#29 - I like your creativity. The use of black is heavy and you might consider making it lighter. Also, the logo is still too abstract. The overall look doesn't look crisp or sharp. I would drop the reflection.
#27 - I like your direction, but play around with the "R" a bit more. I also would try a version where the "R" in the company name is in the same font as the rest of the word instead of the font of the logo.
#18 - Clean design. Thanks for that. However, the logo is a bit too corporate in its feeling. We're looking for something a bit more "fun" or "cool".
#16-#17 - See my previous note #19-#24 - The type face you've chosen for the company name seem very common. Also, as stated before the use of arrows and the abstract "R" is not what we're looking for.
#15 - See my original brief. I'd like to stay away from any reference to the standard connotations of "refresh" arrows.
#14 - Better than the previous version, but now please experiment with different treatments. Maybe you make it a box outline instead of filled in. Or maybe try a circle or perhaps embossing the "r" in the box or debossing it.
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#10 - Interesting. I don't love the font you used for the "R" in the box, but the design is worth iterating on.
#3 - Also interesting. The "r" is too small within the box. Keep iterating.
#4 - Let's keep the symbols out of the main company name. Also, I'd like to stay away from abstract symbols if possible.
#5-#9 - Same as #4. The "R" symbol you have is too abstract. A non-native english speaker who sees that wouldn't immediately see that as an "R". Also if you make the symbol "R" and you place it to the left of the word "Refresh" then you have two "R"s next to each other. You might need to place the symbol above the company name.
#11-#13 - Great efforts, but the symbol and treatment you've done on the "R" is not very memorable and has to many curves. I'm a big fan of Apple or Squareup.com. Also, having two different styles across the logo and the company name makes it seem too busy.
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I've been sending my comments through private messages now, so please keep the ideas flowing. I'm seeing some great ideas and expect more to come!
Cheers!
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#16-#17 - See my previous note
#19-#24 - The type face you've chosen for the company name seem very common. Also, as stated before the use of arrows and the abstract "R" is not what we're looking for.
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#14 - Better than the previous version, but now please experiment with different treatments. Maybe you make it a box outline instead of filled in. Or maybe try a circle or perhaps embossing the "r" in the box or debossing it.
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#3 - Also interesting. The "r" is too small within the box. Keep iterating.
#4 - Let's keep the symbols out of the main company name. Also, I'd like to stay away from abstract symbols if possible.
#5-#9 - Same as #4. The "R" symbol you have is too abstract. A non-native english speaker who sees that wouldn't immediately see that as an "R". Also if you make the symbol "R" and you place it to the left of the word "Refresh" then you have two "R"s next to each other. You might need to place the symbol above the company name.
#11-#13 - Great efforts, but the symbol and treatment you've done on the "R" is not very memorable and has to many curves. I'm a big fan of Apple or Squareup.com. Also, having two different styles across the logo and the company name makes it seem too busy.