#38 - I know what it is. The original width of the top part of the banner is fine, it's the curved under part that are the issue. Fix that and we're good to go!
#38 -- You are the winner basically. All I need to see is a few different width banner versions with the text still readable. Everything else is PERFECT. Very awesome work!
You've all made great entries -- this was a hard decision.
#38 - Can you trim a bit more of the banner from each side? And can you make the banner a little more straight on instead of the tilted up angle? Not all the way, I don't think, just a bit.
#17 and #18 - Intelligent is misspelled ;) As for the rifles, I think maybe the angle needs to be narrower -- like somewhere between where they were before and where they are now.
I like the font in #18 better. Maybe a couple variations of fonts and rifle positions -- but so far I like it!
#16 - I prefer the stars to be white. Can you make the rifles Black? And maybe not overlap the rifles as much. And a little more bottom whitespace in the banner. I think this is on the right track.
#13 - much better - If you can make DB a little smaller and My Gun a bit bigger, it might work better. Maybe the text be mostly white.
Maybe some red and white trim instead of all gray trim? Like if the inner shield trim and stars were white, and some red elsewhere. Or if the banner was Red, white and blue.
I like the fade in the text from #11 instead of the black currently in #13.
#8, #9, #10, #11 - The banner is not easy to read, like say #1 is. I'd like to see them with DB being more on the same Line and My Gun being larger -- I don't want the focus to just be on DB. I do like the color schemes, though if you're putting Red and Blue together, it should have some White in it too.
#7 - I don't like the fonts for the text. Also not sure why there is a D in the middle?
#1, #5 -- I don't like the style of rifles. Also not sure what that is inside the D on both. I dont' like the banner on either, but it's the right idea. I do like the shape of the shield.
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You've all made great entries -- this was a hard decision.
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#24 & #25 - could I see those two with rifles lower like #27 & #28 have?
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I like the font in #18 better. Maybe a couple variations of fonts and rifle positions -- but so far I like it!
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And Black rifles, white stars.
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http://www.15thinfantry.org/images/15_crossed_rifles.jpg
Just the angle of them.
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Maybe some red and white trim instead of all gray trim? Like if the inner shield trim and stars were white, and some red elsewhere. Or if the banner was Red, white and blue.
I like the fade in the text from #11 instead of the black currently in #13.
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#7 - I don't like the fonts for the text. Also not sure why there is a D in the middle?
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I also noticed those two have the rifles flipped -- the bulge should be under it, not over it.
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