I LOVE the way the handle of the sword dips down right between the tops of the "M" of #48, but that particular sword and lettering are NOT what we are looking for.
Our meeting is in 2 hours and we need this by then! The lettering is great, the flames are much better, please just put the sword ABOVE the letters, prefer to see the handle dip between the inside of the "M" . We really want to see this done!! Thank you!
#34 and #36 need the correct 4-word slogan in black and a little larger. LOVE the lettering on #44 but it still looks like a light saber, maybe the line down the sword would help give it better dimension? The hilt on #38 is too long, but my heart won't let me eliminate this one yet. Our staff is having a meeting tomorrow at 8am to make our final decision. PLEASE make these last changes asap. What an awesome process.
Great job - almost there. #27 needs fewer flames and less red, and please put the four word slogan in black. #19 needs the four word slogan in black also. #20 and #21 are awesome, but they look more like a light saber than a sword. If it were possible to make the sword look like "red hot" from the tip moving down, that might work. I appreciate the stronger letters, but the font must be sans seref. Looking forward to a strong finish!
#6 and #8 - can we see what it would like with the sword laying on its side (pointing to the right) and the flame still going up? I am thinking of the sword through the letters (MJFB) and the flame coming from the M.
"Forging a New Sword"
I like overall design #7 the best. Please edit the slogan to simply say: Forging a New Sword. The sword handles are a little too long. I miss the shading in the letters. Like the size of the letters much better. Like the darker oranges, maybe a little less red though. Loved the shape of the flame in #6 but the colors weren't strong enough and the handle was too short.
I love the flames - they are clean and bright - with great color. I love the letters left silver but would prefer them gray and gradiated. I would also really like to see the sword pointing up not down. The Sword itself has too many details, I would prefer it simpler with the straight handle. Thank you for your help.
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NEED ASAP
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The positioning of that sword in #48 IS PERFECT.
we are going to make our decision within the hour
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This contest has been opened for 1 more day for final revisions.
Zach.
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"Forging a New Sword"
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