As you can see my design #15 concept was to put the weights on the side of the words, and some other designers started doing the same, moving the words up or down in between the weights. Some designer even started putting the kettle bell over the "i" just as I did also.
hey creativdesignz are you sure for waht you are claiming??? pls make a review on the draft if who is the first designer submit that concept check #76 although it was elimated but i am the first.. dont claim bro...
the point is even i am eliminated i haveother option to revise my draft.. and you made the revise with the concept of my draft... common bro....
creativdesignz >>> I most definitely understand your frustration but i would just like to clear up that i was not trying to "copy" your idea in fact if you look at my original submission #89 i was trying to avoid copying. But then if u read the comment from right below your post you will see that my newest revision was just simply following instructions from the project holder.
Having looked at it further, im not sure it works to well. Its hard to identify the word 'Skill' because of the heavy cut-aways. Maybe try another approach?
11 décembre 2010 09:11 SkillFitness Porteur du Projet
I think we can lose the .co.uk bit. Also i think the fitness word should be in another colour. I am not entirely sure about the figure either, perhaps you can try what some others have done in relation to a dumbell or perhaps using a kettlebell to dot the 'i'. I am also worried about the first 'l' in 'skill', when the logo is quite small its hard to identify it.
9 décembre 2010 11:28 SkillFitness Porteur du Projet
I am not feeling 13. In 14 i like the graphic at the back and on 15 i like what you have done with the 'i', the font im not too fond of as it looks a bit too playful.
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just wait for actions....
the point is even i am eliminated i haveother option to revise my draft.. and you made the revise with the concept of my draft... common bro....
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Could you put the 'Skill' above the bar and 'Fitness' below, could you also change the colour of 'Fitness'.
Thank you
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Please can you remove the kettle bell from the image and work with it a bit more.
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Could you give him the single dumbell as that looks more like an i, and also keep him the same colour as the text.
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Having looked at it further, im not sure it works to well. Its hard to identify the word 'Skill' because of the heavy cut-aways. Maybe try another approach?
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Do you think you could change the figure into a more manly position? The pose you've used isnt really done.
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Im not sure that dumbell is working right now, it looks too much like an 'l' and is cutting the 'n' short, can you work with it a bit.
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I like your style. Can you try a less curvy font and capitalize the S and F.
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Could you try making the figure slightly smaller so its not sticking out the top so much.
Also could you try adding in the dumbell end from #56 into it.
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It looks like the guy is about to break into song. Could you put a dumbell bar across his hands and maybe make him a bit smaller.
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Could you try to put the kettlebell to dot the first 'i' and then maybe use the cross of the 't' in fitness to show a dumbell.
Or else you are free to try and incorporate a dumbell however you see fit.
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I like this, although im not entirely sure of the curve on the i, perhaps you could play around with it a bit?
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I think we can lose the .co.uk bit. Also i think the fitness word should be in another colour. I am not entirely sure about the figure either, perhaps you can try what some others have done in relation to a dumbell or perhaps using a kettlebell to dot the 'i'. I am also worried about the first 'l' in 'skill', when the logo is quite small its hard to identify it.
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I dont think has the completeness of being a logo, it merely looks like the text and the graphic next to it.
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I think this has started out quite well, could you try to add the fitness word directly after and play with that a bit?
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I am not feeling 13. In 14 i like the graphic at the back and on 15 i like what you have done with the 'i', the font im not too fond of as it looks a bit too playful.
Could you try something a bit more horizontal?