For the envelope: Please refrain from designs that stem from the edges of the envelopes as the printers won't be able to accomplish that. There would probably be a white line before the edge and it would look bad. So kindly revise that design. Otherwise i like the overall look and feel of it. Oh and please add "If undelivered please return to:" before the address.
Bizcard: I actually prefer the gradient effect on the name like in #15. Is there a way to do it where if i open up the illustrator file and add more names myself the effect still stays? Other than that, i like the back alot. As for the front, i think you may have misunderstood - I would like the full logo to be visible (as in the wheel and the text, like on the letterhead). It definitely has to be somewhere in the card, you know what i mean. So i was hoping to see that and the url on the front - but done in a unique and creative way hopefully.
akreationz: Thx for the prompt revision. Your letterhead is perfect. Your envelope size is still wrong tho. The envelope is C4 size (324mm x 229mm).
As for the namecard, I really like the back of #15. Two things about the back tho; will the use of gradient in the font for the name make it difficult for me to add in new names myself in illustrator? And another, i think the text below is too light. Might not be readable when printed so kinda make it a little darker shade. Other than that, I'm very happy with the back. Please do give me a draft without rounded corners tho.
Since the back has the enlarged wheel, kinda revise the front to include my full logo as well as the url. Once you get that right i think it'll be perfect. Thx.
Great job with the initial drafts folks. My comments are as follows:
#7: Your design is way too bright for my liking and it doesn't reflect the seriousness of the nature of our business.
akreationz: Your letterhead is great. Maybe just reduce the size of the wheel watermark on the bottom right slightly. You've got the envelope size wrong. Kindly revise that. As for the name card, I really like the back of #9 while the front with only the url isn't doing it for me. I would prefer the front of #8 because i definitely want both the wheel and the url to be there (however, i do think #8 needs a little more work). Looking forward to see what your next draft looks like :)
#12: I like your design. But could you please load a bigger image for the biz card? Also, I don't quite fancy the green to grey bar on the side of your envelope/letterhead. Maybe a gradual gradient would work better?
Thanks. I look forward to finalizing this soon as it is quite an urgent project.
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For the envelope: Please refrain from designs that stem from the edges of the envelopes as the printers won't be able to accomplish that. There would probably be a white line before the edge and it would look bad. So kindly revise that design. Otherwise i like the overall look and feel of it. Oh and please add "If undelivered please return to:" before the address.
Bizcard: I actually prefer the gradient effect on the name like in #15. Is there a way to do it where if i open up the illustrator file and add more names myself the effect still stays? Other than that, i like the back alot. As for the front, i think you may have misunderstood - I would like the full logo to be visible (as in the wheel and the text, like on the letterhead). It definitely has to be somewhere in the card, you know what i mean. So i was hoping to see that and the url on the front - but done in a unique and creative way hopefully.
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As for the namecard, I really like the back of #15. Two things about the back tho; will the use of gradient in the font for the name make it difficult for me to add in new names myself in illustrator? And another, i think the text below is too light. Might not be readable when printed so kinda make it a little darker shade. Other than that, I'm very happy with the back. Please do give me a draft without rounded corners tho.
Since the back has the enlarged wheel, kinda revise the front to include my full logo as well as the url. Once you get that right i think it'll be perfect. Thx.
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#7: Your design is way too bright for my liking and it doesn't reflect the seriousness of the nature of our business.
akreationz: Your letterhead is great. Maybe just reduce the size of the wheel watermark on the bottom right slightly. You've got the envelope size wrong. Kindly revise that. As for the name card, I really like the back of #9 while the front with only the url isn't doing it for me. I would prefer the front of #8 because i definitely want both the wheel and the url to be there (however, i do think #8 needs a little more work). Looking forward to see what your next draft looks like :)
#12: I like your design. But could you please load a bigger image for the biz card? Also, I don't quite fancy the green to grey bar on the side of your envelope/letterhead. Maybe a gradual gradient would work better?
Thanks. I look forward to finalizing this soon as it is quite an urgent project.
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Name should be: Marcus Chen
Title should be: Sales Director
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Biz cards - 90mm by 40mm
Envelope - C4 size (324mm x 229mm)
Letterhead - Standard A4