The "S" now looks much better, but you missed the point about the dots on top of the notes (the J's). Please stick to the notes design in #25, just make sure that the vertical bars are the same thickness and that the dots above the J's are symmetrically aligned, and you may want to shape these dots above the J's to be similar to the oval blobs at the bottom of the notes, but a bit smaller.
Also, make the font of the words "music is life" the same as the 'ine' in Sine.
If you look at the horizontal line, which is the extension of the "S" in both directions, the left line through the notes is slightly higher than the right going through the "ine". Please ensure that this horizontal line is at the same level on both sides of the "S".
Lastly, we like the shape and length of the "S" in this #29, however, please could you add two or three options where you can 'squeeze' the "S" a bit, i.e. make the 'waves' a bit more acute, just for comparison.
*the slight fade works well.
*the right hand side dot above the higher note seems a little to the left of the stem of the note. align it so that the stem points to the dot, just as the left dot does.
#21, You are getting closer, but still lacking in in definition. Taking your que from the web-site (still under construction), I have placed a very crude hand drawing on the site to give you an idea of what we are thinking. I have also place a picture of a pair of grouped 8th notes; take note of the clean lines.
As a matter of interest, the idea on the website will be that the kids faces widget will be replaced with the Logo and the words "Music Production" next to it...
Thanks for all the contributions to date. Thus far we like #7 & #8 with the concept of the musical notes representing the "JJ" in front of "Sine". #7, please could you elaborate on;
1) The "JJ" theme - The notes looks a bit 'cheap', please stay with an authentic as possible look. Also, could you change the square dots to round dots
2) Simplify the font for the word "Sine", to something like Arial Black, but don't limit yourself to this font. You can drop the "S" 90 degrees clockwise (so that it lies on its side), mimiking a sine wave, and you can play with a few options, e.g.
2.1) In addition to tilting the "S" on it's side, lets also look at what it looks like if you place the "S" over the "JJ", etc.
2.2) Isolate the "JJ" and the "S" so that it could form an 'icon' for letterhetds (continuation pages, etc.)
2.3) Maybe place a wavy background behind the "JJ" and "S" like in #13
3) Stretch the words "Music is Life" to the length of the word "S
MycroBurst permits you to submit unlimited designs with unlimited variations. However, if you are providing 2 or 3 different color versions of the same logo in one draft, please make sure that if the particular draft gets finalized, each color version should be separated before you will send the final files.
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Porteur du Projet
Porteur du Projet
The "S" now looks much better, but you missed the point about the dots on top of the notes (the J's). Please stick to the notes design in #25, just make sure that the vertical bars are the same thickness and that the dots above the J's are symmetrically aligned, and you may want to shape these dots above the J's to be similar to the oval blobs at the bottom of the notes, but a bit smaller.
Also, make the font of the words "music is life" the same as the 'ine' in Sine.
If you look at the horizontal line, which is the extension of the "S" in both directions, the left line through the notes is slightly higher than the right going through the "ine". Please ensure that this horizontal line is at the same level on both sides of the "S".
Lastly, we like the shape and length of the "S" in this #29, however, please could you add two or three options where you can 'squeeze' the "S" a bit, i.e. make the 'waves' a bit more acute, just for comparison.
Porteur du Projet
1)I like the smooth transition of the first instance of the left hand side of the "S" (Sine), do the same on the right hand side for symetry.
2) the realistic 8th notes are looking much better.
3) Give me a few more options relating to #25.
*the slight fade works well.
*the right hand side dot above the higher note seems a little to the left of the stem of the note. align it so that the stem points to the dot, just as the left dot does.
Nice work so far.
Porteur du Projet
As a matter of interest, the idea on the website will be that the kids faces widget will be replaced with the Logo and the words "Music Production" next to it...
www.jjsine.com
Best of luck with round 3
Porteur du Projet
1) The "JJ" theme - The notes looks a bit 'cheap', please stay with an authentic as possible look. Also, could you change the square dots to round dots
2) Simplify the font for the word "Sine", to something like Arial Black, but don't limit yourself to this font. You can drop the "S" 90 degrees clockwise (so that it lies on its side), mimiking a sine wave, and you can play with a few options, e.g.
2.1) In addition to tilting the "S" on it's side, lets also look at what it looks like if you place the "S" over the "JJ", etc.
2.2) Isolate the "JJ" and the "S" so that it could form an 'icon' for letterhetds (continuation pages, etc.)
2.3) Maybe place a wavy background behind the "JJ" and "S" like in #13
3) Stretch the words "Music is Life" to the length of the word "S
4) Get rid of the grey background
Looking exciting so far.
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MycroBurst permits you to submit unlimited designs with unlimited variations. However, if you are providing 2 or 3 different color versions of the same logo in one draft, please make sure that if the particular draft gets finalized, each color version should be separated before you will send the final files.
Thanks,
MB/LDG/LS Team