I like #9, but the -n- sticking out is bothering me. I like the way the S's in Safe, Sound, and Storage line up at a diagonal, and I would like to keep that part. What if you change the angle of that slope to be a little more steep (move top two lines of text toward the lock)which would mean the top line would move slightly more left than the middle line. This should allow you to bring the last hyphen back in line with the D on the right side.
On draft #9 the hyphenated -n- looks like it is hanging out there to the right. I like the balance of the left side, but that -n-, or at least the trailing hyphen needs tucked somewhere.
Also, in general, please submit a design where the text is in relief (lighter colored) in case we use this design later on a lighted sign.
I like the style of #9. Consider replacing the lock with the safe from #17. I'm not sure if you can work the green color into #9 without making it too dark, but if you have ideas I'd like to see them.
Drafts #1 and #2 are very nice, and certainly are in the style I am after. Consider adding a draft that includes an antique safe if you can think of a way to make it work.
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Also, in general, please submit a design where the text is in relief (lighter colored) in case we use this design later on a lighted sign.
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I like what I'm seeing so far. The safe looks good.
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