I'm seeing some really good logos that will work for my business, and hope to see some more over the coming few days.
So feedback:
for niexZ.... draft#19 is my favourite of your revisions. Please can you base any revisions from that one. I'd like to see a variation on my grey/brown website backdrop if possible. I'm not looking for a graduated backdrop or blue backdrop as it won't work on my site.
Also if you could source an outline icon (more graphic, less pictorial) for the baby rather than the one you have it might work a little better. As I said this would be one version for my newborn photography, I'll be looking to add one for a family icon and one for business so something outline/simple will make it easier to get others sourced.
If I could see #33 like that as well (icon on the other side) as well
for Studio10 .... really like this first draft #27 - love the web 2.0/3D feel to it. Is it possible to make the cyan more like the blue on my existing site logo please, and take a look at the font used in #30 ? and see of the centre would be made more "wave like"
for ultimatedesign ... thank you - great drafts can you use the font in #30 for future revisions for me please - particularly #31 and #32 which are excellent.
draft#15 happiest with the main logo so far. I do prefer your font and colour from draft#6 (but without the graphic in the O's)
would like to see still more abstract/less dominant waves if possible - which might allow for an icon to appear in the space (newborn/family/office building) to represent the sub-type of service.
For some refinement of direction - if you could all focus on web 2.0 and abstract designs rather than initials please. I'm most happy with those designs.
draft#9 - looking for something more sophisticated/complex - sorry.
draft#6, #7, #8 like the font as before. I think on reflection the O needs to remain as text and not a graphic. The actual logo - again not keen on the M/face - I'm really looking for something that says shoreline, or waves with a much harder/stronger graphic. I don't need an M representation.
For early feedback. I prefer the fonts in draft#3 (although don't rule out using others - not keen on the font used for Meonshore in the other drafts).
I prefer the main logo in draft#2 and draft#1, although I'm not sure if the waves/people are obvious enough and if I was to have anything in the O of Meonshore that represents water then it would need to be the second one - in "shore".
I like the text placement and two variants though.
For clarity (and as I am a first time user so didn't appreciate this) I have a project for some stationery (booked as a package) as well which I will launch once I have a logo designed - to best focus on the design of the stationery.
I thought they might be combined so that I got logo/stationery designs presented but see in the control panel this isn't the case.
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Porteur du Projet
Very very very close decision, either of the final designs would have worked well for my business, and one that took a few days - thanks for your patience.
Good luck to both finalists.
Porteur du Projet
Right now it is a tough call between the two... not sure if we will see anyone else come in at this stage but I am working on my final thoughts and feedback to you both.
I have only a small designer .. far from perfect work.
happy to know you here ...
thank men...
from indonesia with love...
really happy ultimate design has the support of the best friends ...
peace..:)
Porteur du Projet
I have done a ranking and huge elimination to focus on the designs I like best from all of the logos, and to make it easier for me to compare them. Elimination doesn't mean they are bad - just that better revisions or designs are present.
comments again:
niezX - #52 best of the ones you have shown me. I like the revised main logo and the little icon contained within. I think I would prefer the "Meonshore" NOT to have a reflection.
Could you also remove the two small lines to the lower left hand side of the parents icon - I think it might be better with a bit of space there. Have you been able to find an office block/factory type logo similar to the parents & child that might work for my commercial business ?
Please could I see variants for text to the right hand side of the logo and on a white background.
ultimatedesign - really like the enhanced look of the square logo in #48 and #50. Again please could I see a white background variant. Otherwise please focus any further revisions on developing/enhancing the logo shown in #48 and #50.
studio10 - I'm not getting the linkage from your current logo with my business the same way I do with niezX and ultimatedesign - hence the eliminations. Sorry.
Porteur du Projet
So feedback:
for niexZ.... draft#19 is my favourite of your revisions. Please can you base any revisions from that one. I'd like to see a variation on my grey/brown website backdrop if possible. I'm not looking for a graduated backdrop or blue backdrop as it won't work on my site.
Also if you could source an outline icon (more graphic, less pictorial) for the baby rather than the one you have it might work a little better. As I said this would be one version for my newborn photography, I'll be looking to add one for a family icon and one for business so something outline/simple will make it easier to get others sourced.
If I could see #33 like that as well (icon on the other side) as well
for Studio10 .... really like this first draft #27 - love the web 2.0/3D feel to it. Is it possible to make the cyan more like the blue on my existing site logo please, and take a look at the font used in #30 ? and see of the centre would be made more "wave like"
for ultimatedesign ... thank you - great drafts can you use the font in #30 for future revisions for me please - particularly #31 and #32 which are excellent.
Porteur du Projet
draft#15 happiest with the main logo so far. I do prefer your font and colour from draft#6 (but without the graphic in the O's)
would like to see still more abstract/less dominant waves if possible - which might allow for an icon to appear in the space (newborn/family/office building) to represent the sub-type of service.
For some refinement of direction - if you could all focus on web 2.0 and abstract designs rather than initials please. I'm most happy with those designs.
Porteur du Projet
draft#6, #7, #8 like the font as before. I think on reflection the O needs to remain as text and not a graphic. The actual logo - again not keen on the M/face - I'm really looking for something that says shoreline, or waves with a much harder/stronger graphic. I don't need an M representation.
Porteur du Projet
For early feedback. I prefer the fonts in draft#3 (although don't rule out using others - not keen on the font used for Meonshore in the other drafts).
I prefer the main logo in draft#2 and draft#1, although I'm not sure if the waves/people are obvious enough and if I was to have anything in the O of Meonshore that represents water then it would need to be the second one - in "shore".
I like the text placement and two variants though.
Porteur du Projet
Also if it is possible to have the logo presented on a transparent background so I can use as a watermark on images this would be appreciated as well.
Looking forward to seeing some drafts.
Porteur du Projet
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Porteur du Projet
I thought they might be combined so that I got logo/stationery designs presented but see in the control panel this isn't the case.