Hi, Thank you for your feedback.
Can you further explain the changes you want to see?
I am no sure I understood.
Let me know.
Thanks,
x3mart
24 septembre 2011 12:46 dustbyrn Porteur du Projet
#25 is great! Let's use the gradients from the blue one with the wing details from the gray one. I'd like it in both colors (blue and gray) again, if that's OK.
23 septembre 2011 11:49 dustbyrn Porteur du Projet
#14 through #19 - First let me say how much we appreciate all the revisions. I'm 100% sure we can find something that works.
The gears and the screw heads aren't working. I do however like the detailing on the wings of #16, #17, #18, and #19. #5 and #6 are still my favorites. So... everything I've suggested hasn't worked out and everything you've done on your own looks great. I should trust you more.
Here's what I'd like to try: Take #5 or #6 (that's the shape we like best, use whatever gradients you think look best). Turn it 45 degrees like #10 (that eliminates the issue of it looking like a spade). Add some wing details like in #18 and #19 (that should take care of making it look more mechanical).
Finally, let's ditch the red. We'd like to see it in a blue of your choosing and also in all gray.
Thanks again!
23 septembre 2011 11:29 dustbyrn Porteur du Projet
#24 - Very clever and subtle, but i don't think we'll end up going in this direction.
23 septembre 2011 11:27 dustbyrn Porteur du Projet
23 septembre 2011 11:27 dustbyrn Porteur du Projet
#20 and 21 - Creative, but not really what we're looking for.
22 septembre 2011 14:07 dustbyrn Porteur du Projet
#12 is a little too cartoon-like. It would be a great icon for a children's product though.
22 septembre 2011 13:38 dustbyrn Porteur du Projet
#11 - Still not working for me. Now I'm seeing an airplane. #5 is still my favorite. Maybe a different branch from there? Maybe the wings somehow incorporate a gear instead of the abdomen.
22 septembre 2011 12:44 dustbyrn Porteur du Projet
#9 and #10 - I like the gear and the rivets, but I think we lost some of the bee-like features in the process. The body of the bee looks shorter and wider which makes it look more like a smile than a bee abdomen.
Also, the placement of the rivets makes them look like nipples on boobs, or eyes on a smiling face, so we might have to rethink those.
22 septembre 2011 10:42 dustbyrn Porteur du Projet
#5 and #6 have a lot of potential. I like that it's geometric without being too abstract. The incorporation of the M and the B is a nice touch, though certainly not required. We would love to see a little more mechanicalness to the design. Perhaps the suggestion of rivets or gears or a wind-up handle.
The bee icon itself looks little like a spade or club from a deck of cards, which is not ideal. We don't want people to think we're a casino. Less spade-like would be better.
We would also love to see if you could do a version of this design that was a side view of a bee.
We like the text layout and typeface of #5 better than #6. I like the typeface a lot, but my partner finds it a little too sharp and pointy, so maybe that's something we could play with.
We also really appreciate seeing the icon in different sizes/b&w.
22 septembre 2011 10:18 dustbyrn Porteur du Projet
#7 is still too abstract. #4 we like. The roundness and the circles are great. You can tell it's a bee, however there's nothing in it that makes you think it's "mechanical". We'd like to see some mechanicalness to the bee icon.
22 septembre 2011 10:11 dustbyrn Porteur du Projet
#8 - We appreciate the try at using the face of the bee, but the head on view is a tough one to pull off. Also, a bee coming at you is pretty agressive.
21 septembre 2011 11:17 dustbyrn Porteur du Projet
#1 is not quite what we're looking for. I see where you're going with the bee icon but we want something less abstract.
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Can you further explain the changes you want to see?
I am no sure I understood.
Let me know.
Thanks,
x3mart
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Very happy with the way this is turing out!
uploading..
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The gears and the screw heads aren't working. I do however like the detailing on the wings of #16, #17, #18, and #19. #5 and #6 are still my favorites. So... everything I've suggested hasn't worked out and everything you've done on your own looks great. I should trust you more.
Here's what I'd like to try: Take #5 or #6 (that's the shape we like best, use whatever gradients you think look best). Turn it 45 degrees like #10 (that eliminates the issue of it looking like a spade). Add some wing details like in #18 and #19 (that should take care of making it look more mechanical).
Finally, let's ditch the red. We'd like to see it in a blue of your choosing and also in all gray.
Thanks again!
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Also, the placement of the rivets makes them look like nipples on boobs, or eyes on a smiling face, so we might have to rethink those.
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The bee icon itself looks little like a spade or club from a deck of cards, which is not ideal. We don't want people to think we're a casino. Less spade-like would be better.
We would also love to see if you could do a version of this design that was a side view of a bee.
We like the text layout and typeface of #5 better than #6. I like the typeface a lot, but my partner finds it a little too sharp and pointy, so maybe that's something we could play with.
We also really appreciate seeing the icon in different sizes/b&w.
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